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Bruh, that is straight garbage. Not only the beat for the most part but also your flow and lyrics, everything needs to be reworked. Also you put Chicago native as a tag but I doubt you have even lived through anything even worth talking about.
:wesobi: I'm done with people posting their own music on this site especially since it always sucks.
Bruh you need to fuck out of here with that negative bullshit. Real talk. First off, you judging bruh, and you don't even know him, talking about how he hasn't lived a day in Chi-Town, or been through the struggle how tf do you know bruh? Deadass how? Swear I hate when fuck nigguhs like you pop off, especially on people trying to do positive shit in their lives.
The beat is actually lit, lets get that straight first off. Idk what kind of shit you listen to smh. The flow obviously needed improvement, and his lyrics no doubt needed improvement as well. But that'll get better in time.
Let me see you put up anything half as good, and I'll never log on NB again. Word is bond.
@OP Keep doing you fam, shit was lit. You have ways to go, but your ceiling is sky high.
Thanks for the actual criticism bro I 'havent been in the studio for a minute so Im a bit rusty. check out my last song on soundcloud for some better. I just wanted to put out a simple freestyle over a beat to see where Im at. Imma work on flow and lyrics as well. these lyrics arent my best lol appreciate it bro
