[Closed]Training..

The Sach · Jan 25, 2016

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Rei's R&R
Unofficial
Restrictions and terrain will be chosen by you
Mid Range
Will be using Chelsea in sig
I guess, customs aren't allowed, but I am fine with it either ways.^^
Tell me where should we start.

Detective L · Jan 26, 2016

Okay, before we get to fighting, what bios do you have, and with which specialties? Also, describe your style of fighting. Need to work around that, work on weak points by discussion and fighting, etc.

Naruto. · Jan 26, 2016

*stalks from the shadows*
This n00b needs some knowledge too.

Detective L · Jan 26, 2016

Ichigo. said:
*stalks from the shadows*
This n00b needs some knowledge too.

Isn't Pervy training you? U_U

The Sach · Feb 8, 2016

Detective L said:
Okay, before we get to fighting, what bios do you have, and with which specialties? Also, describe your style of fighting. Need to work around that, work on weak points by discussion and fighting, etc.

I have

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bio and a Mandalore bio,

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My Sasuke bio has 3 tomeo sharingan and Mandalore bio is of Champion rank.
Plus, I have Snake Ninjutsu and Snake Summoning contract, the ability I want to develop in the near future.
Sasuke bio has Fire has first specialty and lightning as second specialty. Chelsea has wind as first specialty and water as second specialty(I might switch water to first specialty soon). Plus opting for rain test retry on my Chelsea bio(sadly I failed it, last time around ._.)
My style of fighting is mostly concerned with finding openings through stealth. I like using clones, leech of all creation and summons and technically spam clones a lot(one of the reasons, I failed rain tests.o.o)
I guess my biggest weakness is detailing and sometimes timeframe.>_>
I provide unnecessary details where they aren't needed and miss them when they are needed. I would like to link you to my latest fight against Priest to elaborate description of my fighting style further.

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Note that, I didn't utilize Snake nin much in that fight(wanted to save it for later), which I do in many of my other fights. I guess I should have used it there. o.o

Detective L · Feb 10, 2016

Alright. There isn't really a way to make someone better by telling them, it all comes down to the individual person embracing their strengths and finding a good way to cover up their weaknesses. For example, NK. He doesn't like close combat, so he has a bio that focuses on keeping the opponent at bay, and his worst match up is against fast opponents (check out him and ReXii's fight, one of my favorites of all time). I like fighting all around the field. I might not be good in close combat, but I got several CJ and CFS that help in that regard. I have large scaled summons, and small ones, ones that enhance my speed and even CJ that slow down opponents. I never really found my ideal fighting style per se, but I'd say I like Mid range fighting and I barely use clones to be honest, since they always make the time frame a bit cluttered (something you say you have a problem with).

Time frame is the ultimate douche in the RP, as it can be so irritating at times. But if you got it in your pocket, I'd say it makes fighting easier. Let's talk a bit about it. Which part is the part that gets you? And how do you always tend to get it wrong?

The Sach · Feb 19, 2016

Detective L said:
Alright. There isn't really a way to make someone better by telling them, it all comes down to the individual person embracing their strengths and finding a good way to cover up their weaknesses. For example, NK. He doesn't like close combat, so he has a bio that focuses on keeping the opponent at bay, and his worst match up is against fast opponents (check out him and ReXii's fight, one of my favorites of all time). I like fighting all around the field. I might not be good in close combat, but I got several CJ and CFS that help in that regard. I have large scaled summons, and small ones, ones that enhance my speed and even CJ that slow down opponents. I never really found my ideal fighting style per se, but I'd say I like Mid range fighting and I barely use clones to be honest, since they always make the time frame a bit cluttered (something you say you have a problem with).

Time frame is the ultimate douche in the RP, as it can be so irritating at times. But if you got it in your pocket, I'd say it makes fighting easier. Let's talk a bit about it. Which part is the part that gets you? And how do you always tend to get it wrong?

