Drake 10 Bands

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Check out my remix to Drake 10 Bands :yeah::cool:=D thanks!

 

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You meant Quentin Miller.

OT: Your rhymes are too simple IMO. Decent flow though. Keep it up bud.
 

Kaneki Kun

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Work on your pacing, certain moments your flow is doing decent but then fall by rushing into a verse too quick which messes up the transition, not only that but be careful what letters your next verse is going to start off or mainly use because it's going to sound abrupt and sudden which can mess up the vibe.

Not bad however just try not to make your lyrics basic and make them have some references behind them and work on your tone, you don't want to sound like every mono toned rapper out there, add some emotion into it.
 
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Work on your pacing, certain moments your flow is doing decent but then fall by rushing into a verse too quick which messes up the transition, not only that but be careful what letters your next verse is going to start off or mainly use because it's going to sound abrupt and sudden which can mess up the vibe.

Not bad however just try not to make your lyrics basic and make them have some references behind them and work on your tone, you don't want to sound like every mono toned rapper out there, add some emotion into it.

thanks for the feedback man! I appreciate it really, I wanna get better and stuff like this that breaks it down is like a check list for me
 

Kaneki Kun

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thanks for the feedback man! I appreciate it really, I wanna get better and stuff like this that breaks it down is like a check list for me

No problem man just keep working on it and don't give up, patience is key.
 
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