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(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.

This jutsu involves you sending your chakra into the ground you want to dig in, to change the ground into a soft sand that you can easily dig through. Your chakra is what is changing the rock into sand but only in the immediate area you want to dig, allowing you to easily tunnel underground with your hands (like actual digging, like a kid in a sand pit-style) to either take your opponent off guard or to escape etc.
This jutsu also allows you to sense what is happening on the surface while you are tunnelling, in order to locate your target more effectively or better avoid them. However in order for you to sense your target, they actually need to be touching the ground ie. if they are riding on a flying-summon or standing on a tree-branch, you won't be able to detect them.

What are some major concerns when using this jutsu in plain sight of your opponent?

Also, here is a D-rank jutsu that is commonly used with this technique:
(Doton: Shinju Zanshu no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, emerging from the ground below the target area, pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. Unable to move, the opponent can easily be decapitated or tortured.
Note: user must already be underground through the use of (Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique

Pretty sure Kakashi used this early on in the series... again my memory is pretty dull. However, once you have used Hiding Like a Mole Technique, you will approach your target from beneath and grab their ankles, pulling them into the ground up to their neck, thus trapping them. You them emerge from the ground and do whatever you want to them while they are helplessly trapped in the ground.

So for both of these, well I'm sure you know how I want your replies by now... and answer the question I posed for the Hiding Like a Mole Technique.
after listen to his sensei explanation shikamaru ready to perform the tech.

he focuses his chakra to his feet then channel it to the ground turning the ground into sand. he then start digging the sand and move underground. after he reach under his sensei clone he then emerged under the clone. he didn't emerged completely the only thing can be see emerged is his hand. using his hand he grab the clone feet and pulling the clone underground leaving only the clone head emerged. he then emerged from the ground completely then proceed by taking a kunai then throw it to the clone head making it disperse.

"advantage of this tech is it doesn't require handseal and can be use to surprise attack the enemy. disadvantage of this tech is it would be dangerous if the enemy can sense the user underground because it can be Dodge and countered easily.

in battle this tech can be used to Dodge tech that are aimed at the user by submerged underground this tech can also be use as a surprise attack if the user block the enemy vision before use it.

about the question. if the enemy see the user going underground the enemy can easily use lightning tech to channel electricity into the ground to electrolytes the user and probably cause instant death.
"
 
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Sorry for the delay, I've been unwell for the past few days. >__<




(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.


(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

Okay, so read these jutsu and tell me how you think they are performed. For instance, what is your chakra doing to make these jutsu work (such as shape manipulation, where on the terrain does it go etc). Then provide me your analysis of these jutsu as you have for your previous responses.
 

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Sorry for the delay, I've been unwell for the past few days. >__<




(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.


(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

Okay, so read these jutsu and tell me how you think they are performed. For instance, what is your chakra doing to make these jutsu work (such as shape manipulation, where on the terrain does it go etc). Then provide me your analysis of these jutsu as you have for your previous responses.
its ok :) take care dont work to hard >.<



shikmaru read about the tech

"hurm... for this tech I need to send my chakra to the ground on the specific spot and form a few pillar or spike. I can use this to form under spike under my opponent to kill them or I can form a pillar under me to send myself flying to evade an attack. this tech can even pass through obstacle if I just a little dense. I can also perform this tech on all earth surface even on other earth tech of mine or my opponent.

advantage of this tech is it can be use quickly because it doesnt require handseal and can cause a good damage if it hit the enemy body. disadvantage of this tech is could be difficult to use if the user cant see the target.

in battle I can use it to suprise attack the enemy and I can use to destroy enemy cover.
"


next one

"for this one I will cocentrate my chakra and release it into the ground making a small tremor that can shake the ground making my opponent to lose footing, stumble or fall down.

advantage of this tech is it can make my opponent stumble and fall down and it can also the opponent lose their aim he throw an object or weapon because of the ground shaking. disadvantage of this tech is it would be useless if the opponent is in the air.

in battle I can use it to make my opponent stumble when they running towards me it can also be used to limit my opponent movement.
"
 

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Sorry again, also sorry I've not been RP'ing in response to your posts... I can RP if you'd like me to though... also not sure if I've mention that before or not... My memory is not as it was O__O'




(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

After concentrating earth chakra into the back of your throat, you'll spit it towards your target and thus materialise it into a sticky mud the moment it leaves your mouth, propelled by a burst of chakra to get the needed distance of course.