I agree with ally part here. That makes things a bit difficult for me too. The problems I mostly face regarding timeframe are associated with the speed of the jutsu. They generally say lightning jutsu is faster than other elemental things, but it always bothers me about how fast it is. Relating RP jutsu timing with real life timing is the ultimate problem here.
Taijutsu related timeframe is also an issue that bothers me. :sweat:

Detective L · Feb 19, 2016

The Sach said:
I agree with ally part here. That makes things a bit difficult for me too. The problems I mostly face regarding timeframe are associated with the speed of the jutsu. They generally say lightning jutsu is faster than other elemental things, but it always bothers me about how fast it is. Relating RP jutsu timing with real life timing is the ultimate problem here.
Taijutsu related timeframe is also an issue that bothers me.

Time frame isn't as clear cut as most make it out to be. There are times when the speed of techniques have to be taken into account, like in Short range and faster elements, like Lightning, but this doesn't mean you can't react. Unless of course, you're in a situation where you're so close to the opponent and he uses Nagashi. There are ways to counter it, and sometimes, time frame can be a bit iffy at such points but there are times where one must take a hit, if someone blasts at you at 3rd Gate speed and you know you can't react to it, that's when you either try and defend or simply lose the match if you can't. There are times when we are outclassed by our fellow opponents, and remember that the RP is about fun and trying to be your character, not being a God lol.

In terms of Taijutsu, time frame can get a bit weird, especially when a lot is going on. I am not a Tai specialist, but I would advise you to read some EIG tests that have been passed (Scorps', Kerrah's and Loki's are great ones, especially Kerrah U_U). The way those members have used Taijutsu is just amazing, and perhaps you'll get a better understanding of how they handle time frame. Everything in Taijutsu is fast, and happens too close for some people, so its sometimes about taking a hit and using that as an advantage to counter. We can't always slither our way out lmao

Anyway, I'd like you to start off the fight with any combination, and we'll just go with the flow from there. I'll give you some pointers on TF and the like, do some Tai as well (although I don't particularly like it z,z). You can use customs as well.

The Sach · Feb 24, 2016

Detective L said:
Time frame isn't as clear cut as most make it out to be. There are times when the speed of techniques have to be taken into account, like in Short range and faster elements, like Lightning, but this doesn't mean you can't react. Unless of course, you're in a situation where you're so close to the opponent and he uses Nagashi. There are ways to counter it, and sometimes, time frame can be a bit iffy at such points but there are times where one must take a hit, if someone blasts at you at 3rd Gate speed and you know you can't react to it, that's when you either try and defend or simply lose the match if you can't. There are times when we are outclassed by our fellow opponents, and remember that the RP is about fun and trying to be your character, not being a God lol.

In terms of Taijutsu, time frame can get a bit weird, especially when a lot is going on. I am not a Tai specialist, but I would advise you to read some EIG tests that have been passed (Scorps', Kerrah's and Loki's are great ones, especially Kerrah U_U). The way those members have used Taijutsu is just amazing, and perhaps you'll get a better understanding of how they handle time frame. Everything in Taijutsu is fast, and happens too close for some people, so its sometimes about taking a hit and using that as an advantage to counter. We can't always slither our way out lmao

Anyway, I'd like you to start off the fight with any combination, and we'll just go with the flow from there. I'll give you some pointers on TF and the like, do some Tai as well (although I don't particularly like it z,z). You can use customs as well.

I glanced through Loki's EIG test and it was helpful. Will give it a detailed read, pretty soon.U_U
I must say you are spot on about tai and time frame stuff, really helpful explanation that was.^^
Starting with my first move, with Sasuke biography in the sig. Correct me and give me pointers.

Sasuke arrived at the battlefield with Sword of Kusangi strapped on his back. He knew it was time to show what he has got and he wasn't afraid to do so.
He started off with activating his 3T sharingan like always. He knew that against a powerful opponent like Dean, sharingan and its tracking abilities will come handy.

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.

After activating his sharingan, Sasuke then formed a single handseal, channeled chakra into the brain of Dean to put him in a genjutsu. In this visual genjutsu, a large amount of darkness will erupt behind Sasuke and will completely take control of Dean's vision. Within a moment's notice, Dean won't be able to see Sasuke in front of him anymore and will only see darkness, making his sight completely useless.

