Different
- Thread starter Smirk
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Jazzy Stardust
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hmm, your style has changed a lot since your last music posting. not that you had a bunch of style, i remember you experimenting mostly but i liked your flows and tone in the last "unmixed" tracks you posted. i also thought you were gonna release a project around now..
the music is labeled wrong though, definitely not ambient at all or even adding to that genre. if someone was an ambient fan looking for new ambient music and they heard this, it probably wouldnt appeal to them. its just RnB its also not very different for RnB, i mean most RnB songs after the 90's are about ***, your song is also about *** as well with a slow backing track like most in the genre. its decent sounding yeah but youre not really adding anything to the art form stylistically different or new
also im not seeing how this is a freestyle, its not rap. thats really the only genre were you get credit for vocal freestyling because of the speed of processing the words. just singing over a beat without being too detailed is apart of soul, punk and jazz vocalizing
i dont really know how serious you are but you should try working on finishing more songs, it will only help you be more creative. every song ive heard from you is unfinished, its always like a little snippet or a verse. should be more movement with a conclusion, not necessarily on the EQ side of things but in the actual arrangement of the song. a lot of people can make a good or even really good section of music, the point is to make multiple good sections and have them move between each other beautifully
the music is labeled wrong though, definitely not ambient at all or even adding to that genre. if someone was an ambient fan looking for new ambient music and they heard this, it probably wouldnt appeal to them. its just RnB its also not very different for RnB, i mean most RnB songs after the 90's are about ***, your song is also about *** as well with a slow backing track like most in the genre. its decent sounding yeah but youre not really adding anything to the art form stylistically different or new
also im not seeing how this is a freestyle, its not rap. thats really the only genre were you get credit for vocal freestyling because of the speed of processing the words. just singing over a beat without being too detailed is apart of soul, punk and jazz vocalizing
i dont really know how serious you are but you should try working on finishing more songs, it will only help you be more creative. every song ive heard from you is unfinished, its always like a little snippet or a verse. should be more movement with a conclusion, not necessarily on the EQ side of things but in the actual arrangement of the song. a lot of people can make a good or even really good section of music, the point is to make multiple good sections and have them move between each other beautifully
Smirk
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Ayee I appreciate the listen and the pov, i do have other songs that aren't snippets [I was looking to put out some sort of project by now, should have] but those im getting completely polished. lmaoo i use soundcloud as a creative playground and by "Different", i meant for me
It started off as a freestyle, its a short song but most of it wasn't written[what i meant by "freestyle"]
truuue x), its labeled ambient because of the reverb
I appreciate that you took the time to write some feedback[and that you actually listen]! next song i post will be with a video, most likely the video to this ^^
