[CJ] with Deviation!
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And another takes an interest in poor me. :<
Okay so here is what I am willing to teach you since you've been nothing but awesome.
Um...commentary is always welcome especially since I love reading. Just give me you opinion on both.
8. (Raiton: Raijū no Fukku)- Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Hook
9. (Ninpō: Orihime) - Ninja Art: Weaving Princess
Okay so here is what I am willing to teach you since you've been nothing but awesome.
Um...commentary is always welcome especially since I love reading. Just give me you opinion on both.
8. (Raiton: Raijū no Fukku)- Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Hook
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After channeling chakra to one's dominant hand, the user extends it and releases the chakra in the form of a lightning rod protruding from the palm of his hand which the user then grips. By applying shape manipulation and bending the tip into a pseudo hook, the user then spins himself and hooks onto the opponent. As he spins, the opponent is caught on the hook and is hurled by the user in whatever direction he chooses. This jutsu is best used in conjunction with taijutsu or freeform taijutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note Can only be taught by Izzeh/Deviation
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After channeling chakra to one's dominant hand, the user extends it and releases the chakra in the form of a lightning rod protruding from the palm of his hand which the user then grips. By applying shape manipulation and bending the tip into a pseudo hook, the user then spins himself and hooks onto the opponent. As he spins, the opponent is caught on the hook and is hurled by the user in whatever direction he chooses. This jutsu is best used in conjunction with taijutsu or freeform taijutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note Can only be taught by Izzeh/Deviation
9. (Ninpō: Orihime) - Ninja Art: Weaving Princess
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 per turn
Damage: N/A (+60 if used with Lightning)
Description: Utilizing normal, durable ninja wire, the user channels chakra to it and utilizes it to bind his opponents. The user can elect to increase the friction the strings, making the wire hotter and able to case burns, making it a good technique to use for torture and information gathering. The strings can take on whatever form the user wishes making it quite a versatile technique to use with ninja wire. By channeling lightning-type chakra to the wires the user can increase their cutting power to cut through solid earth of A-Rank and lower. The user can also elect to not channel chakra to the wires and instead use a more suitable lightning technique to fit his situation. The strength of the binding is A-Rank. The technique itself does no damage until combined with lightning.
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 per turn
Damage: N/A (+60 if used with Lightning)
Description: Utilizing normal, durable ninja wire, the user channels chakra to it and utilizes it to bind his opponents. The user can elect to increase the friction the strings, making the wire hotter and able to case burns, making it a good technique to use for torture and information gathering. The strings can take on whatever form the user wishes making it quite a versatile technique to use with ninja wire. By channeling lightning-type chakra to the wires the user can increase their cutting power to cut through solid earth of A-Rank and lower. The user can also elect to not channel chakra to the wires and instead use a more suitable lightning technique to fit his situation. The strength of the binding is A-Rank. The technique itself does no damage until combined with lightning.
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Yes the two I wanted the most!
DFirst: Interesting manipulation of the element. Kind of reminds me of Assassin's Creed. You create a hook of lightning in the palm of your hand, then grab onto your target. And thrown into the distance, interesting combos come to mind. I like it a lot.
Second: Been a while since I've seen someone make a wire based CJ, I had an idea about something to do with wires. This one though includes the use of lightning chakra, be able to cut though chakra infused rock. Overall very nice technique, I really like it!
That praise.Yes the two I wanted the most!
First: Interesting manipulation of the element. Kind of reminds me of Assassin's Creed. You create a hook of lightning in the palm of your hand, then grab onto your target. And thrown into the distance, interesting combos come to mind. I like it a lot.
Second: Been a while since I've seen someone make a wire based CJ, I had an idea about something to do with wires. This one though includes the use of lightning chakra, be able to cut though chakra infused rock. Overall very nice technique, I really like it!
Alright well...it's part of your arsenal now. Enjoy.
I think we're done here for now. ^^
Analyze and post the jutsu I asked you beforehand please so I may critique it or whatever. >_> <3
(Raiton: Hiken: Tsubame-Gaeshi) - Lightning Release: Concealed Sword: Swallow Return
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Swallow Return is a forbidden sword technique that requires extreme precision, first in lightning chakra control and second in swordsmanship. It's a technique to where three concurrent arching blades close on the enemy from all sides to create a pseudo prison. While the user downplays it as simply successive slashes, it is actually using lightning chakra to the highest potential to overload one's arms and sword to increase speed and cutting ability. It starts with the user raising his sword above his shoulder, channeling lightning chakra to the nerves in the arms and to his sword. Once the user has done that, he performs a flashing slash from his right to his left, followed by two seemingly simultaneous, over-lapping flashes that appears to disregard the concept of time and space, producing a slash attack that arrives from three different directions due to the increased reflexes of one's arms. The user then lifts his sword as it gathers all his lightning chakra towards the blade and delivers another downwards slash resulting in an explosion of chakra, damaging the opponent.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Unable to use A-Rank or above Kenjutsu & Lightning for the following turn
Note: User's arms are slightly numbed afterwards
Note: Must have lightning as a specialty
(Raiton: Hiken: Tsubame-Gaeshi) - Lightning Release: Concealed Sword: Swallow Return
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Swallow Return is a forbidden sword technique that requires extreme precision, first in lightning chakra control and second in swordsmanship. It's a technique to where three concurrent arching blades close on the enemy from all sides to create a pseudo prison. While the user downplays it as simply successive slashes, it is actually using lightning chakra to the highest potential to overload one's arms and sword to increase speed and cutting ability. It starts with the user raising his sword above his shoulder, channeling lightning chakra to the nerves in the arms and to his sword. Once the user has done that, he performs a flashing slash from his right to his left, followed by two seemingly simultaneous, over-lapping flashes that appears to disregard the concept of time and space, producing a slash attack that arrives from three different directions due to the increased reflexes of one's arms. The user then lifts his sword as it gathers all his lightning chakra towards the blade and delivers another downwards slash resulting in an explosion of chakra, damaging the opponent.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Unable to use A-Rank or above Kenjutsu & Lightning for the following turn
Note: User's arms are slightly numbed afterwards
Note: Must have lightning as a specialty
Nice technique, shame I have to have lightning as one of my specialty, oh well. Nice technique overall, and no questions. Here's mine:
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Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (-10 per finger used)
Description: Bite of the Dragon is both a defensive and offensive type technique that falls under both sword, and body arts. To pull off this move the user must have a good amount of strength, chakra, and precision as this technique is rather a quite complex move. Observing the target the user will match the exact breathing pattern of the foe and channel chakra to one of their dominant hand's fingers. Then as the foe strikes the user is able to catch and absorb the impact of the strike with the mid section of their finger (the users hand is largely reinforced with chakra to be able to catch the damage, with minimal amount of damage). The user will then bring down the top half of their finger onto the target's weapon, causing the absorbed strike to semi-instantly be redirected as slashing damage back at the foe, the way that the user can redirect said blow is created by applying friction to the sides of the finger and the blade/hand. This technique can be used with all fingers on one hand at the same time thus drastically boosting the power that is redirected at the foe. It can also use this technique to block powerful taijutsu strikes.
Notes:
- Can only be used four times per-match.
- Cool down period of one turn before usage again.
- Can only redirect sword/hand damage up to A-rank (60 DMG)
- Raw chakra kenjutsu, taijutsu and samurai attacks work, as long as they are either from a bladed weapon, or from a fist of that of an A-rank and below.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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wow this one is incredible
I love how you can redirect for both kenjutsu and taijutsu. Never watched bleach but that is one awesome move. But I can imagine that bleach customs have been done to death. Would be interesting if you could add wind to it and make it deadlier.