After making his opponent's sight useless, Sasuke channeled lightning chakra into his left hand. While keeping track of each and every movement of Dean and his chakra, Sasuke then bow down a little in front of Dean after reaching at CQC distance from him(as if he was bowing down for respect). He then used the lightning infused palm to deliver a powerful uppercut aimed at Dean's jaw, by slowly ascending the lightning infused arm in the direction of Dean's jaw, while keeping his head down.

This will be enough to send Dean in the midair. Before Sasuke can let Dean go in the midair, Sasuke used the opening to remove his sword of Kusanagi using his right hand. He did this movement swiftly after delivering uppercut on Dean, so that he can use Kusanagi to deliver a diagonal slash(from right to left) on Dean, before he can let him go in the midair. This diagonal slash will leave him in bruises, all when Dean is unable to react due to earlier genjutsu.
Sasuke then stood at the position of Dean alerted, while keeping track of Dean's chakra and his ascent into the midair.

Detective L · Feb 24, 2016

The Sach said:
I glanced through Loki's EIG test and it was helpful. Will give it a detailed read, pretty soon.U_U
I must say you are spot on about tai and time frame stuff, really helpful explanation that was.^^
Starting with my first move, with Sasuke biography in the sig. Correct me and give me pointers.

Sasuke arrived at the battlefield with Sword of Kusangi strapped on his back. He knew it was time to show what he has got and he wasn't afraid to do so.
He started off with activating his 3T sharingan like always. He knew that against a powerful opponent like Dean, sharingan and its tracking abilities will come handy.

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.

After activating his sharingan, Sasuke then formed a single handseal, channeled chakra into the brain of Dean to put him in a genjutsu. In this visual genjutsu, a large amount of darkness will erupt behind Sasuke and will completely take control of Dean's vision. Within a moment's notice, Dean won't be able to see Sasuke in front of him anymore and will only see darkness, making his sight completely useless.

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.

After making his opponent's sight useless, Sasuke channeled lightning chakra into his left hand. While keeping track of each and every movement of Dean and his chakra, Sasuke then bow down a little in front of Dean after reaching at CQC distance from him(as if he was bowing down for respect). He then used the lightning infused palm to deliver a powerful uppercut aimed at Dean's jaw, by slowly ascending the lightning infused arm in the direction of Dean's jaw, while keeping his head down.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

This will be enough to send Dean in the midair. Before Sasuke can let Dean go in the midair, Sasuke used the opening to remove his sword of Kusanagi using his right hand. He did this movement swiftly after delivering uppercut on Dean, so that he can use Kusanagi to deliver a diagonal slash(from right to left) on Dean, before he can let him go in the midair. This diagonal slash will leave him in bruises, all when Dean is unable to react due to earlier genjutsu.
Sasuke then stood at the position of Dean alerted, while keeping track of Dean's chakra and his ascent into the midair.

Study your opponent, as Scorps says. Read what they are capable of, check their previous battles, and always know what their Clan is capable of as well! Foreign chakra can't enter the bodies of the Nekura, so Genjutsu doesn't work on me xD So I will disregard the Genjutsu usage. I will give you some pointers at the end of my reply ^^

Dean now had to face an Uchiha, none other than the infamous Sasuke Uchiha. This man was known to be quite well versed in the Sharingan and the like. However, Dean being a Nekura couldn't help but snicker. The Uchiha and Senju were their mortal enemies, and today, this Uchiha would not see the light of day. Ironically, his eyes turn red, revealing his three tomoe Sharingan. As he runs towards Dean, he keeps a watchful eye. Sasuke's right hand is clad in Lightning chakra and then aimed at Dean, who responds by swaying his entire body to his right, dodging the initial uppercut. After dodging it, Dean steps forward with his left leg, his left arm grabbing onto Sasuke's clothes and pulling it towards himself, using his own body's momentum to bring Sasuke to him. Lifting his right knee, Dean slams it into Sasuke's stomach, causing him to struggle with some breathing. Dean's right hand is aimed to grab Sasuke in the face and push him to the ground as the knee strike connects. Dean would then step back three meters.

