Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
(Kōton: Tetsuryū no Uroko) - Iron Dragon's Scales
Rank: A
Type: Attack/defence
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
Damage Points: +20 to tai
Description: The user covers part of his body (or the entirety of it) with steel scales to dramatically increase his offense and defense power. When punching while covered by these scales, the user will have increased strength to that of tsunades punches. These scales are strong enough to shatter bone and rock alike, resilient against regular flames (B rank or below), and much harder than normal steel. This is a more advanced version of Steel Release: Impervious Armour as it covers the entire body and and increases offensive powers at the same time. Though the jutsu adds +10 to taijutsu, as the users skin is as hard as steel, the defence propperties are equal to A rank steel.
Note: Lasts 2 turns per use
Note: Useable 3 times
Note: The user is more vulnerable to lightning in this form. If hit by a lightning jutsu, the lightning jutsu will be boosted by one rank
Note: Can't use lightning while active
✦ Declined, clashes with existing Steel CJ now. ✦
(Kōton: Tetsuryū no Hōkō)- Iron Dragon's Roar
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After gathering chakra into his mouth, the user shapes it into a powerful tornado which he subsequently emits and sends towards his foes. Such tornado possesses immense force, being capable of generating powerful blast like a hurriane and inflicting heavy blunt damage, but also releases sharp shards of steel in the process, to shred the opponents' body. This blast is very large and consists of 1000 small blades of steel.(see below for how it looks). The tornado controls the 1000 small sharp blades of steel the slice whatever they hit like it was being cut by 1000 super sharp razor blades.
Note: Useable twice
Note: No lightning jutsu in the same turn.
Note: No S ranks in the same turn
✦ Approved, pretty cool. Nice! ✦
(鉄竜の鋼拳 Tetsuryū no Gō Ken) - Iron Dragon's Hard Fist
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +20 to tai
Description: After having turned his body to steel through any method the user will release more chakra into their hands and feet to increase the strength of their taijutsu. With this technique the user will enhance their taijutsu attacks with more chakra that increases their punching and kicking power and speed. Because of this, when the user punches forwards the force behind the punch sends a shockwave forwards up to 5 meters pushing back anything it comes into contact with. Normally when a user is punched or hit by steel it's enough to fracture or break bones upon contact, with this, if the user makes contact the force behind the attack sends a shockwave through what is hit shattering the target (based on rank and elemental strengths still). For example if a bolder was hit in one place by this attack, there would be a shockwave sent through the bolder shattering it into pieces. If a ninja was hit in one rib with this, it would send a shock through that side of their ribcage breaking their ribs on that side of their body.
Note: Must turn body to steel before hand
Note: No Lightning Jutsu in the same turn
✦ Declined, what causes the shockwave to happen? Just the impact of being hit? I dont think that's really within Steel abilities. It seems close to the Gyojin CC abilities. ✦
Resubmitting:Resubmitting from a few years ago:
(Kōton: Tetsuryū no Uroko) - Iron Dragon's Scales
Rank: A
Type: Attack/defence
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
Damage Points: +20 to tai
Description: The user covers part of his body (or the entirety of it) with steel scales to dramatically increase his offense and defense power. When punching while covered by these scales, the user will have increased strength to that of tsunades punches. These scales are strong enough to shatter bone and rock alike, resilient against regular flames (B rank or below), and much harder than normal steel. This is a more advanced version of Steel Release: Impervious Armour as it covers the entire body and and increases offensive powers at the same time. Though the jutsu adds +10 to taijutsu, as the users skin is as hard as steel, the defence propperties are equal to A rank steel.
Note: Lasts 2 turns per use
Note: Useable 3 times
Note: The user is more vulnerable to lightning in this form. If hit by a lightning jutsu, the lightning jutsu will be boosted by one rank
Note: Can't use lightning while active
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(Kōton: Tetsuryū no Hōkō)- Iron Dragon's Roar
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After gathering chakra into his mouth, the user shapes it into a powerful tornado which he subsequently emits and sends towards his foes. Such tornado possesses immense force, being capable of generating powerful blast like a hurriane and inflicting heavy blunt damage, but also releases sharp shards of steel in the process, to shred the opponents' body. This blast is very large and consists of 1000 small blades of steel.(see below for how it looks). The tornado controls the 1000 small sharp blades of steel the slice whatever they hit like it was being cut by 1000 super sharp razor blades.
