My 1st attempt at drawing Hinata

[Aikor]

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So this will be my 3rd official drawing of an anime character



Now this drawing is marked as a rough one because i want to redraw this perfectly without any mistakes

So i want u guys to list the problems in the picture and wht i should do to improve the drawing

Like for eg i think the curve of the face is not good

The eye shape etc

If someone who is good in drawing could list it down,so tht i can redraw this picture by noting down wht i did wrong
Thanks

 

[Zealous Sparks]

Nice 10/10

 

[ethris]

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So this will be my 3rd official drawing of an anime character

Meaning im a rookie artist

Now this drawing is marked as a rough one because i want to redraw this perfectly without any mistakes

So i want u guys to list the problems in the picture and wht i should do to improve the drawing

Like for eg i think the curve of the face is not good

The eye shape etc

If someone who is good in drawing could list it down,il be happy so tht i can redraw this picture by noting down wht i did wrong
Thanks

try out some shading, you can start with a base grey background and than shade parts darker and erase parts lighters, add details shadows and what not if you want to take it up a step.

figure out whats darkest in the picture, coat, hair, shadows, skin, and than shade in according to which should be lightest and darkest.

tho its more fun on humans, you can look at a picture of someone if you want and draw it by eye and add in detail where the details are on the photo.

 

[BoBoKittyDuck]

Very nice job!

 

[Sasuke tyeezy]

Face curvature, bang is a little to wide. Facial features are a little to small inside the the head. Im a rookie artist too so i also don't apply shading yet.

Note: I just pointed out things that I, myself, would attempt to fix however I'm still a novice so maybe im wrong on some points.

 

[Aikor]

Very nice job!

Nice 10/10

Thanks xD

try out some shading, you can start with a base grey background and than shade parts darker and erase parts lighters, add details shadows and what not if you want to take it up a step.

figure out whats darkest in the picture, coat, hair, shadows, skin, and than shade in according to which should be lightest and darkest.

tho its more fun on humans, you can look at a picture of someone if you want and draw it by eye and add in detail where the details are on the photo.

Oh yea il try tht

A friend of mine suggested me to "sketch" the drawing

But i am worried sketching might mess up the facial features like the eyes

Should i sketch?

Face curvature, bang is a little to wide. Facial features are a little to small inside the the head. Im a rookie artist too so i also don't apply shading yet.

Note: I just pointed out things that I, myself, would attempt to fix however I'm still a novice so maybe im wrong on some points.

I agree on the face curvature and the eyes look a little small i think

But im not sure how to fix the face curvature

Should i make it wide or thin or more curved or less curved

Im not sure what i should do ^

 

[Itachi Edo]

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So this will be my 3rd official drawing of an anime character

Meaning im a rookie artist

Now this drawing is marked as a rough one because i want to redraw this perfectly without any mistakes

So i want u guys to list the problems in the picture and wht i should do to improve the drawing

Like for eg i think the curve of the face is not good

The eye shape etc

If someone who is good in drawing could list it down,il be happy so tht i can redraw this picture by noting down wht i did wrong
Thanks

not bad, you have talent

 

[Ripple Hole]

You're major error was not including her chest.

 

[Henry1350cent]

wow that is nice 100/100

 

[NineSNS]

You're major error was not including her chest.

I think that's what everyone's here to see :snick:

OT nice job and thanks for sharing

 

[To Whatever]

Always rep Hinata.

 

[Masterpiece7]

Looks nice! Eyes are abit weird haha

 

[Hashirama Senjuu]

This makes me so happy about all of my first drawings.

 

[6thHokage]

Ew. Hinata.

 

[Asmodai]

nice

 

[nightwolf888]

I think its really good. Just be careful with the face next time. Her face is a little chubby/fat.

 

[scorezor]

it's perfect , dont mind the ppl.

 

[Gary777]

use drawing pencils which have more carbon .... n use youtube to learn more drawing techs ... nice pic of hinata btw :bouncy:

 

[Kyandii]

Looks nice, just keep on practicing with the shading and those rough edges. Also next time try using unlined paper.*_*