"Try again."

Not a bad move, starting off with activating the Sharingan, and the Genjutsu, something Sasuke is known for. Not much to assess on, but I'd pressure the opponent a bit more before attempting close range. With most people, they'd just Nagashi if you get too close, so be sure you have the arsenal to back you up if you come close. Onto the next move!

The Sach · Feb 26, 2016

Detective L said:
Study your opponent, as Scorps says. Read what they are capable of, check their previous battles, and always know what their Clan is capable of as well! Foreign chakra can't enter the bodies of the Nekura, so Genjutsu doesn't work on me xD So I will disregard the Genjutsu usage. I will give you some pointers at the end of my reply ^^

Dean now had to face an Uchiha, none other than the infamous Sasuke Uchiha. This man was known to be quite well versed in the Sharingan and the like. However, Dean being a Nekura couldn't help but snicker. The Uchiha and Senju were their mortal enemies, and today, this Uchiha would not see the light of day. Ironically, his eyes turn red, revealing his three tomoe Sharingan. As he runs towards Dean, he keeps a watchful eye. Sasuke's right hand is clad in Lightning chakra and then aimed at Dean, who responds by swaying his entire body to his right, dodging the initial uppercut. After dodging it, Dean steps forward with his left leg, his left arm grabbing onto Sasuke's clothes and pulling it towards himself, using his own body's momentum to bring Sasuke to him. Lifting his right knee, Dean slams it into Sasuke's stomach, causing him to struggle with some breathing. Dean's right hand is aimed to grab Sasuke in the face and push him to the ground as the knee strike connects. Dean would then step back three meters.

"Try again."

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description: This unusual taijutsu style is a unique style of combat Drunken Fist Fighters become human powerhouses who'll strike unpredictability, with no inhibitions, an explosive fury and without any second thoughts about their actions. The user can either make themselves drunk or imitate the method by use of swaying and uneven balance on their feet to attack their opponents a total of 12 variant attacks.

Not a bad move, starting off with activating the Sharingan, and the Genjutsu, something Sasuke is known for. Not much to assess on, but I'd pressure the opponent a bit more before attempting close range. With most people, they'd just Nagashi if you get too close, so be sure you have the arsenal to back you up if you come close. Onto the next move!

My fault, I should have taken that into consideration.xD

As Sasuke was going for the uppercut he knew that the opponent in front of him isn't going to stay silent. Dean dodged Sasuke's initial uppercut with good pace and this time rather than going at long range, Dean tried reaching for Sasuke's cloth.
Sasuke anticipated that his opponent in mood of CQC and as Dean gathered Sasuke's cloth, Sasuke let him pulled towards it and used left hand to reach his sword of kusanagi when Dean is doing that. He then delivered a diagonal slash that will pass through Dean, damaging him heavily.
After delivering a first slash, which we will make it necessary for Dean to retreat and leave Sasuke's cloth, Sasuke then finished the fight using three diagonal slashes originating from top left corner from his point of view, followed by three horizontal slashes from left, using sword of Kusanagi in his left hand.

Sasuke then hopped a bit behind(away from you), channeled water chakra through the ground and formed a gushing water beneath Dean. He then manipulated this water to form a sphere of water around Dean that will imprison him inside.
Sasuke kept the radius of sphere of small deliberately, so as to keep Dean trapped inside for good and keeping himself out of the range of the prison.

After keeping Dean trapped inside for the good, Sasuke gathered his lightning chakra in both of his hands, which then started crackling together.
He then slammed his hands on the ground to send the discharge of the lightning bolt through the ground, which will reach near Dean and then will diverge into tendrils which will attack him from front, back and sideways.
The electricity in the tendrils will be conducted by the sphere inside which Dean is captured. This will amplify the effect of the jutsu, damaging Dean even further.

