The Legendary Sage of Konoha 4

[Michael92]

LOL i know it. that why.

i dont like it if the hokage said tsunade hehe no offense (or Flame) i just wanted to read like in the present manga and animei something like grandma or old hag... something that XD

Yeahxd Somebody mentioned that on one of the 3 first chapters, but as i told him, i could have had the Hokage calling her Granny or whatever, but i believe he`s a little more grown up than going around calling her thatxd

I could have said Gondaime or 5th, but It`s easier to just say Tsunade considering the fact that peoples could mix the dialouges and become unsure of who said what if i had it for example like this:

5th Hokage: ...

6th Hokage: ...

 

[Gin-Sama]

alright. wish hinata will go to the fight LOL

waiting for the next chapter and goodluck

 

[Michael92]

alright. wish hinata will go to the fight LOL

waiting for the next chapter and goodluck

Thanks Not sure if i need the luck, but thanks anyway
Well it would be hard for her to battle when she just gave birthxd

 

[Gin-Sama]

Thanks Not sure if i need the luck, but thanks anyway
Well it would be hard for her to battle when she just gave birthxd

you know what i mean hinata VS. naruto

 

[Xentinel]

Well, its Awesome man! It seems that chapter 5 is going to filled with some action xd

 

[Michael92]

you know what i mean hinata VS. naruto

Ehmmm... What fight exactly, you don`t mean...?xd

Well, its Awesome man! It seems that chapter 5 is going to filled with some action xd

Ah there you are, glad you would comment
Well yeah most likely

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Hmmn, did Jiraiya got the Byakugan eyes or did the baby sister (Kushina) got it? That's probably something we'd have to look up to, too?

 

[Christyan]

Great job m8

 

[Michael92]

Hmmn, did Jiraiya got the Byakugan eyes or did the baby sister (Kushina) got it? That's probably something we'd have to look up to, too?

xd I actually completly forgot about that So glad you reminded me, so that i can include that as well into my upcoming chapters

Well i know exactly which one of them whom it fits perfect too, if not both of them

If i could, i would rep you for reminding me, but unfortunatly, I`ll have to spread some rep before giving it to you again:-/

Great job m8

Thanks for following my FF since the very start, appriciate it I`ll notify you when the next chapter is out

 

[Kaziname]

Good job man. Although I don't like Lee + Sakura thing chapter is still great. Can't wait for the next chapter...

 

[Ita Unmei]

omg omg omg! awsome!!!! x3its like so cool!! God i love reading this ^o^ Nice done :3

 

[-Ace-]

Cool I bet the next one will be awesome.

 

[Michael92]

Good job man. Although I don't like Lee + Sakura thing chapter is still great. Can't wait for the next chapter...

Hehe Yeah hope you will read it as well at Friday

omg omg omg! awsome!!!! x3its like so cool!! God i love reading this ^o^ Nice done :3

Thank you so much Glad you liked it

Cool I bet the next one will be awesome.

I sure do hope so

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

A nice and surprising chapter at that! So Hinata is Naruto’s wife okay-well, well…I was thinking maybe Karin, etc. but you went this path..I see. Then Hinata has another baby (shocker!!!). They have been pretty busy haven’t they Lee/Sakura have a son and you decided to add Yamato into the mix which is a phenomenal choice ^.^ However, ShikamaruxTemari is simply horrendous in my opinion (no offense) just seeing as I like his character and would have hoped for him to be with Shiho instead
-_- Even more horrifying is that they have a child together T_T (which bonds them for life). Although, Kishi has hinted to this coupling as well as NarutoxHinata so I suppose you were trying to honor that or you simply like those pairings which happened to apparently be Kishi’s lol

I loved how you portrayed the Hokage meeting/continued incorporating Sai ^.^ Naruto will be teaching his son the Rasengan a technique in which has been passed down I believe more than any other lol Following chapter will be grand I’m sure seeing as it will be action packed and also with the fact that it is called "Valley of the End" says to me maybe Sasuke may be involved? (I hope so anyways lol).​

 

[Michael92]

A nice and surprising chapter at that! So Hinata is Naruto’s wife okay-well, well…I was thinking maybe Karin, etc. but you went this path..I see. Then Hinata has another baby (shocker!!!). They have been pretty busy haven’t they Lee/Sakura have a son and you decided to add Yamato into the mix which is a phenomenal choice ^.^ However, ShikamaruxTemari is simply horrendous in my opinion (no offense) just seeing as I like his character and would have hoped for him to be with Shiho instead
-_- Even more horrifying is that they have a child together T_T (which bonds them for life). Although, Kishi has hinted to this coupling as well as NarutoxHinata so I suppose you were trying to honor that or you simply like those pairings which happened to apparently be Kishi’s lol