(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A (up to 60)
Descripton: The user will do one hand seal and cause nearby earth structures (either natural occurring ones on the field (such as cave ceilings, cliffs, etc), man made (buildings, etc) or jutsu made (up to C-Rank active structures)) to collapse and fall. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock and dislodge any vulnerable or sensitive spots, causing the structure to collapse. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside. The damage depends on the size of the cavern or rock lodging above or nearby the target and not on the amount of chakra used which doesn't need to be high. A large cave with a thick ceiling can easily do the physical damage equivalent to an A-Rank technique but due to the damage not being focused or chakra fueled, its also easily defendable.

So new approach to things... tell me what your chakra is doing to make this jutsu happen? Where it is going, are you using shape manipulation etc. Then give me the usual analysis like how you have for previous replies.
This is a pretty handy jutsu but it does require the appropriate terrain as it states in the description. However being under a sharp cliff face or even if your opponent is on the edge of an overhanging cliff this would also work to some greater or lesser extent.

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal (Tiger), the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and carries them away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.

So same as the last jutsu... what are you doing to make this jutsu work? Also, do you think you'd need to be on the higher ground for this to work more effectively?

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head that fires concentrated mud bullets at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent. The dragon can be created from other mud techniques as along as a mud source is available.

Really only useful if the previous jutsu has been used first or if there is a mud source (made from other mud/earth jutsu only) around but then can also be combined with a C-rank fireball jutsu to create a pseudo-lava jutsu... as the description mentions. Reply the same way you have for the previous two jutsu.
 

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Sorry again, also sorry I've not been RP'ing in response to your posts... I can RP if you'd like me to though... also not sure if I've mention that before or not... My memory is not as it was O__O'




(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

After concentrating earth chakra into the back of your throat, you'll spit it towards your target and thus materialise it into a sticky mud the moment it leaves your mouth, propelled by a burst of chakra to get the needed distance of course.

(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A (up to 60)
Descripton: The user will do one hand seal and cause nearby earth structures (either natural occurring ones on the field (such as cave ceilings, cliffs, etc), man made (buildings, etc) or jutsu made (up to C-Rank active structures)) to collapse and fall. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock and dislodge any vulnerable or sensitive spots, causing the structure to collapse. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside. The damage depends on the size of the cavern or rock lodging above or nearby the target and not on the amount of chakra used which doesn't need to be high. A large cave with a thick ceiling can easily do the physical damage equivalent to an A-Rank technique but due to the damage not being focused or chakra fueled, its also easily defendable.

So new approach to things... tell me what your chakra is doing to make this jutsu happen? Where it is going, are you using shape manipulation etc. Then give me the usual analysis like how you have for previous replies.
This is a pretty handy jutsu but it does require the appropriate terrain as it states in the description. However being under a sharp cliff face or even if your opponent is on the edge of an overhanging cliff this would also work to some greater or lesser extent.

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal (Tiger), the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and carries them away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.

So same as the last jutsu... what are you doing to make this jutsu work? Also, do you think you'd need to be on the higher ground for this to work more effectively?

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head that fires concentrated mud bullets at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent. The dragon can be created from other mud techniques as along as a mud source is available.

Really only useful if the previous jutsu has been used first or if there is a mud source (made from other mud/earth jutsu only) around but then can also be combined with a C-rank fireball jutsu to create a pseudo-lava jutsu... as the description mentions. Reply the same way you have for the previous two jutsu.



its ok if you dont want to response in rp it just I feel more comfortable if I response it in rp manner :)



I sense wall of text is coming :|

"alright 4 tech.. lets do this."

shikamaru focuses his earth chakra into his throat then he spit the chakra and he apply shape manipulation into the chakra making it materialise into sticky mud while he use raw chakra to propel the mud towards the the clone hitting it face, blinding his opponent completely. he then quickly throw a kunai to the clone chest making it disperse.

