[Suiton] Finishing Suiton and Starting Futon

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No worries.


"Not bad, nice way of showcasing the techniques."


Rank: A
Type: Offensive,Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.



"Now in this technique, you will form the Ram hand seal, and manipulate your Water based chakra. This allows you to release a large amount of Water from your mouth, covering a large area, which creates waves. This water can then be formed around the opponent in the shape of an orb, instead of just creating the waves. Pretty useful. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.


Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram and by manipulating a pre-existing water source and transforms it into a giant wolf-like beast. The beast can launch powerful streams of water from its mouth equivilant to B rank, or sweep the area with its claws to let a powerful torrent of water to wash away the enemies.
Note: The Water Beast remains active for three turns



"In this technique, you will form the four hand seals, and manipulate a pre-existing source of Water. This allows you to form it into a giant wolf like beast. This beast is sentient, and can launch streams of Water from its mouth, B rank in power, or it can sweep the area with its claws to release a torrent of Water to blast away the opponent. The beast remains active for up to three turns if not destroyed. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.
I think it would be for the best to combo these things so I will do it.

He focuses chakra into his mouth while he inhales deeply before performing the ram handseal. Once done he tilts his body forward while exhaling the chakra in the form of water that transforms into waves immediately after hitting the ground that heads towards both clones at a relatively fast speed. Just before the waves would crash down onto the clones he crosses his arms causing the wave to wrap around the clones causing a large orb of water to form around the clones keeping them off the ground so that they cannot get a footing to move or counter the move.

Once done he moves on to the second part of the combo by focusing chakra into his right foot while he performs the needed handseals for the second technique. Upon finishing the handseals he stomps his right foot sending his chakra into the water below. After manipulating his chakra in the energized water a wolf that looks similar to his ninken slowly rises from the water before running towards the trapped clones location where it proceeds to go on a rampage making the clones poof on contact after ever sweep of his claws.


What I just did is how I would use both of these techniques.

The first technique's advantages are that it has two variations that can damage and the second is that it doesn't require a water source.

The disadvantages is that it requires hand seals although a single one it's still preparations that must be done and the second one is that a earth technique of B-rank could defend against it.

The second technique's advantages is that it has a extensive long range and the second is that it last for 3 turns and can use techniques or simply block a technique for me while I still have 3 techniques I can use that turn.

The disadvantages is that it has a relatively long string of hand seals needed to perform this jutsu and the second is that it requires a water source to create this beast.


Undoes the second water technique after pointing to it for his last statement.
 

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"Good, nice usage."


Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Using their skills with Water Release, the user generates a powerful vortex of water around their enemy with a swing of their arm that sends them flying upwards and then dispels it with another hand gesture. (Requires a water source).
Note: Tobirama and Mei terumi can perform this without a water source.



"Now this technique requires a Water source. Whilst the opponent is standing on Water, you will swing your arm upwards and cause a vortex to form around the opponent and hit them into the air. With another hand gesture, the technique is dispelled. Pretty bad ass, use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clones that runs towards Lucifer.


Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A technique in which chakra is kneaded in the user's body, transformed into water and then shaped into senbon in the mouth before finally being expelled at a high velocity. The needles are shot in an attempt to catch the enemy off guard, while also aiming at their vitals.



"A simple technique where you will manipulate your Water based chakra in your body, and then shape it into senbon in your mouth. This can then be shot towards the opponent at high speeds, and be aimed to strike vitals. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.
 

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"Good, nice usage."


Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Using their skills with Water Release, the user generates a powerful vortex of water around their enemy with a swing of their arm that sends them flying upwards and then dispels it with another hand gesture. (Requires a water source).
Note: Tobirama and Mei terumi can perform this without a water source.



"Now this technique requires a Water source. Whilst the opponent is standing on Water, you will swing your arm upwards and cause a vortex to form around the opponent and hit them into the air. With another hand gesture, the technique is dispelled. Pretty bad ass, use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clones that runs towards Lucifer.


Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A technique in which chakra is kneaded in the user's body, transformed into water and then shaped into senbon in the mouth before finally being expelled at a high velocity. The needles are shot in an attempt to catch the enemy off guard, while also aiming at their vitals.



"A simple technique where you will manipulate your Water based chakra in your body, and then shape it into senbon in your mouth. This can then be shot towards the opponent at high speeds, and be aimed to strike vitals. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.
The advantages of this technique is that it has no preparation before hand as well as it can disrupt any move done by the opponent allowing a quick counter or the ability to affect their aim.

The disadvantages is that it requires a water source and that it doesn't have a built in finisher, by that I mean it allows you to combine moves while they are in the air but that's it.

I would use this if the opponent is charging at me or if they are using a move that requires them to aim at me as well as takes most of their concentration.


Following the explanation he charges chakra into his right hand while he crouches down to touch the water's surface. After this is done he discharges the chakra into the water before raising his right arm while standing up causing the chakra in the water below the clones feet to rise rapidly launching the clone high into the air spinning before falling down onto the water's surface poofing instantly due to the way he fell the liquid would feel as if it was concrete.

