Meliodas

[Monxstaa]

Basic Information
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Name:Melidas
Nickname:Sin of Wrath
Gender:Male
Age:Unknown
Clan:N/A​

"Even if you were to die... I would fulfill the promise I made with you"

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Looks: Despite having the appearance of a child, he is an adult He is exceptionally short compared to other characters, with messy blond hair and a pair of emerald green eyes. He also lacks facial hair, further accentuating his adolescent appearance. Regardless of his stature and youthful looks, he is relatively muscular, possessing an array of well-developed abdominal muscles. He is often shown wearing an ordinary, clean white button-front shirt and a black sleeveless vest on top with a loosely worn tie.​

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Personality:​

Meliodas's dominant traits are his frankness and his utter fearlessness. He is also shown to be very bawdy and loves to frequently tell jokes. Despite his title as the Sin of Wrath, he appears to be a very calm person. However, if his companions or friends are harmed in any way, he is greatly angered. Meliodas dislikes killing, preferring to be merciful. Meliodas is not naive or a simpleton, but just really kind.Meliodas appears to have a dark side personality when he sees that his friends are in trouble he does anything to protect them​

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Village InfoN/A

Village of Birth:

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Village of Alliance:N/A

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank:S-Jounin
Specialty:N/A
Elements:Lighting in need of training
Your ninjutsu:E-Rank​

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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Theme Song and Background Music:

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[video=youtube;cuSRNtdlMS8]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cuSRNtdlMS8[/video]

Picture:

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Background Info
Meliodas past is currently unknown as he seems to be unable to age over the years. he became genin at the age of 8 at the age 14.

BattlesN/A

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A​

 

[Glad Of War]

I think you need to put up a village of birth, and your Background info should be more Narutoverse related. Regardless, it's still a cool Biography!

Edit: Remove that age :lol

 

[iNotorious]

Make a paragraph background.

Simple design, +1.

 

[Imperfect]

Hey, going to give you some more pointers. First you may want to remove the Wikipedia reference links, as they just look unprofessional, but overall they aren't an issue. Next, and probably the biggest problem you have (which isn't that serious in the grand scheme, but still isn't allowed) is the fact you state that your character is over 3000 years old. I don't know the series this character is from, nor the context of this character in his own respective series, however you can't have a character like that on here. All characters submitted are bound by the context of the Naruto universe, with the exclusion of some rare cases, like the Binkan Custom Clan who can live for many years and not actually age all that much or at all, but that's a unique case as that's a Custom Clan with it's own benefits. You'll need to make your characters age more believable, even if he 3000+ years in his own series, that's just how this RP works man, sorry. You should also try and create a small back story for the character. Try and keep it within the context of Naruto, but you can be creative with it since this isn't a Cannon Naruto character, so you can borrow from his original series, just don't mention anything about his true age in his own series and you should be ready to go.

 

[Mirai]

1. You need more history then that.
2. You can't be more then 3000+ years, thats making you older then the Sage of Six Paths himself which is illogical.
3. You can learn three elements at S-Jounin Rank.

 

[Monxstaa]

Hey, going to give you some more pointers. First you may want to remove the Wikipedia reference links, as they just look unprofessional, but overall they aren't an issue. Next, and probably the biggest problem you have (which isn't that serious in the grand scheme, but still isn't allowed) is the fact you state that your character is over 3000 years old. I don't know the series this character is from, nor the context of this character in his own respective series, however you can't have a character like that on here. All characters submitted are bound by the context of the Naruto universe, with the exclusion of some rare cases, like the Binkan Custom Clan who can live for many years and not actually age all that much or at all, but that's a unique case as that's a Custom Clan with it's own benefits. You'll need to make your characters age more believable, even if he 3000+ years in his own series, that's just how this RP works man, sorry. You should also try and create a small back story for the character. Try and keep it within the context of Naruto, but you can be creative with it since this isn't a Cannon Naruto character, so you can borrow from his original series, just don't mention anything about his true age in his own series and you should be ready to go.

thanks

 

[Monxstaa]

1. You need more history then that.
2. You can't be more then 3000+ years, thats making you older then the Sage of Six Paths himself which is illogical.
3. You can learn three elements at S-Jounin Rank.

i dont want to learn 3 yet

 

[Deviation]

1. The age needs to change
2. The Kenjutsu specialty should go unless you already have legit training. In this case you are new so you don't have any training. Specialty should be N/A and Elements should be at least one element you wish to train in first.
3. The weapon nullifying effect of your weapon needs to go. If you want to make one with abilities, you need to submit that as a custom jutsu in the appropriate thread. Just put you use a sword and that's it.
4. Remove the spoiler and make sure to add what the template says like the E-Rank ninjutsu techs everyone starts off with.
5. Add a history and make sure it fits in context to the Naruto world as well as make it logical for a kid his age.

 

[Monxstaa]

1. The age needs to change
2. The Kenjutsu specialty should go unless you already have legit training. In this case you are new so you don't have any training. Specialty should be N/A and Elements should be at least one element you wish to train in first.
3. The weapon nullifying effect of your weapon needs to go. If you want to make one with abilities, you need to submit that as a custom jutsu in the appropriate thread. Just put you use a sword and that's it.
4. Remove the spoiler and make sure to add what the template says like the E-Rank ninjutsu techs everyone starts off with.
5. Add a history and make sure it fits in context to the Naruto world as well as make it logical for a kid his age.

i didnt get 4 care to explain please

 

[Adam Driver]

Remove your specialty and weapons, you have no training in either, and remove the ninjutsu you don't have any training in any of that as well. Put the basic E Rank ninjutsu provided in the bio template thread. And your bio and bio's history is suppose to be Naruto world related.

 

[Adam Driver]

Also, your not in training. Your bio needs to be approved first before you can train so remove that as well. Put "needs training" or "N/A" for the time being.

 

[Monxstaa]

Also, your not in training. Your bio needs to be approved first before you can train so remove that as well. Put "needs training" or "N/A" for the time being.

thanks dude take a look now becuz ima go sleep <3

 

[Adam Driver]

thanks dude take a look now becuz ima go sleep <3

Everything is still off, and you don't need to use the standard bio template, take time and be creative with your bio and history. Don't force yourself into making a bio just for the sake of it. RP is all about being creative.
Read this thread thoroughly

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Check out the Naruto world RP section so you can see how a lot of things are done, it's all about being creative. We all make out our own story and situations with characters we create or choose not something we can copy off Wiki.

 

[Monxstaa]

Everything is still off, check this thread out to understand how to make a bio. And you don't need to use the standard bio template, take time and be creative with your bio and history. Don't force yourself into making a bio just for the sake of it. RP is all about being creative.
Read this thread thoroughly

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damn i got a headache i will do this tomorrow

 

[RuckenTM]

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Like & Run~

 

[Leathercandle]

Nice looking bio, welcome to the RP mate

 

[Reborn]

I'm not approving this, you have barely more than a single line worth of history. Please put a little bit more effort into your bio. You don't need a novel for your background, but a few sentences to make a descent small paragraph at least. That will suffice.