"advantage of this tech is it quite versatile because it can be used to blind and choke the opponent or can be used to make the ground slippery making opponent to lose it footing.
disadvantage of this tech is it could be hard to hit if opponent is constantly moving.
in battle I could use it on opponent landing spot to make it fall.
"

it seems that shikamaru doesn't have to perform the rest of the jutsu he just need to explain it.
shikamaru read the jutsu description then proceed to explain it.

"for this I will do one handseal and I will focuses my earth chakra to remove stone or rock on vital piece of a structure that support the whole ground cliff or ceiling causing it to weakening and collapses.

advantage of this tech is it can be used to suprise attack the enemy and can make the surrounding environment fight againts them.
disadvantage of this tech is I could danger myself if I dont use it carefully because some of the structure could hit myself and it can easily be countered with low-rank technique eventhough the scale of the attack is equivalent to an A-rank technique.
done:)
"


shikamaru then proceed to read description of the third tech and continue to explain about the tech.
"alright... I perform the tiger handseal then I focuses my earth chakra into the ground underneath my opponent then apply shape manipulation to turn the ground underneath my upponent into river of mud that can throw them of balance and carry them away from me.
hurm... I dont think been on higher ground will make any difference.

advantage of this tech is it could restrict my opponent movement and can be use to change my opponent distance from me.
disadvantage of this tech is it require handseal so my opponent can easily dodge it.
"

shikamaru read the last jutsu description and proceed to explain it.
"first I use the earth release earth flow river then I perform the Ram > Horse > Dragon handseal then I focuses my earth chakra on the mud river then apply shape manipulation to form a dragon like head from the mud after that I concentrated my earth chakra in the dragon head mouth to create mud bullet that can be shoot towards my opponent. this tech can be use with fire jutsu to turn the mud bullet into lava.

advantage of this tech is it can be shoot to long range and can be combine with fire jutsu to create more devastating bullet.
disadvantage of this tech if there no mud source available the user need to use the Earth Flow River first so my opponent can predict the attack can easily destroy it with low rank lightning tech.
"

shikamaru then look at his sensei waiting for response.
 

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its ok if you dont want to response in rp it just I feel more comfortable if I response it in rp manner :)



I sense wall of text is coming :|

"alright 4 tech.. lets do this."

shikamaru focuses his earth chakra into his throat then he spit the chakra and he apply shape manipulation into the chakra making it materialise into sticky mud while he use raw chakra to propel the mud towards the the clone hitting it face, blinding his opponent completely. he then quickly throw a kunai to the clone chest making it disperse.

"advantage of this tech is it quite versatile because it can be used to blind and choke the opponent or can be used to make the ground slippery making opponent to lose it footing.
disadvantage of this tech is it could be hard to hit if opponent is constantly moving.
in battle I could use it on opponent landing spot to make it fall.
"

it seems that shikamaru doesn't have to perform the rest of the jutsu he just need to explain it.
shikamaru read the jutsu description then proceed to explain it.
"for this I will do one handseal and I will focuses my earth chakra to remove stone or rock on vital piece of a structure that support the whole ground cliff or ceiling causing it to weakening and collapses.

advantage of this tech is it can be used to suprise attack the enemy and can make the surrounding environment fight againts them.
disadvantage of this tech is I could danger myself if I dont use it carefully because some of the structure could hit myself and it can easily be countered with low-rank technique eventhough the scale of the attack is equivalent to an A-rank technique.
done:)
"
Okay, so pretty basic in your description of what your chakra is actually doing. You gave me a headline, but what exactly are you doing with your chakra? Are you using shape or elemental manipulation to create new earth, how is the chakra removing this stone, do you need to do anything else with your chakra to cause the entire collapse?

