Autumn leaves

[Byron123]

I lost it all when my mind cleared
the dreams I had, the need to live.
To learn the beauties of this world
caress the body, cherish the soul.

Complete ignorance, all I felt
when I questioned what was left.
A playground I can’t remember
those bright smiles that left forever…

Now, I look at my fine art,
memento of an old heart
growing rusty, growing cold.
Did I ever believe in hope?

 

[Sasori]

Very Nice work.

 

[WazzY Kage]

nice and good

 

[Defence]

Great poem.

Has a nostalgic impact on me. Ty for sharing

 

[Byron123]

Great poem.

Has a nostalgic impact on me. Ty for sharing

Thank you for liking it

 

[Hotaruko]

nice thread of words, byron

 

[Byron123]

nice thread of words, byron

Thank you

 

[fiend]

Brilliant work dude especially the final paragraph. Beautiful poem <3.

 

[Byron123]

Brilliant work dude especially the final paragraph. Beautiful poem <3.

Thanks man, it means the world to me =D

 

[Six Paths]

I don't have the strength to judge or critique your work. Just, too damn deep.

 

[Byron123]

Very Nice work.

nice and good

I don't have the strength to judge or critique your work. Just, too damn deep.

Thank you all guys for your kind words