AnbuKirito vs Kagetora (closed)

[Anbu Kirito]

Is that what it looks like? Btw Juha is my fire trainer
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Saitama sees Lee dashing towards him and quickly forms a shield made out of water to block Lee's initial kick but still takes some of the damage(c rank>d rank). As he lays on the ground he sees Lee coming down at him and being wet from the water splashed on him. Saitama aims both palms and shoots two lightning bolts that shock and paralyze him. The water adds to the damage of the attack making it a C rank technique in power. This makes Lee land near Saitama who gets up reeling from the attacks.

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

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I use the jutsu twice so their damage doubles and get amplified by the water making it a strong C rank.

Hate to argue again, but that wouldn't souble the strength. It would bump up its damage to 30 and become c rank. Also yeah, Konoha Daisenpu is like a shoryuken with kicks, ending by slamming them to the ground.

Lee, looming over his opponent, sees him raise 2 palms. As the palms are raised, Lee jumps back 2 feet and watches the 2 lightning bolts be fired into the sky. Lee then jumps forward, so his foot is on Saitama's neck. Lee then says, "Nighty Night!" And pushes down, crushing it.

 

[Yubel]

Hate to argue again, but that wouldn't souble the strength. It would bump up its damage to 30 and become c rank. Also yeah, Konoha Daisenpu is like a shoryuken with kicks, ending by slamming them to the ground.

Lee, looming over his opponent, sees him raise 2 palms. As the palms are raised, Lee jumps back 2 feet and watches the 2 lightning bolts be fired into the sky. Lee then jumps forward, so his foot is on Saitama's neck. Lee then says, "Nighty Night!" And pushes down, crushing it.

How do you "jump back" when you're in midair? There is no way for you to dodge this.
Also both lightning together would be two times the strength of one so the damage doubles, 1+1=2.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

How do you "jump back" when you're in midair? There is no way for you to dodge this.
Also both lightning together would be two times the strength of one so the damage doubles, 1+1=2.

Okay, but Im in the air, as are you, because i'm kicking you into the air by spinning upwards. Its just like the shoryuken. I then smash you into the ground with the heel of my foot. This would break your nose and probably crack a bone in your neck when you hit the ground due to whiplash and impact. Through this much pain, you wouldn't be able to focus something requiring as much control as lightning.

 

[Yubel]

Okay, but Im in the air, as are you, because i'm kicking you into the air by spinning upwards. Its just like the shoryuken. I then smash you into the ground with the heel of my foot. This would break your nose and probably crack a bone in your neck when you hit the ground due to whiplash and impact. Through this much pain, you wouldn't be able to focus something requiring as much control as lightning.

Since you're using taijutsu, please explain your moves more clearly, I don't know what shoryuken is and I didn't know I was in midair aswell. Anyways I can use the lightning because I softened the impact from your initial kick. That's why I'm not so damaged I can't use lightning.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

This a shoryuken:

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Imagine that as a kick.

 

[Yubel]

This a shoryuken:

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Imagine that as a kick.

Anyway you have two lightning bolts heading for you in midair as you're attacking, make your move.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Okay.
Lee, finishing his kick by smashing his opponent into the ground, is still above his now grounded opponent in midair. Lee then sees Saitama point both of his palms upwards towards Lee. "Shit!" says Lee under his breath. Lee, to avoid the bolts of lightning approaching his face, quickly tilts his body into a backflip, pushing away using inertia, but the lightning bolts do still graze the base of his feet, causing some pain. Lee then lands and gets into his normal fighting position, motioning for his opponent to attack him, once more.

 

[Yubel]

Okay.
Lee, finishing his kick by smashing his opponent into the ground, is still above his now grounded opponent in midair. Lee then sees Saitama point both of his palms upwards towards Lee. "Shit!" says Lee under his breath. Lee, to avoid the bolts of lightning approaching his face, quickly tilts his body into a backflip, pushing away using inertia, but the lightning bolts do still graze the base of his feet, causing some pain. Lee then lands and gets into his normal fighting position, motioning for his opponent to attack him, once more.