Note: Useable twice
Note: No lightning jutsu in the same turn.
Note: No S ranks in the same turn
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(鉄竜の鋼拳 Tetsuryū no Gō Ken) - Iron Dragon's Hard Fist
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +20 to tai
Description: After having turned his body to steel through any method the user will release more chakra into their hands and feet to increase the strength of their taijutsu. With this technique the user will enhance their taijutsu attacks with more chakra that increases their punching and kicking power and speed. Because of this, when the user punches forwards the force behind the punch sends a shockwave forwards up to 5 meters pushing back anything it comes into contact with. Normally when a user is punched or hit by steel it's enough to fracture or break bones upon contact, with this, if the user makes contact the force behind the attack sends a shockwave through what is hit shattering the target (based on rank and elemental strengths still). For example if a bolder was hit in one place by this attack, there would be a shockwave sent through the bolder shattering it into pieces. If a ninja was hit in one rib with this, it would send a shock through that side of their ribcage breaking their ribs on that side of their body.
Note: Must turn body to steel before hand
Note: No Lightning Jutsu in the same turn
‡ All Declined ‡ You can only submit on one account every cycle.
(Kōton: Tetsuryū no Uroko) - Iron Dragon's Scales
Rank: A
Type: Attack/defence
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
Damage Points: +20 to tai
Description: The user covers part of his body (or the entirety of it) with steel scales to dramatically increase his offense and defense power. When punching while covered by these scales, the user will have increased strength to that of tsunades punches. These scales are strong enough to shatter bone and rock alike, resilient against regular flames (B rank or below), and much harder than normal steel. This is a more advanced version of Steel Release: Impervious Armour as it covers the entire body and and increases offensive powers at the same time. Though the jutsu adds +10 to taijutsu, as the users skin is as hard as steel, the defence propperties are equal to A rank steel.
Note: Lasts 2 turns per use
Note: Useable 3 times
Note: The user is more vulnerable to lightning in this form. If hit by a lightning jutsu, the lightning jutsu will be boosted by one rank
Note: Can't use lightning while active
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✦ Declined, clashes with existing Steel CJ now. ✦
(Kōton: Tetsuryū no Hōkō)- Iron Dragon's Roar
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After gathering chakra into his mouth, the user shapes it into a powerful tornado which he subsequently emits and sends towards his foes. Such tornado possesses immense force, being capable of generating powerful blast like a hurriane and inflicting heavy blunt damage, but also releases sharp shards of steel in the process, to shred the opponents' body. This blast is very large and consists of 1000 small blades of steel.(see below for how it looks). The tornado controls the 1000 small sharp blades of steel the slice whatever they hit like it was being cut by 1000 super sharp razor blades.
Note: Useable twice
Note: No lightning jutsu in the same turn.
Note: No S ranks in the same turn
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✦ Approved, pretty cool. Nice! ✦
(鉄竜の鋼拳 Tetsuryū no Gō Ken) - Iron Dragon's Hard Fist
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +20 to tai
Description: After having turned his body to steel through any method the user will release more chakra into their hands and feet to increase the strength of their taijutsu. With this technique the user will enhance their taijutsu attacks with more chakra that increases their punching and kicking power and speed. Because of this, when the user punches forwards the force behind the punch sends a shockwave forwards up to 5 meters pushing back anything it comes into contact with. Normally when a user is punched or hit by steel it's enough to fracture or break bones upon contact, with this, if the user makes contact the force behind the attack sends a shockwave through what is hit shattering the target (based on rank and elemental strengths still). For example if a bolder was hit in one place by this attack, there would be a shockwave sent through the bolder shattering it into pieces. If a ninja was hit in one rib with this, it would send a shock through that side of their ribcage breaking their ribs on that side of their body.
Note: Must turn body to steel before hand
Note: No Lightning Jutsu in the same turn
✦ Declined, what causes the shockwave to happen? Just the impact of being hit? I dont think that's really within Steel abilities. It seems close to the Gyojin CC abilities. ✦
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