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Have you noticed how shit the story of Naruto became when Kishi's first editor left

For example
Sakura's character became utter shit
Hard work> Destiny theme became meaningless
Had no idea what to do with Sasuke
Had no idea what to do with Sai
Had no idea what to do with the K11
Had no idea how to kill off Madara
Arcs after pain arc were garbage

I'm sure if his first editor were still around the war would have been amazing, VOTE 2 would have been amazing, the defeat of Madara would have been satisfying, and the epilogue would make sense.

Mastermind of this series shall never be forgotten
 

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Have you noticed how shit the story of Naruto became when Kishi's first editor left

For example
Sakura's character became utter shit
Hard work> Destiny theme became meaningless
Had no idea what to do with Sasuke
Had no idea what to do with Sai
Had no idea what to do with the K11
Had no idea how to kill off Madara
Arcs after pain arc were garbage

I'm sure if his first editor were still around the war would have been amazing, VOTE 2 would have been amazing, the defeat of Madara would have been satisfying, and the epilogue would make sense.

Mastermind of this series shall never be forgotten
U make it sound like Kishimoto is crap without someone skilled telling him what to do :|
 

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Ur right a lot of things could have been better but no use complaining now
 

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Yeah I definitely agree with you. I hope you make more wonderful threads, the only problem is that I didn't read.

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The editor is the one who wrote kishi into that shit in the first place.
 
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The editor is the one who wrote kishi into that shit in the first place.
A kid could develop characters way better than kishimoto, and at the same time think of a proper way to continue the plot. Kinda is kishimoto's fault for not being so bright and thinking things through.
 

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A kid could develop characters way better than kishimoto, and at the same time think of a proper way to continue the plot. Kinda is kishimoto's fault for not being so bright and thinking things through.

If you never intended your story to go the way it went and the person editing your work leaves, it kind of leaves you to sort out the shit,
 
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If you never intended your story to go the way it went and the person editing your work leaves, it kind of leaves you to sort out the shit,
It shouldn't be hard to figure it out, plus he could have at least called his ex editor for some guidance
 
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