[Raiton] Agnes learns how to shock her foes with Detective L

[Cabbage]

"... I presume that he was the person sent flying by my friend Edea..."

*Agnes sighs before continuing.*

"Well, he was the person here earlier, taking over for me while I was taking a short break... that lasted for about half a year. Sorry about that by the way."

*Agnes twiddles her thumbs for a moment before refocusing herself again, Edea still comically struggling to get up.*

"Anyways, may I ask what jutsu we're currently on?"

 

[Detective L]

"Uh, last I remember, we were covering False Darkness and Kirin.."

Dean says, as he was quite confused but now it seemed like he and Agnes would actually get to the end soon. A shame really, she was exciting.

 

[Cabbage]

"Oh yeah, now we're covering the Chidori thunderbolt jutsu and then the stronger white Chidori jutsu. My apologies about that Dean-sensei. Um... the first jutsu has too much risk for most situations in which one may find themselves in to ever trulyt use this jutsu. I mean, False Spear of Darkness does nearly the same effect, except with a smaller scale and lesser damage potential, but honestly, it matters little, given that a successful strike with that jutsu will still most likely kill most shinobi out there. Also, unlike this one, it possesses no capability to backfire, thus making it better for the swiftly changing conditions of most shinobi fights. As for the other jutsu... it's merely a more powerful Chidori... not much more I can say about that... I really don't have much to say about either of these jutsu..."

 

[Detective L]

"Good job, moving on."

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.

"Alright, now this technique is quite powerful. Cover your hands with Lightning, basically with Chidori in each hand. You will then clap your hands together and unleash a massive amount of Lightning chakra, in the form of a thunderbolt. This is directed towards the opponent, and is best used from a height advantage. Don't use this in close range of yourself, or you'll be hurt too."

Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

"An enhanced form of Chidori, done the same way as the original. However, this one is white in color, and does more damage of course. Pretty simple, if you understand the concept of the original technique."

 

[Cabbage]

We've covered this jutsu with the Thunderclap one though

 

[Detective L]

"OOh, shit, seems like I have had waay too much to drink. Plus, this has been quite the session. Please excuse that, Agnes. We'll move on."

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.

"Since you now know how Raikiri works, you will utilize your Lightning based chakra to cover both your hands with it. However, this one, you will dash towards the opponent and deliver a strike to them with your hands charged with this powerful Lightning technique. This unleashes all that power into the opponent, and causes quite some damage. However, it only works in short range, so it happens quite fast, however, it leaves you vulnerable to Water based attacks."

Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

"This is a more smart use of the Lightning element, where you will form four hand seals, and release a massive amount of Lightning based chakra from your body. In doing so, you will create a blinding light that emanates from your entire body, blinding the opponent with it and also, allows you to cast a Genjutsu real fast, whilst the opponent is blinded. The perfect combination, making it difficult for the opponent to deduce that they have been caught in a Genjutsu.

What can you tell me about these two spectacular techniques?"

Dean asked, his face a bit red from embarrassing himself earlier.

 

[Cabbage]

*Agnes giggles as Dean blushes over his mistake.*

Funny, he can be as hard on himself as I can... kind of cute actually.

"I wouldn't call the first a necessarily great jutsu to be honest. Yes, it covers both hands now... but it's still mostly the same Rakiri, which was already a more powerful Chidori, if just slightly easier to utilize. So yeah... not much to say again, just be careful of using this close to a water source, or near a shinobi whom happens to spam utilize water jutsus and this makes a decent move in a close range scenario.

Now, the other jutsu is far more interesting, as I spoke about this with Ayane-sensei {Reborn} before. Essentially, this jutsu was originally utilized as a genjutsu of sorts it seems, as it seems to used to work as more of an inducing agent. However, in this scroll here, it states that it's more utilized as a distracting agent rather than an inducing agent, and also only works with a genjutsu A-Rank or below. However, there is an interesting element here. In the description, it states that the light produced from this jutsu appears to emanate all over the user's body. The word appears here seems to cloud whether one can use this jutsu as a genjutsu counter though, is it a full body surge?"

 

[Detective L]

"A question raised before. From what I remember, the answer was no. I'll be sure to check through my old dusty scrolls to maks sure. Anyway, good job."

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.

"Now, for this technique, you will channel Lightning chakra to a single hand and cover it with a massive Chidori. You will point your palm forwards, unleashing that chakra and creating a forward 120 degree blast, whoch spreads from your hand, forwards. Pretty simple, yet deadly in execution."