For example, if I where to create a wall of fire (An actual c-rank fire jutsu but I'm not going to post it... cause it's not really needed for my point) I could answer as follows:
I focus my chakra into the ground in front of me to cause a wall of fire to erupt form the ground.
Now, while that is basically the jutsu and a paraphrased version of the jutsu description itself, I want you to go through the thought process of what your chakra is doing behind the scenes.​

Now, I could also answer as follows:
Focusing my fire chakra I release it into the ground through my feet (for some context, this jutsu doesn't require you to slam your hand on the ground or anything), sending the fire natured chakra to a concentrated point one meter in front of me. I think manipulate the chakra so that it forms a line from right-to-left before using elemental manipulation to turn the chakra into flames and adding an extra burst of fire chakra to cause it to erupt into a wall of flame.
I could also go into detail about how wide and how tall the wall is, but you get the point... hopefully? O__O'​

Also, don't let me catch you using this awesome description in your fire training with Akasha-sensei U__U'

shikamaru then proceed to read description of the third tech and continue to explain about the tech.
"alright... I perform the tiger handseal then I focuses my earth chakra into the ground underneath my opponent then apply shape manipulation to turn the ground underneath my upponent into river of mud that can throw them of balance and carry them away from me.
hurm... I dont think been on higher ground will make any difference.

advantage of this tech is it could restrict my opponent movement and can be use to change my opponent distance from me.
disadvantage of this tech is it require handseal so my opponent can easily dodge it.
"
Okay, you did better with this one... we can get super technical about how you alter the structure of the earth and blah blah but you did enough there.

However you answered my question but didn't provide a reasoning for your answer? So let's try a different question; if you wanted to make a river of mud flow towards your target and they are standing uphill from you, say five meters about you, do you think the river will flow towards them or back towards you instead? If you'd rather, throw a bucket of water against a steep driveway (throw it uphill) and either watch or imagine (not saying you have to try this) where the water flows.

shikamaru read the last jutsu description and proceed to explain it.
"first I use the earth release earth flow river then I perform the Ram > Horse > Dragon handseal then I focuses my earth chakra on the mud river then apply shape manipulation to form a dragon like head from the mud after that I concentrated my earth chakra in the dragon head mouth to create mud bullet that can be shoot towards my opponent. this tech can be use with fire jutsu to turn the mud bullet into lava.

advantage of this tech is it can be shoot to long range and can be combine with fire jutsu to create more devastating bullet.
disadvantage of this tech if there no mud source available the user need to use the Earth Flow River first so my opponent can predict the attack can easily destroy it with low rank lightning tech.
"

shikamaru then look at his sensei waiting for response.
@the bold... you're just spitting back info I gave you .__.

However at the rest of the description, it was the best one out of the three. Excellent.

So go back and correct the things I pointed out to you and toss any questions you may have my way please. ^^
 
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Okay, so pretty basic in your description of what your chakra is actually doing. You gave me a headline, but what exactly are you doing with your chakra? Are you using shape or elemental manipulation to create new earth, how is the chakra removing this stone, do you need to do anything else with your chakra to cause the entire collapse?

For example, if I where to create a wall of fire (An actual c-rank fire jutsu but I'm not going to post it... cause it's not really needed for my point) I could answer as follows:
I focus my chakra into the ground in front of me to cause a wall of fire to erupt form the ground.
Now, while that is basically the jutsu and a paraphrased version of the jutsu description itself, I want you to go through the thought process of what your chakra is doing behind the scenes.​

Now, I could also answer as follows:
Focusing my fire chakra I release it into the ground through my feet (for some context, this jutsu doesn't require you to slam your hand on the ground or anything), sending the fire natured chakra to a concentrated point one meter in front of me. I think manipulate the chakra so that it forms a line from right-to-left before using elemental manipulation to turn the chakra into flames and adding an extra burst of fire chakra to cause it to erupt into a wall of flame.
I could also go into detail about how wide and how tall the wall is, but you get the point... hopefully? O__O'​

Also, don't let me catch you using this awesome description in your fire training with Akasha-sensei U__U'

''urm... it different for every environment thats why I dont get more detailed so do I need to cover for every type of environment?

now I have learn about it I might copy it... wait I mean refer O-O''


Okay, you did better with this one... we can get super technical about how you alter the structure of the earth and blah blah but you did enough there.