I just hope my first jutsu works.lol

Detective L · Feb 26, 2016

The Sach said:
My fault, I should have taken that into consideration.xD

As Sasuke was going for the uppercut he knew that the opponent in front of him isn't going to stay silent. Dean dodged Sasuke's initial uppercut with good pace and this time rather than going at long range, Dean tried reaching for Sasuke's cloth.
Sasuke anticipated that his opponent in mood of CQC and as Dean gathered Sasuke's cloth, Sasuke let him pulled towards it and used left hand to reach his sword of kusanagi when Dean is doing that. He then delivered a diagonal slash that will pass through Dean, damaging him heavily.
After delivering a first slash, which we will make it necessary for Dean to retreat and leave Sasuke's cloth, Sasuke then finished the fight using three diagonal slashes originating from top left corner from his point of view, followed by three horizontal slashes from left, using sword of Kusanagi in his left hand.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 25
Description: With this technique, the user will make a sequence of slashes with their sword and finishes with a powerful final slash dealing liberal damage to their enemy.

Sasuke then hopped a bit behind(away from you), channeled water chakra through the ground and formed a gushing water beneath Dean. He then manipulated this water to form a sphere of water around Dean that will imprison him inside.
Sasuke kept the radius of sphere of small deliberately, so as to keep Dean trapped inside for good and keeping himself out of the range of the prison.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

After keeping Dean trapped inside for the good, Sasuke gathered his lightning chakra in both of his hands, which then started crackling together.
He then slammed his hands on the ground to send the discharge of the lightning bolt through the ground, which will reach near Dean and then will diverge into tendrils which will attack him from front, back and sideways.
The electricity in the tendrils will be conducted by the sphere inside which Dean is captured. This will amplify the effect of the jutsu, damaging Dean even further.

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

I just hope my first jutsu works.lol

See, that was a good move now. As usual, I will add some comments at the end of my counter.

After dodging the initial uppercut, Dean's left hand went for Sasuke's clothes. Suddenly, he reacted as he reached for his blade and attempted a slash like motion towards Dean's hand. Knowing that this was an odd position, Dean did two things simultaneously. He released a mass of Wind chakra from his body outwards. This didn't require hand seals, and due to their close proximity, it would work quite well. Sasuke would slower than usual as he attempts to strike Dean. At the same time, from Dean's right hand, mentally controlled, a chain blasted forward and wrapped itself around the sword, ripping it from Sasuke's grip with ease, and pulling it towards Dean. Dean pounces back in the same motion, holding the blade in a comedic manner.

"Bringing out the toys, huh?."

This was a nice move. You assessed time frame correctly there. However, this also puts you in a dangerous position. Be sure to always enhance your strikes with Lightning or an element, to just make it a bit more difficult for the opponent to counter, and if you want to use Ken, make sure you got some good boosters for it. Once more, check your opponent's arsenal. All Nekura carry a cloak that can block most free form and weapon based attacks. I didn't want to use that though xD Anyway, I like the flow and pace, keep going!

The Sach · Mar 3, 2016

Detective L said:
See, that was a good move now. As usual, I will add some comments at the end of my counter.

After dodging the initial uppercut, Dean's left hand went for Sasuke's clothes. Suddenly, he reacted as he reached for his blade and attempted a slash like motion towards Dean's hand. Knowing that this was an odd position, Dean did two things simultaneously. He released a mass of Wind chakra from his body outwards. This didn't require hand seals, and due to their close proximity, it would work quite well. Sasuke would slower than usual as he attempts to strike Dean. At the same time, from Dean's right hand, mentally controlled, a chain blasted forward and wrapped itself around the sword, ripping it from Sasuke's grip with ease, and pulling it towards Dean. Dean pounces back in the same motion, holding the blade in a comedic manner.

"Bringing out the toys, huh?."