Despite it's relatively good range I would only use this move in close quarters combat since it could be used to catch the opponent off guard with ease unless they have dojutsu.

The advantages is that it doesn't require hand seals as well as it can be launched at a fast speed.

The disadvantages is that it isn't easily combined with other techniques in the same turn nor can it reach long range.


As the clone approaches Lucifer inhales deeply as if performing futon whilst he focuses chakra into his mouth before needing the chakra to form several thin sharp senbon ready to be launched. After finishing the inhale and actual creation of the technique he faces towards the clone before exhaling the air along with the needles causing them to be launched at a fast speed with one aimed at the dip between his eyebrows, another at his heart, with the remaining aimed at his limbs. The clone didn't notice in time and as such all the senbon pierce at once sending the clone backwards due to the force before poofing shortly.
 

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"Great job, now onto the S ranks."


Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 70
Damage points: 120
Description: The user will clap his hands and slam them on the ground, streaming an incredibly rapid stream of water through it, creating a large pool of water beneath the opponent to form, that gushes upwards in a burst, lifting the opponent high into the air. The user does the Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat hand seals after his opponent is mid air, using the water pool to shoot up to 8 small water bullets, designed to further raise the opponent into the air, disorient him and damage him. The water bullets gather above the opponent after hitting and passing through his position and form into a water dragon which then attacks the target, grabbing it in its jaws and forcefully bringing it crashing into the ground. The dragon comes down from above the target, bites the target and coils down, towards the ground, crushing the target between the ground and the now incredible mass of falling water. Tobirama Senju does this technique with his own specific hand seals, similar to how he does some other water techniques. Despite long and seemingly complex, the technique is quite fast to perform and trigger.
Note: Can only be used by Water Primary Specialists.
Note: Can only be used twice.



"A very powerful technique which can only be used by Water Specialists. Clap your hands together and slam them onto the ground, creating a pool of Water beneath the opponent. This blasts the opponent into the air, where you will then form the hand seals, and cause the Water beneath the opponent to form into 8 bullets of water, which blasts up and disorients the opponent. These water bullets form above the opponent, and forms into a dragon. The dragon then blasts down, gaping jaws and slams the opponent into the ground. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.


Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After doing the Tiger hand seal, the user will quickly exhale a very thin stream of pressurized water that will be able to cut even rock. The most noteworthy feature of the technique is how fast the stream is and how sharp it can be. By moving his head, the user can alter the jet's cutting path, creating longer cuts or affecting bigger targets.



"After that, a technique where you will form the Tiger hand seal and focus Water based chakra to release a very thin stream of pressurized water, which can cut through rock and can be used to cut through multiple targets as you hold the hand seal and adjust your head. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.
 

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"Great job, now onto the S ranks."


Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 70
Damage points: 120
Description: The user will clap his hands and slam them on the ground, streaming an incredibly rapid stream of water through it, creating a large pool of water beneath the opponent to form, that gushes upwards in a burst, lifting the opponent high into the air. The user does the Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat hand seals after his opponent is mid air, using the water pool to shoot up to 8 small water bullets, designed to further raise the opponent into the air, disorient him and damage him. The water bullets gather above the opponent after hitting and passing through his position and form into a water dragon which then attacks the target, grabbing it in its jaws and forcefully bringing it crashing into the ground. The dragon comes down from above the target, bites the target and coils down, towards the ground, crushing the target between the ground and the now incredible mass of falling water. Tobirama Senju does this technique with his own specific hand seals, similar to how he does some other water techniques. Despite long and seemingly complex, the technique is quite fast to perform and trigger.
Note: Can only be used by Water Primary Specialists.
Note: Can only be used twice.



"A very powerful technique which can only be used by Water Specialists. Clap your hands together and slam them onto the ground, creating a pool of Water beneath the opponent. This blasts the opponent into the air, where you will then form the hand seals, and cause the Water beneath the opponent to form into 8 bullets of water, which blasts up and disorients the opponent. These water bullets form above the opponent, and forms into a dragon. The dragon then blasts down, gaping jaws and slams the opponent into the ground. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.


Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After doing the Tiger hand seal, the user will quickly exhale a very thin stream of pressurized water that will be able to cut even rock. The most noteworthy feature of the technique is how fast the stream is and how sharp it can be. By moving his head, the user can alter the jet's cutting path, creating longer cuts or affecting bigger targets.



"After that, a technique where you will form the Tiger hand seal and focus Water based chakra to release a very thin stream of pressurized water, which can cut through rock and can be used to cut through multiple targets as you hold the hand seal and adjust your head. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.
What rank of the element do you have to learn in order to master it? Is it S-rank or Forbidden?



I would use this technique when I require a move to quickly dispense the opponent or to again disrupt the opponent's plan quickly due to how fast it can form.

The advantages is that it can be used in any of the ranges also that it forms and takes effect quickly.

