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Name: Joshua Drake
Nickname: "Blue Head"
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Clan: N/A

Looks: Josh's most distinguishing feature is his dark blue hair. It extends down to his chin and is longer on the right side of his face, coming close to covering his right eye. He is also short in stature often being the smallest in a group of people his age. Josh is also incredibly thin, so much so that people often say he feels like a bag of bones. Additionally he often has a sour look on his face, with people making a big deal when he smiles as it rarely happens.

Personality: Josh is an extremely cold person. He is deeply introverted and rarely speaks. He becomes deeply attached to anyone who shows care for him which causes him to become even colder when they leave him. Everything in life disappoints him so he chooses to focus all of his energy on ninja work and only cares about achieving one goal and moving on to the next objective. He is also is constantly focusing on the negative things in life and has an extremely difficult time moving on from hardship.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Sunagakure
Village of Alliance: Kirigakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Chunin
Specialty: N/A
Elements:
Lightning Release - Needs Training
Your ninjutsu:
Ninjutsu - Needs Training


(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History: Josh's past has been stained with constant pain. Initially he was a happy child but the struggles life brought have caused him to became a pessimistic person. Rather than moving on with his life he instead focuses on the pain he's received. This has caused him to become distant and cut off relationships with everyone. At the age of seven he left home and began to live on his own. After being betrayed by the person closest to him, he has decided to obtain as much power as possible so that he would never be hurt again. Because of this his goal is to obtain all the tailed beasts and become the Ten-Tails Jinchuriki. This may seem a lofty mission for someone as weak and untrained as him but his will is unbreaking and he will go to any means to achieve this. He has recently arrived in Kirigakure to begin his training...

Other

Picture:
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This will have to do until I have something original drawn

Theme Song and Background Music:
[video=youtube;E8oFiJgsyEc]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E8oFiJgsyEc[/video]


Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A
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This is my first bio so I don't exactly know what is standard procedure. I read through the help guides and tried to do everything correctly. I'd appreciate it is anyone could point out anything I did wrong or just provide tips for the RP section in general.

~Approved~
 
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Nice job for a first bio. Try to add some pictures using
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and put the image link inside. I really enjoyed the background info.
 

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Nice job for a first bio. Try to add some pictures using
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and put the image link inside. I really enjoyed the background info.
Thanks. I'll do that.
Is that so? The part about relationships was based off my real life. The thing about the person closest to him betraying if is based off of something that happened yesterday. Me and this girl (who was the only person I know to ever care about me) were going to get married but I just found out that she's in another relationship. So yeah... No matter what I do I can't stop thinking of her so I decided to start RPing as pretending I'm someone else might be able to distract me from what's happening. Also I hope that I actually will be able to become the Juubi Jin. It would be kind of awesome to build up strength and then fight the current jins and gather all of them. Though powerful abilities seemed pretty limited from what I read.


Thanks MrTucket! I appreciate it.
 

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Thanks. I'll do that.
Is that so? The part about relationships was based off my real life. The thing about the person closest to him betraying if is based off of something that happened yesterday. Me and this girl (who was the only person I know to ever care about me) were going to get married but I just found out that she's in another relationship. So yeah... No matter what I do I can't stop thinking of her so I decided to start RPing as pretending I'm someone else might be able to distract me from what's happening. Also I hope that I actually will be able to become the Juubi Jin. It would be kind of awesome to build up strength and then fight the current jins and gather all of them. Though powerful abilities seemed pretty limited from what I read.


Thanks MrTucket! I appreciate it.
Oh dang. I'm sorry. People are just disrespectful. Don't you let that affect you. She'll realize that she missed out on something great.
 

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Well, first starters, boost your post count to learn more things - Tip. Post Count/Ranking Thread:

- Choose a Specialty to start: one of the five nature transformations (e.i Fire, Water, Wind, etc.), or Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu, or Taijutsu, or Kenjutsu]
- Choose 1 Element or one of the five nature transformations (e.i Lightning, Water, etc.) to start.

And your good to go. Also, be patience/wait. Your Bio would be check by a Mod, so don't go bugging anybody.
 
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Oh dang. I'm sorry. People are just disrespectful. Don't you let that affect you. She'll realize that she missed out on something great.
Thanks man, you're the first person to try and encourage me. It just hurts because she was the only person to ever show any real interest in me. The last conversation we had she said: "I'm not going to be with anyone else but you. You have my absolute loyalty." Now I'm wondering if anything she told me was true. I wholeheartedly believed everything she told me because she's been the only person in my life to really support me. I'm starting to question whether love even exists. I mean the only person to ever show love for me was apparently lying. It just makes you wonder if there is anyone out there who will genuinely love you.
 
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Well, first starters, boost your post count to learn more things - Tip. Post Count/Ranking Thread:

- Choose a Specialty to start: one of the five nature transformations (e.i Fire, Water, Wind, etc.), or Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu, or Taijutsu, or Kenjutsu]
- Choose 1 Element or one of the five nature transformations (e.i Lightning, Water, etc.) to start.

And your good to go. Also, be patience/wait. Your Bio would be check by a Mod, so don't go bugging anybody.
Thanks for the help man!
 

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Thanks man, you're the first person to try and encourage me. It just hurts because she was the only person to ever show any real interest in me. The last conversation we had she said: "I'm not going to be with anyone else but you. You have my absolute loyalty." Now I'm wondering if anything she told me was true. I wholeheartedly believed everything she told me because she's been the only person in my life to really support me. I'm starting to question whether love even exists. I mean the only person to ever show love for me was apparently lying. It just makes you wonder if there is anyone out there who will genuinely love you.
Don't worry there's plenty of fish in that sea that will want to give their all to you. You just got unlikely, happens to everyone. Don't let her miss up your future relationships.
 

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Well, first starters, boost your post count to learn more things - Tip. Post Count/Ranking Thread:

- Choose a Specialty to start: one of the five nature transformations (e.i Fire, Water, Wind, etc.), or Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu, or Taijutsu, or Kenjutsu]
- Choose 1 Element or one of the five nature transformations (e.i Lightning, Water, etc.) to start.

And your good to go. Also, be patience/wait. Your Bio would be check by a Mod, so don't go bugging anybody.
He's new so no specialties. A specialty is something you specialize in that's completed. Everything looks fine so far. I'll tell you more when I get home from work.
 

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Oh this is perfect. Make lightning your specialty, master it (should be the easiest option since lightning is the shortest element) then come to me and I will provide you with Magnetism Training.
 

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Good starting bio. It would really nice if you can put the background music as well. Also, welcome to RP.^^
Remove water release from your specialty section. You can specialize only in the things that you mastered.
 

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Oh this is perfect. Make lightning your specialty, master it (should be the easiest option since lightning is the shortest element) then come to me and I will provide you with Magnetism Training.
What do you mean "this is perfect?" It seems like you're planning something. Well I guess I'll be part of your scheme.

@Detective L
Ok, sure thing!
 

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What do you mean "this is perfect?" It seems like you're planning something. Well I guess I'll be part of your scheme.

@Detective L
Ok, sure thing!
Its perfect because I'm looking for magnetism students. Have L teach you Lightning and once you master it Ill be able to teach you Magnetism, its a pretty awesome ability.
 
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