Type:Supplementary
Rank: C
Range:Short
Chakra: 15
Damage:N/A
Description: After channeling chakra throughout his/her body. The user will quickly release the chakra outward short range around all sides of their body, creating a sphere. By doing this, it creates a wall of thick pressurized air that can slow down the movements of incoming projectiles, jutsu, and even opponents that may be attacking the user at a untraceable speed. This jutsu does not block said techniques but it allows the user to easily side step or block against said projectile. In the case of movements made by the opponent within short range of the user, the user will have to use a little more chakra to produce a thicker air around them. This jutsu doesn't significantly slow down all movements made with the sphere, but it does allow the user to become aware of anything entering the sphere because it is basically made out of the users chakra.
-Usable 3 times per battle
-Must be taught by Sir Hoshigaki

This was a nice move. You assessed time frame correctly there. However, this also puts you in a dangerous position. Be sure to always enhance your strikes with Lightning or an element, to just make it a bit more difficult for the opponent to counter, and if you want to use Ken, make sure you got some good boosters for it. Once more, check your opponent's arsenal. All Nekura carry a cloak that can block most free form and weapon based attacks. I didn't want to use that though xD Anyway, I like the flow and pace, keep going!

That CJ though. You really have some awesome stuff and sorry for being late.o.o And yeah good tips, I will keep that in mind.

Sasuke was about to use his blade, when Dean released massive amount of wind throughout his body.
Sasuke knew it was to either push him away or something along the lines, but this wind didn't push him away, rather it slowed down his movement. Dean appeared in front of Sasuke and comically hold his blade almost like mocking him, before wrapping Sasuke's blade using his iron chain. Sasuke was waiting for exact this to happen.
When his sword got caught by iron chain, Sasuke gathered his lightning chakra and without wasting a single moment, channeled lightning chakra through the chain via his sword. Chain and sword both being made up of metal, will conduct lightning and will electrocute Dean, if he is unable to counter it. This will leave him paralyed and hence Sasuke’s sword will get released from Dean’s grips alongside the chain.

After Sasuke channeled lightning through the sword and retriving it, he put the sword back into its sheath and then hopped a little behind while gathering wind chakra in his mouth.
After landing a little behind his previous position, he sent the gathered wind into the sky above him and brought down a F-5 tornado with slicing wind, which will trap Dean inside and will slash him from all sides, leaving him into the bruises.

When Dean is trapped inside the tornado, Sasuke started gathering fire chakra in his lungs and breathed out a huge fireball and sent it towards already trapped Dean.
This fireball will burst into large amount of fire on contract with Dean, further amplified by wind tornado from previous move.

Show me more tricks....
Sasuke was excited to see what more his sensei has upon is sleeves apart from that wind jutsu.

Detective L · Mar 3, 2016

Hearing the all to well known sound of Lightning, Dean couldn't help but smirk.

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that an opponent would try this, but luckily for Dean, these chains weren't normal chains. These chains contained his chakra constantly, and through mental command, Dean merely severed the link of the chain in the middle, causing the Nagashi to go no further than that as he completed his movement and ripped the sword from Sasuke's hands as he jumped back.

At the same time, Dean blasts forward a Lightning bolt from his left hand, aimed at hitting Sasuke right in his chest. This was an odd Lightning technique, however, as it would merely constrain him as he sticks to the ground itself. Dean now stood at mid range from his opponent, and kept a watchful eye.

"Having difficulty moving, Mr Uchiha?"

I enjoyed this move as well. Normally, that technique would indeed be the end of anyone so close especially since you were connected, but this CFS has some cool perks that Oraan made sure to include, in order to prevent things like this from happening xD As for the Wind and Fire combo, it would have worked better using a Fire technique that rises from beneath Dean, to make my escape a bit more difficult. But of course, if I was paralyzed, it would have been a done deal, yeah? xD The more we fight, the better it gets. I want to see more U_U

The Sach · Mar 5, 2016

Detective L said:
Hearing the all to well known sound of Lightning, Dean couldn't help but smirk.
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that an opponent would try this, but luckily for Dean, these chains weren't normal chains. These chains contained his chakra constantly, and through mental command, Dean merely severed the link of the chain in the middle, causing the Nagashi to go no further than that as he completed his movement and ripped the sword from Sasuke's hands as he jumped back.

At the same time, Dean blasts forward a Lightning bolt from his left hand, aimed at hitting Sasuke right in his chest. This was an odd Lightning technique, however, as it would merely constrain him as he sticks to the ground itself. Dean now stood at mid range from his opponent, and kept a watchful eye.