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short (Mid range connection)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This technique requires the user to firstly create a shadow clone. Then, each of them will activate the Lightning Cutter on opposite hands to one another. Connecting the two techniques together, forming a chain of sorts, they are then able to use the resulting beam to slice through objects with great ease.
Note: Must first have a shadow clone in the field.

"Now a technique which has to be done with a shadow clone. After having formed the clone, both you and the clone will activate Lightning Cutter on opposite hands, creating a chain of Lightning between them. This chain of Lightning can cut through objects and well, people as well. "

 

[Cabbage]

*Agnes smiles as Dean attempts to answer her question, clasping her hands together in front of her, fingers pointing upwards.*

"I eagerly await the results of your searching Dean-sensei." *Agnes says this as she tilts her head blatantly to the left while squirming slightly.*

I'm almost done with Raiton! I'm amazed Dean-sensei has been this patient with me, with me getting injured constantly, getting lost consistently, leaving for months at a time, even sending in a random person I met once to cover some fo this training for me, much less also dealing with Edea for a bit. I truly am amazed by his generosity. For that matter, I'm amazed by all my senseis... though I wonder...

*Agnes then begins to stop her squirming.*

Is this generosity only for the sake of a neutral training or is it truly dependable? After all, everyone who has trained me is a truly competent shinobi, yet that alone implies that they'd be willing to ignore emotional connections for the sake of accomplishing the mission... but I... but I still can't... no matter how hard I have tried... I still can't. I don't think I've ever even won a fight, much less installed fear into any person. Still... I wonder why I'm truly here right now, is it out of necessity? Out of fear of being powerless? I... I don't know...

*Agnes sits down on top of a nearby tree stump, it now being surrounding by countless scrolls in varying conditions, all haphazardly tossed throughout the midst of her training. She looks up Dean, giving a pensive look.*

"If I may..."

*Agnes stops herself for a moment.*

Wait... didn't I think of this before... yes, it was during the Wave of Inspiration jutsu, the clone punched me and I passed out for some time... I remember Dean-sensei's look of worry at that time... I wonder, if it came to the act, would he do so with at least some regret... some worry? He mention a painful childhood... I wonder, who are these shinobi ultimately? Are they as honorable as they seem here? Hm...

*Agnes then gives Dean a slight smile.*

Still, Dean-sensei has shown much concern for me, and even if it were only for the training, I should be grateful for this, and for his generosity with his time, and his tolerance of my continual idiocies. I ought to thank him, perhaps even buy him his gin...

*Agnes giggles at this as she stands back up, and initiates her slight squirm again.*

"We're so close to the finish line Dean-sensei! I just had to take a momentary breather from my excitement, so please excuse the momentary silence on my part. Now, the first jutsu you explained seems to be a wide-spreading electrical shock, similar to numerous other jutsu such as the Raging Thunder and Wave of Inspiration. However, this jutsu is incredibly easy to use, just cover the hand of choice with Chidori, and then release it by showing your palm in the direction towards which you want to send the chakra before releasing said chakra into a massive, unfocused blast of electricity. Its incredible power and range offers numerous advantages, including paralysis towards opponents struck with this jutsu... if I'm not mistaken with this anyways, wide ranging defensive applications towards most jutsus, keeping in mind that wide ranging fuuton jutsus will cancel this one out, as well as an easy to use cover to hide your own movements as this jutsu should hide your actions with a decent amount of efficiency, and lastly will act as an excellent guard against opponent's advancements, better than most jutsus actually. Really, this is another jutsu that blatantly better in most ways than most weaker tier jutsu, as it doesn't require handseals like the Wave of Inspiration, nor is it limited in range like the Raging Thunder jutsu. Best of all, one can create numerous combinations from this jutsu because of its ease of use, thus allowing one creativity with this jutsu. Truly one of the better jutsus I've covered in this training... even if it's ultimately not that creative..."

"The next jutsu, meanwhile, is more creative... but worst off, ironically, because of it. One first needs to create a clone, sadly one of the shadow clone variety, and then both clone and creator activate a Lightning Cutter within their hands. Already numerous logistical difficulties arrive from just this point of preparation. Firstly, the fact that this jutsu requires a clone for usage is, in itself, problematic, as the moment the clone is created, it's immediately vulnerable to any number of attacks and isn't capable of taking too much damage before it disappears. Furthermore, as this jutsu requires both of the Lightning Cutters to connect, thus forming the beam of lightning that gives this jutsu its namesake, the side of the clone and user that isn't connected to the jutsu is immediately vulnerably to counter attacks. Because this jutsu requires a constant stream of chakra in order to continue the jutsu, the user cannot divert this chakra to cover their weak points lest they end this jutsu. Thus, this forces the user to go forward with the jutsu, hence allowing the opponent ample time to counter it. Worst part is, this jutsu doesn't release from the user, but instead the user needs to move with the jutsu for it to take effect. Think of it as a tight wire that connects between the user and clone... and you get an illustration of its usage. It cannot be sent off away from the users, but instead the user needs to run into the obstacle for this jutsu to take effect. Thus, this jutsu leaves the user incredibly vulnerably to... really anything. Thus, this one, unlike the last jutsu, is quite meh. Not a fan I'm afraid..."