However you answered my question but didn't provide a reasoning for your answer? So let's try a different question; if you wanted to make a river of mud flow towards your target and they are standing uphill from you, say five meters about you, do you think the river will flow towards them or back towards you instead? If you'd rather, throw a bucket of water against a steep driveway (throw it uphill) and either watch or imagine (not saying you have to try this) where the water flows.

''ahh sorry about that I thought you ask me being on higher ground not my opponent so I was thinking me being on higher ground and on the same ground with my opponent woudnt make any difference. so yeah if my opponent is on higher ground than me it will flow back to me thou I would never use this jutsu that way''

@the bold... you're just spitting back info I gave you .__.

However at the rest of the description, it was the best one out of the three. Excellent.

So go back and correct the things I pointed out to you and toss any questions you may have my way please. ^^
''urm... im not sure how would mud react to fire but I guess the fire would heaten up the mud to the point turning it into lava.''
 
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My comments on the last jutsu were not meant to be taken as you needing to fix anything xD

Anyway about your first question... No no you don't need to give me a scenario for every type of terrain, just give me a good description of one terrain of your choice. This is good practice for you as you need to learn to be clear about how you're interacting/changing the environment... Particularly since earth jutsu deal mainly with altering the terrain etc.

Any other questions?
 

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My comments on the last jutsu were not meant to be taken as you needing to fix anything xD

Anyway about your first question... No no you don't need to give me a scenario for every type of terrain, just give me a good description of one terrain of your choice. This is good practice for you as you need to learn to be clear about how you're interacting/changing the environment... Particularly since earth jutsu deal mainly with altering the terrain etc.

Any other questions?
''I focuses my chakra on the ceiling above my opponent then using nature manipulation I make the ceiling start to tremble weakening the ceiling structure and loosen up the rock causing the ceiling start to falling on my opponent below''

I hope this good enough

no question
 
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Much better ^^

See the problem when the sensei posts too many jutsu for you to work on? xD




(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.

After performing the four seals you'll release your chakra into the ground and manipulate it to push up several pillars of rock (not create new earth, but simple push up existing earth) to surround your opponent with a strong 'fence' of rock pillars.

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So same as before, perform the jutsu but be sure to pay attention to your descriptions, detailing what you are getting your chakra to do to perform the jutsu. Then tell me if you think this is useful in battle and why/why not? Also how you'd counter this and anything else you'd like to include.
 

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Much better ^^

See the problem when the sensei posts too many jutsu for you to work on? xD




(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.

After performing the four seals you'll release your chakra into the ground and manipulate it to push up several pillars of rock (not create new earth, but simple push up existing earth) to surround your opponent with a strong 'fence' of rock pillars.

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So same as before, perform the jutsu but be sure to pay attention to your descriptions, detailing what you are getting your chakra to do to perform the jutsu. Then tell me if you think this is useful in battle and why/why not? Also how you'd counter this and anything else you'd like to include.
yeah its a little confusing but if you gonna reply like once a week its ok to drop many jutsu but yeah it will be confusing a litte



''urm can I really focuses my chakra around my opponent in a circle manner than continue with the tech? or as It said in description I can move it so I create the pillar then move it to surround my opponent ? which one is the correct way?''
 
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You can do one or the other, it's a versatile jutsu that way. Also the amount of jutsu I will vary from reply to reply as I have no real set standard. xD
shikamaru start by performing Rat > Horse > Dog Snake after that he focuses his chakra around his opponent in circular manner then he apply nature manipulation to push the ground up around his opponent he also apply shape manipulation to form the pushing up ground into a pillar trapping his opponent inside it.

''maybe I should combine nature and shape manipulation then continue with how the ground move and form?

in battle it would be usefull because it can restrict or trap my opponent movement and I also could to rise infront of me to defend from an attack. disadvantage is the jutsu is C-rank so it can be destroy easily with a weak lightning tech.
for counter like I said it could easily be destroy with lightning tech so I would ise lightning tech to destroy the pillar''
 

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Could you tell me your current training stats please? Just curious for some things...
let's see

Shadow - Completed

Nin - Started
Tai - D-RANK
Gen - Started
Ken - B-Rank

Suiton - Started
Raiton - D-RANK
Katon - C-RANK
Fuuton - C-RANK
Doton - C-Rank
 
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