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I'm super bored so read my fanfic.


Knock Knock Knock
Sakura walks up to her door and opens it.
Hinata: H-hi Sakura-chan <3
Sakura: Hey hinata, how are you doing?
Hinata: Good. Would you like to fight?
Sakura: Hmmmm... -turns around to see if any chores need to be done- Sure!

They travel to an open field near the leaf village

Hinata is dressed in her typical hyuga fighting shit and Sakura is in a mini skirt idk

Sakura: U ready?

Hinata: Yes!


They have an epic staredown
The leaves rustle in the wind...
Silence consumes the area...
Wooooooooooooooooo..........
BOOM!

Sakura jumps high in the air and swiftly rains down on hinata with a chakra enhanced punch!
Hinata: HYUGA STYLE PALM ROTATIONNNN!!!
Hinata spins her chakra creating a bubble of dense chakra protecting her from the punch
BOOOOOM
The ground underneath them cracks and rumbles from the shock of the punch

Sakura is stuck in the air from the recoil
Hinata: -Now's my chance!-
256 PALMS!!! DEATHS DESTRUCTION (idk call it what u want its just 256 palms)

She dashes at Sakura and hits her 20 times then it turns out she's a substitution.

Hinata: No one can hide from these eyes.
She starts looks up and down for sakura
She turns around only to see sakura dashing towards her with Byakugou activated

Sakura: shaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She punches the air 20 feet away from hinata

Hinata: Are you crazy? I'm over he- BOOOOM!
The force of the punch sends her flying away...

Hinata: Ugh..! When did you get so strong!

Sakura: Don't mistake me for a weak woman like you!
Hinata: Weak?....

CUE FLASHBACK OF 20 YEARS
Hinata: I'm...not....weak!!!
Suddenly hHamura's chakra appears around her and the aura of a giant lion encasses her like perfect susanoo
Sakura: I've got to stop her before she attacks
Sakura jumps at punches the aura but it bounces her back
Hinata: I...FEEL MY ANCESTORS POWER!!
Hinata: 1000 PALMS!!!

Hinata dashes at sakura with hamura boosted palms and sakura dashes at her too.


The credits roll.
 
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A flying rock would hit both and we'd end up with both laying on the floor calling for their husbands.

OT: I couldn't even last long enough to read more than 3 sentences without cringing
 
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the fast an easy way to win

knock knock

sakura walk to the door an see who it is

Sasuke: Sakura
Sakura: SASUKE KUN
Sasuke: where sarada
Sakura: in her room
Sasuke: Sarada
Sarada hear her papa voice an pop out of her room to see him
Sarada: papasasuke
Sasuke look at sarada an start to suggest something
Sakura: Sasuke your back from your journey
Sasuke: i have something important to tell to sarada
Sakura: ....?
Sasuke: it time to tell the truth,
Sarada: truth?
Sasuke: you are adopted an you are not my child an your real mom is not sakura
Sarada: what
Sakura:.....sasuke kun?
Sasuke: Sakura you are not my wife
Sakura....what..sasuke Kun
Sasuke take sarada away from sakura an leave..
Sakura... fist smash the whole apartment building...sasuke..kun....


later on we see that sasuke is walking in the forest.. sensing something bad is happening

meanwhile we see the one that was impersonated sasuke was hinata who use an transformation jutsu to disguise herself into sasuke due to seeing sakura was looking an admirer naruto far too much.. revenge..
 
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konoha Sev7n said:
the fast an easy way to win

knock knock

sakura walk to the door an see who it is

Sasuke: Sakura
Sakura: SASUKE KUN
Sasuke: where sarada
Sakura: in her room
Sasuke: Sarada
Sarada hear her papa voice an pop out of her room to see him
Sarada: papasasuke
Sasuke look at sarada an start to suggest something
Sakura: Sasuke your back from your journey
Sasuke: i have something important to tell to sarada
Sakura: ....?
Sasuke: it time to tell the truth,
Sarada: truth?
Sasuke: you are adopted an you are not my child an your real mom is not sakura
Sarada: what
Sakura:.....sasuke kun?
Sasuke: Sakura you are not my wife
Sakura....what..sasuke Kun
Sasuke take sarada away from sakura an leave..
Sakura... fist smash the whole apartment building...sasuke..kun....


later on we see that sasuke is walking in the forest.. sensing something bad is happening

meanwhile we see the one that was impersonated sasuke was hinata who use an transformation jutsu to disguise herself into sasuke due to seeing sakura was looking an admirer naruto far too much.. revenge..
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Plot twist : Sasuke go to Hinata after taking sarada <3

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Illuminater said:
Is that an insult? Either way you shouldn't take it so seriously, take a chill pill every once in a while. You don't have to be as serious as the character you wank
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It's whatever you think it is. I was simply giving you something better to do with your time but you had to take it personal

cf> You cant wank Itachi nice try
 
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Zensum said:
It's whatever you think it is. I was simply giving you something better to do with your time but you had to take it personal

cf> You cant wank Itachi nice try
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Let's not play games here. I simply stated the facts that this is not serious. As you can tell by the exaggerated and lazy writing style.


If you put as much energy as you do in wanking itachi in finding a girlfriend or improving your life you would be a very successful man.
 

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<div class="bbWrapper">I read a line or 2 and now I have terminal cancer.</div>
 

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Illuminater said:
Let's not play games here. I simply stated the facts that this is not serious. As you can tell by the exaggerated and lazy writing style.


If you put as much energy as you do in wanking itachi in finding a girlfriend or improving your life you would be a very successful man.
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Emotions run rampant

Ill put my last point in your font so you can see/read it better
> You cant wank Itachi nice try
 
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