I loved how you portrayed the Hokage meeting/continued incorporating Sai ^.^ Naruto will be teaching his son the Rasengan a technique in which has been passed down I believe more than any other lol Following chapter will be grand I’m sure seeing as it will be action packed and also with the fact that it is called "Valley of the End" says to me maybe Sasuke may be involved? (I hope so anyways lol).​

xd You sure doesn`t like pairings do you?xd

Well Hinata is the Hokage`s wife, but during the next chapter or chapter 6 you will finally get it confirmed wheter or not it`s him(Naruto)xd I guess it`s rather obvious thou

Yeah, can`t let good old Yamato get let out Even Shikaku and Kurenai(btw i also mentioned that Kurenai and Asuma`s kid became a girl/women for those really interested) are mentioned

Well it has been 16 years and most of the "Konoha eleven(Sai in, Sasuke out)" just had to be married, have a girlfriend/boyfriend and/or kids. Would be kinda lame if none of them didn`txdU_U I mean, the generation must be brought on.

I`m even planning something for peoples like Kakashi, Gai and so forth but haven`t decided on that yet.

Anyway, about Shikamaru/Temari. The main reason was among other because of the idea og Konoha and Suna being closer togetter, like it was between Kingdoms of old times too with the Daughter/sister of the leader of one country/Kingdom/Empire be married with some from the other country/Kingdom/Empire.

So it felt kinda right to have them if any. Hope you understand that fact

Well I can reveal that next chapter will mostly consist of a flashback revealing Akatsuki`s downfall 12 years ago, so stay tuned for it

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

xd You sure doesn`t like pairings do you?xd

Well Hinata is the Hokage`s wife, but during the next chapter or chapter 6 you will finally get it confirmed wheter or not it`s him(Naruto)xd I guess it`s rather obvious thou

Yeah, can`t let good old Yamato get let out Even Shikaku and Kurenai(btw i also mentioned that Kurenai and Asuma`s kid became a girl/women for those really interested) are mentioned

Well it has been 16 years and most of the "Konoha eleven(Sai in, Sasuke out)" just had to be married, have a girlfriend/boyfriend and/or kids. Would be kinda lame if none of them didn`txdU_U I mean, the generation must be brought on.

I`m even planning something for peoples like Kakashi, Gai and so forth but haven`t decided on that yet.

Anyway, about Shikamaru/Temari. The main reason was among other because of the idea og Konoha and Suna being closer togetter, like it was between Kingdoms of old times too with the Daughter/sister of the leader of one country/Kingdom/Empire be married with some from the other country/Kingdom/Empire.

So it felt kinda right to have them if any. Hope you understand that fact

Well I can reveal that next chapter will mostly consist of a flashback revealing Akatsuki`s downfall 12 years ago, so stay tuned for it

Well, where the pairings stand I am a bit picky if you haven’t noticed XD You know what-you are correct as the Hokage’s identity has not yet been revealed but I suppose I got carried away, gomen for getting way ahead of myself -_- Yeah I forgot to include the fact that you included Shikaku/Kurenai and her child which happens to be a girl-nice. No, you did excellent with having everyone mature to their levels with having children/wives/husbands of their own (even if some of the pairings make me writhe in pain lol) I would like to know about Kakashi but Gai-he in my opinion is a meh character lol I completely understand what you mean by Shikamaru/Temari’s pairing and believe it or not when you put it into that perspective I can at least acknowledge them as a couple. That will be an epic/interesting read next chapter ​

 

[Michael92]

Well, where the pairings stand I am a bit picky if you haven’t noticed XD You know what-you are correct as the Hokage’s identity has not yet been revealed but I suppose I got carried away, gomen for getting way ahead of myself -_- Yeah I forgot to include the fact that you included Shikaku/Kurenai and her child which happens to be a girl-nice. No, you did excellent with having everyone mature to their levels with having children/wives/husbands of their own (even if some of the pairings make me writhe in pain lol) I would like to know about Kakashi but Gai-he in my opinion is a meh character lol I completely understand what you mean by Shikamaru/Temari’s pairing and believe it or not when you put it into that perspective I can at least acknowledge them as a couple. That will be an epic/interesting read next chapter ​

Yeah i did noticexd
You`re not the only one I`ve already spoiled it in the comment field in chapter 3 for those who can`t waitxd

Must say that I`m looking forward to write the 4 next chapters indeed Sasuke, Akatsuki`s "downfall", Rokudaime Hokage, The Kage meeting and so forth

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Yeah i did noticexd
You`re not the only one I`ve already spoiled it in the comment field in chapter 3 for those who can`t waitxd

Must say that I`m looking forward to write the 4 next chapters indeed Sasuke, Akatsuki`s "downfall", Rokudaime Hokage, The Kage meeting and so forth

Oh-well then I suppose I do not feel that bad lol That looks like an incredible lineup of storylines you have planned (can’t wait!!! ^.^).​

 

[Michael92]

Oh-well then I suppose I do not feel that bad lol That looks like an incredible lineup of storylines you have planned (can’t wait!!! ^.^).​

Well Friday is next schedule, so I better start writting soon Tomorrow i guess is a great time for it

 

[Anbu578]

Nice again you have done well my friend