Since you're wet the water would conduct the lightning and shock your whole body for a moment.
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As Lee starts charging Saitama he gets irritated and releases fire chakra around his body as he charges aswell, once they're about to get in short range Saitama sends the fire to travel on the ground around Lee, making a circle that momentarily blocks Lee's vision of Saitama who while running around the circle to the right throws a papertagged kunai inside the fire which explodes as it passes the flames that ignites it immediately but that was Saitama's plan all along as he continues to run inorder to conceal his position he times the explosion with a lightning technique, making sure the sound of the explosion hides the sound of crackling electricity. He sends lightning through his palms to the ground which shocks Rock Lee from below.

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will release a small but powerful flame of fire at their opponent from either their limbs (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce fire balls or fire streams or simply aid in taijutsu.

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Hahaha! One problem. You can't see new through the fire either!!
Lee, seeing a circle of fire surround him, simply jumps out of it to the left. As saitama wouldn't have seen him do this and is still running in circles, Lee sticks his arm out into saitama's running path so that he will run in to it.

 

[Yubel]

Hahaha! One problem. You can't see new through the fire either!!
Lee, seeing a circle of fire surround him, simply jumps out of it to the left. As saitama wouldn't have seen him do this and is still running in circles, Lee sticks his arm out into saitama's running path so that he will run in to it.

Saitama sees Lee above him as he was jumping out of the circle and throws the papertagged kunai at him instead. As Lee was jumping he wouldn't know Saitama's position was where he jumped to which gets him killed.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Lee, in the air, is moving to the outside of the circle when he sees a papertagged kunai approaching him. Lee draws a kunai of his own to counter it, moving the explosion away from him. Lee then leaps backwards and waits for Saitama to attack him. "Are you going to throw a punch, or what?"

 

[Yubel]

Lee, in the air, is moving to the outside of the circle when he sees a papertagged kunai approaching him. Lee draws a kunai of his own to counter it, moving the explosion away from him. Lee then leaps backwards and waits for Saitama to attack him. "Are you going to throw a punch, or what?"

As Lee counters the kunai Saitama makes a quick string of handseals and creates a whip made out of water which he swings and wrap around Lee with as he pulls and has him land on the ground.

Let's try this again.

While still maintaining a hold of Lee who can't move his arms. Saitama throws 3 kunais with paperbomb at Lee, finishing him off.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Lee, seeing the approaching whip, pushing through and extinguishing the fire easily, throws a paper tagged kunai, and a smoke bomb, distorting the area, and destroying the whip. Lee then takes advantage of this, and jumps into the air, throwing 8 paper tagged kunai into the smoke, pushing it away, and severly burning if not destroying everything inside. Lee then lands, a moves back to 2 meters from where the smoke was. Drawing a kunai for self defense incase somehow his enemy could still fight.

 

[Yubel]

Lee, seeing the approaching whip, pushing through and extinguishing the fire easily, throws a paper tagged kunai, and a smoke bomb, distorting the area, and destroying the whip. Lee then takes advantage of this, and jumps into the air, throwing 8 paper tagged kunai into the smoke, pushing it away, and severly burning if not destroying everything inside. Lee then lands, a moves back to 2 meters from where the smoke was. Drawing a kunai for self defense incase somehow his enemy could still fight.

As Saitama starts witnessing this chaos he moves underground and follows Lee as he's looking at the smoke. Wasting no time, Saitama surprises him by grabbing both his legs from below and shocking him with lightning. Lee is now unable to move and is laying on the ground numb so Saitama decides to finish him off with an earth spike to the head.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Hahahah. You just killed yourself. Hiding like a mole only lets you use earth techniques below C-rank. So, no earth spikes, no lightning. Too bad. You just made that mistake. We've both made mistakes a couple times. Im not letting that one slide. Good Game. I win.
Rock Lee, standing still, staring into the smoke, is suddenly grabbed from underneath, and feels lightning chakra about to surge through him, but then blood explodes from the ground. Lifts his leg, to see the arm has been severed as well.
WIN!
Saitamaead,Crushed,Mangled
Lee: A bit shocked
Good fight my friend.