*Agnes sighs before sitting down onto the stump again, continuing her smile.*

"I believe we're now onto the last jutsu, are we not?"

 

[Detective L]

I swear Agnes, you are one of my original students when I started teaching and definitely one of the best ones. Nonetheless, you are correct. Now for the last technique."

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

"Now for this technique, you will dash towards the opponent, Chidori in hand. You will strike the opponent, and use shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a Lightning Spear which propels the opponent into the air. You then increase the potency of the Lightning at the tip of the spear, generating an electrical explosion and damaging the opponent. Pretty simple."

 

[Cabbage]

*Agnes immediately develops an immense blush as she hears Dean's compliment.*

Am I really that worthy of such a compliment? I mean, I caused so much worry, so much grief, probably an immense amount of annoyance... surely the Panthalassa person Dean-sensei mentioned earlier must be a better student than I... but I'm not sure... perhaps I should stop reading into things so much here. Yes, I must be more confident in myself... perhaps that's the true point of these trainings, becoming confident in my own capacities and capabilities. I mean, in every battle I've had with Kirito-san, I've always seen that confidence... still, the vestal mother has always mentioned that I was the humble one of the bunch... maybe I can be both. Yes, that sounds good with me. Now, for this final jutsu.

"This final jutsu is essentially a stronger variation of the Chidori Sharp Spear jutsu I've discussed earlier. Both of these jutsus create a spear from an earlier created Chidori that's capable of reaching about 10 meters in length to attack the opponent... but it's here that the similarities end. For starters, this jutsu is more meant for penetration, meaning that the only proper motions of attack with this jutsu are more forward motions... or stabbing motions. Meanwhile, the Chidori Sharp Spear jutsu allows to more numerous slashing motions with more efficiency given its sharper edges... not to say that one can't slash with the new jutsu, of course, but it's clearly designed for stabbing motions, and its secondary effect depends upon the stab connecting anyways. This leads to an interesting point about this new jutsu... the only way for the explosion to work with this jutsu is if the stab connects with the opponent. Knowing how opponents fight in our world, this will rarely, if ever, happen, meaning that one can't depend upon this part of the jutsu to ever really manner. Hence, this jutsu is merely a long, strong lightning spear in its essence. It even lacks the capability of breaking up into numerous smaller pieces, like the Chidori Sharp Spear can do. Thus, a single focused attack can destroy this jutsu, and leave the user vulnerable. All in all, a kind of lackluster way to end this training. However, may I ask you one question before we end this training?"

 

[Detective L]

Dean looks at Agnes, how much she's grown through out this training. Although its taken a while, she finally mastered Lightning. A smile crossed Dean's face as he looked at her, innocent still. A lot awaited her, but first, she had something she wanted to ask him. With a nod, he obliged.

"Sure, Agnes. What's up?"

 

[Cabbage]

*Agnes smiles as she sits down on the stump, taking out a bottle of gin from her pouch, purchased while she was away for a while.*

"I have this bottle of gin here... but it's a bit strong for me, I can hardly finish even a drink... you want some? It's quite good I'd imagine, if it didn't light my throat on fire..."

 

[Detective L]

Dean rubs the back of his neck. It seemed to be quite a good bottle of Gin, one he'd definitely enjoy drinking or perhaps drink a bit, and keep the bottle as a memento. He wouldn't tell Agnes this, but Dean had a small scroll where different memento's were sealed into, from weapons to odd objects.

"Well, thank you, Agnes. Its highly appreciated."

Dean says, smiling.

 

[Cabbage]

OOC: I don't where I'm going with the RP anymore, thus I'll end it here. Thank you for the training, especially for dealing with my frivolous tangents and my numerous bouts of inactivity, hopefully this wasn't too painful for you, as I rather enjoyed this training .

 

[Detective L]

OOC: I don't where I'm going with the RP anymore, thus I'll end it here. Thank you for the training, especially for dealing with my frivolous tangents and my numerous bouts of inactivity, hopefully this wasn't too painful for you, as I rather enjoyed this training .

No problem, you were one of my original students that I took when I became a Trial Sensei and now that you're done I feel so old. You have mastered Lightning.