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This isn't relevant and the bold to no extent makes sense. The opener sets the context for the subject of the article, which is Naruto's dream, but it doesn't hold the entire article to one time period.However; nothing in that excerpt dictates Naruto achieved the said accomplishments when he swore a great dream to his comrades because the context for the trailing statements specifically sets that he was in the process of making that dream into a reality. We know the context is not when he swore a great dream to his comrades because the article specifically states that is what he did when Team 7 was formed.
The opener is literally no different to "Hashirama & Madara were once called legendary shinobi."(even though that isn't even the start of his article)
That is an event that already happened in the past. For some reason though it dictates the entire time period of Madara's entry, but not Naruto's?
We know that Naruto "swearing his dream" and "making it reality" isn't in the same time period because of the language used and nothing more, which means that the time period for an entire article isn't determined by it's opening sentence. That isn't a literary rule of any kind. You simply made it up.
"When Team 7 was formed, he swore a great dream to his comrades. Now, he was in the process of making it a reality."
The article sets a time period for the opener, which is Naruto swearing a dream when Team 7 was formed. In the next sentence, the language itself changes in order to reference a time period in the future.
"That strength is the power (to control) life or death…Together with Senju Hashirama, they were called 「Legendary Shinobi」. The strongest man of the Uchiha Clan is Madara."
The opener starts off by saying that Madara's strength is the power to control life or death, referring to it in present context. The article then builds on his power hype by referring to the fact that him and Hashirama were called legendary shinobi.
The context then jumps to the present stating that Madara is the strongest man of the Uchiha clan.
The article sticks to present tense while talking about his Perfect Susano'o, then after that, the language changes entirely to past tense for the rest of the article since it's actually talking about his past, just like every single article in the databook that references past events.
Madara's isn't the magic exception.
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