"Having difficulty moving, Mr Uchiha?"

Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (30 if the victim breaks free)
Description: The user shoots a bolt of lightning towards the enemy, however once it hits, it doesn't do damage to the victim, instead it puts static electricity in them and sticks them into any surface they touch (including themselves). The victim must be Sage rank or have enhanced strength to break through the static charge, if they do, the electricity will discharge but they will take a little electrocution.
Note: Must wait 1 turn to use again.
Note: Only three times per battle

I enjoyed this move as well. Normally, that technique would indeed be the end of anyone so close especially since you were connected, but this CFS has some cool perks that Oraan made sure to include, in order to prevent things like this from happening xD As for the Wind and Fire combo, it would have worked better using a Fire technique that rises from beneath Dean, to make my escape a bit more difficult. But of course, if I was paralyzed, it would have been a done deal, yeah? xD The more we fight, the better it gets. I want to see more U_U

Thanks for those pointers. Should have thought of that. Btw you have got some nice CFS's there. I don't have any so I am just going to go with basics.xD

While channeling chakra through the chains, Sasuke observed that Dean channeled chakra through the chain too and broke the chain midway. Sasuke hopped behind a little and as a result got his sword snatched away. He wasn't expecting it but he didn't regret it as well. The sword had done its job and he is anyways going to get it back after defeating Dean.
While jumping back, Sasuke further observed that Dean gathered lightning chakra into his right hand. Sasuke's 3T sharingan was really useful in estimating this.
Being a proficient lightning user himself, Sasuke knew a lightning jutsu is going to come at him, as without wasting a moment he gathered wind chakra in his hand and then waved it in front of him from left to right to release a single large horizontal scythe of the wind that will be directed at the hand of Dean where he formed lightning.
This wind scythe will strike the lightning blast released by Dean and will overcome to continue towards Dean in the form of weakened wind scythe.

When Dean is busy countering the wind scythe, which might send him flying away, Sasuke bites his right hand thumb and then rubs it onto his summoning tattoo to bring his most powerful summon into the play, Manda.

Manda was summoned just in front of Sasuke, between him and Dean, which will also obstruct Dean's vision. Sasuke then channeled chakra right into his feat and took the property of the ground beneath it. As a result Sasuke became one with the ground and used this technique to travel underground and appeared at the right side of Dean at the range of 5 meters, without making a single noise. After appearing at his right side, Sasuke removed Kunai and started running towards him for assault.

When Sasuke was becoming one with the ground, he commanded Manda to dig underground and appear at the left side of Dean at the distance of about 10 meters. Manda followed Sasuke's orders and then started slithering towards Dean from the other side.

Detective L · Mar 8, 2016

Seeing the semi-translucent Wind blade coming towards him, Dean laughed as he created a small blunt pillar beneath his legs, to shoot him to his left, evading the fairly linear moving Wind blade. With it now out of the way, Dean could see something peculiar happen. With a large amount of smoke, a massive snake appeared, none other than the snake boss, Manda. Dean had faced him before, a real douche bag, to be honest. Nonetheless, the perfect moment for Dean to showcase his clan's abilities, no? Without the need for hand seals, Dean focus his chakra to his Mark of the Demon, and opened a large amount of portals, all around the entire battlefield. This caused dark Keigoku to fall from the sky, and touch and affect any sentient beings, the only two being Sasuke and his snake, Manda.

As the Keigoku touched Manda, his mind would be corrupted by it, causing him to turn on his master without a second thought. His massive tail would be brought towards Sasuke's side, now ignoring his commands completely. On the other hand, the Keigoku would cause Sasuke extreme pain, a searing burn within his mind, a power had never felt before (even if you do go underground and emerge). This was the power of the Nekura.

"Think I went a bit overboard there.."

Okay, that was a nice move, but bringing out a summon against a Nekura is never a good idea xD. Going underground whilst I was obscured was a good idea too. So just remember that one for future reference. My move is indeed a bit strong, but I think you can survive it, just read the Nekura CC submission for more information on our abilities, or send me a VM. I didn't use the boosts though, those are a bit too much.

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