 

[Yubel]

Hahahah. You just killed yourself. Hiding like a mole only lets you use earth techniques below C-rank. So, no earth spikes, no lightning. Too bad. You just made that mistake. We've both made mistakes a couple times. Im not letting that one slide. Good Game. I win.
Rock Lee, standing still, staring into the smoke, is suddenly grabbed from underneath, and feels lightning chakra about to surge through him, but then blood explodes from the ground. Lifts his leg, to see the arm has been severed as well.
WIN!
Saitamaead,Crushed,Mangled
Lee: A bit shocked
Good fight my friend.

If you're gonna play like that then you died in the beginning, you've been dodging all of my moves with freeform taijutsu.
You were dead from the start.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Um what do you mean. There's nothing wrong with dodging your moves. I'm not playing "like that". You can dodge with Freeform and Taijutsu. Still that killed you. The only things Rock Lee can use are Freeform and tai. He's Rock Lee.

 

[Yubel]

Um what do you mean. There's nothing wrong with dodging your moves. I'm not playing "like that". You can dodge with Freeform and Taijutsu. Still that killed you. The only things Rock Lee can use are Freeform and tai. He's Rock Lee.

In this RP you can't dodge a move unless you use a technique that lets you dodge so you were killed by my earth spikes from the start.

 

[Omega]

Saitama in sig
*throws a rock*

-_-

Lee, with blistering speed, flicks his hand and catches the rock, a simple feat possibly preformed by any ninja. Rock lee then makes the face drawn above, still keeping his stance intact.

Saitama focuses chakra which makes the ground shake all of a sudden to make Lee fall and then sends earth spikes from below to stab him from all sides to death.

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking

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Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes

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Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

Okay then.
Lee feels a slight bit of movement in the ground. He leaps, sensing the earth's movement, and looks down, seeing the spikes that could have impaled him. As they recede, Lee lands and dashes towards his opponent. Lee then aims a punch with his right hand at saitama's face, but then, to fake out saitama, he flicks his arm downwards, changing his standard punch into an uppercut, punching Saitama into the sky. Lee then flips back to mid range and smiles as his opponent lands on his back from the height, hopefully quite injured.

This is an unofficial fight between some upcoming ninjas in training who are too OP for me to fight so don't pick on me. I will offer my take on the situation and hopefully help you guys learn something even though I am not teaching any of you. LOL (I don't think a sensei needs to take time out to check this but they can if they feel like it.) Again cuz this is unofficial use this time as a learning experience even though you were both trying to win.

First I'd like to say @Anbu that I admire you actually going for only taijutsu bio but you still have to fight within the rules. If you want to know how, try and look at some samurai fights and see how they dodge, or attack opponents as they are also limited to close range fights. Now it is in my judgement that Kagetora killed you in the beginning of this fight when he used his first actual jutsu. I don't use a lot of freeform but Im a fairly certain you cannot just jump up...hang midair for what was basically two jutsu and land. Also the stone spikes do not recede back into the ground. You landed and got skewered since I assume you jumped straight up and came straight down. Other moments had mistakes and others not so much but that was the most glaring. (I don't even want to go into the change of body stance. I never use that thing because I am prone to using it wrong and getting killed. >_>)

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And Anbu you might really benefit from this. If you stick to that bio.

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The actual moves themselves weren't actually half bad but some were used incorrectly. @Kag The hiding like a mole technique is good but you should remember that you get crushed if you start using other jutsu besides earth under C rank. If a sensei decided to let the other stuff slide and just grade the part in question because you let it play on then Anbu might have won but again he just as easily could lose if we take the whole fight into account. Also one last glaring mistake imo. You cant destroy a ranked water whip the way you did. You can counter it perhaps, (which doesn't mean destroying it necessarily) but it would be affected but not destroyed.

Combining jutsus-Anbu is right. If you actually combine jutsu then they will rank up and take on C rank stats (if 2 d rank were combined) however that is not the same as just using something twice. A wind and water jutsu would actually mix to form a new water jutsu. A fire and lighting jutsu would only be two separate jutsu so technically damage would be double if they get hit twice but the techs would remain their same rank so be sure the attacks are actually mixed or just used as a seperate combination.

My vm's are always open. I know a lot but not everything. Let me know if I missed something or misunderstood something you wrote. I can either help you or point you in the right directions if you need anything.