The disadvantages of this technique is that only primary water specialist can use this technique as well as the amount of uses which is only two.


After speaking Lucifer turns to face the clone while charging chakra into his right foot whilst performing the needed handseals. Upon finishing this he then proceeds to stomp his foot to disperse the stored chakra into the water below. Manipulating the chakra he sends it toward the running clone before having it form a circle beneath the clones feet. Following this Lucifer raises both his hands while manipulating chakra so that the circle of chakra rich water beneath the clone begins to rise in the form of several small blasts of water that hit on several parts of the clones body flipping him in varying directions within the confines of the circle. After this Lucifer brings his hands down while manipulating the chakra causing the water that has pooled above the clone begins to come down at a fast speed in the form of a dragon very quickly bringing the clone to the water with enough force to make him poof.

I would use this technique if I required a high ranking cutting technique or with a little creativity to separate/cut a enemy technique in half so I can run through the opening allowing cover from the sides as well as allows quick counter.

The advantages are that it can be used quickly also that it can be used on multiple targets.

The disadvantages are that if used on multiple targets it requires full focus of the hands another is that a Earth technique of equal rank could survive the technique despite the cutting properties.


He focuses chakra into his mouth while he performs and holds the tiger handseal. Upon completing this he inhales deeply through his nose while molding the chakra in his mouth. Upon completing these two steps he turns his head to the left before beginning to exhale the chakra and air creating a long thin blast of water that tears through the water as it heads through the clone due to Lucifer spinning his head to face the clone. Upon reaching the clone the blast tears through the clones structure with ease cutting it in half before the clone poofs. Having complete the task at hand Lucifer stops performing the handseal and ends the technique.
 

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Just S rank.


"Remember, your hands have to clapped and then slammed onto the ground, not foot. Anyway, good, now the last two."


Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.



"Now for this technique, you will inhale and mold a large amount of Water based chakra in your chest. You will then release a torrent of Water from your mouth, allowing you to create a water source and blast through obstacles. Pretty useful but simple as well. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.


Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.



"Similar to the previous technique where you will manipulate your Water based chakra. You will then expel from your mouth a dense torrent of Water which forms into a defensive barricade. Stop this!"

Dean says, as he releases forward a blast of Fire.
 

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Just S rank.


"Remember, your hands have to clapped and then slammed onto the ground, not foot. Anyway, good, now the last two."


Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.



"Now for this technique, you will inhale and mold a large amount of Water based chakra in your chest. You will then release a torrent of Water from your mouth, allowing you to create a water source and blast through obstacles. Pretty useful but simple as well. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Lucifer.


Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.



"Similar to the previous technique where you will manipulate your Water based chakra. You will then expel from your mouth a dense torrent of Water which forms into a defensive barricade. Stop this!"

Dean says, as he releases forward a blast of Fire.

The advantages of this technique is that it can reach the opponent no matter the range as well as it requires both no water source or hand seals to perform.

The disadvantages is that a Doton technique of A-rank can stop it also that it is somewhat difficult to use defensively if not against a blast or bullet technique.

I would describe this technique as a quick and powerful technique that can be used for the user's benefit even if it is blocked due to it creating a water source.


After speaking he inhales deeply while focusing chakra into his chest. Once done he alters the properties to mimic water followed by him exhaling the air along with the altered chakra. As it exits his mouth he user shape manipulation to have the water form a almost meteor type shape with a strong rotation which in turn upgrades the destructive power. The water bullet heads straight at the running clone skimming the water's surface along the way before crashing into the clone making him poof instantly before continuing on to smash into a nearby uninhabited island sending debris and water all around the area.

I would describe this technique as essentially a water wall strengthened with chakra. Not really anything else to say besides the advantages and disadvantages.

The advantages is that it doesn't require any hand seals also it doesn't require a water source

The disadvantages is that it can only be used defensively also that it has no other benefits besides blocking in a single direction ergo has no supplementary uses.


He then backflips while inhaling oxygen whilst he focuses suiton based chakra into his mouth. As he lands he exhales the chakra in the form of a thin blast of water that expands rapidly the further it gets from his mouth. This blast immediately climbs after getting 3ft from his body to create a large wall in front of him. The wall then gets hardened to nearly steel levels by Lucifer using chakra manipulation just in time for the fire technique to be nullified by the water wall. After the fire blast failed Lucifer lowers the wall turning it slowly back into simple water that falls back into the lake below.
 

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"Great job, Lucifer. It seems you have finished the dreaded Water release training. Have fun with it, and if you have any questions regarding a technique or something. You know where to find me."

Dean says as he opens a dark portal and disappears into it.
 

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"Great job, Lucifer. It seems you have finished the dreaded Water release training. Have fun with it, and if you have any questions regarding a technique or something. You know where to find me."

Dean says as he opens a dark portal and disappears into it.
Ok see you in a week or something then.

Subtly points at the title but a break wouldn't hurt anyone. Think I'm starting to develop carpal tunnel.:wut:
 
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