[Adventure] Little Poet

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I'm a little poet,
No one adjoins to hear;
My songs and my stories,
Some chuckle, some sneer.

I work hard with my words,
And never tell a lie.
In my poetic canticles,
That some reviewers decry.

Unperceived by them,
As a phoenix, again and again I rise;
Just to show that this little poet,
Knows of no compromise.

And I write of politics,
My love, sadness and joy;
I pour my soul out constantly,
But the reviewers still deny.

And I write of the struggle,
A denseness once known.
Of an odyssey that a man takes
And man makes alone

I write of the pleasant, and
I write of the bad.
All the things that make me happy;
Or the ones that make me sad.

My words are so simple,
My message is loud and clear;
I'm a little poet
I'll march on and show no fear.
 

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nice

"My message is loud and clear;
I'll march on and show no fear."
<3
 

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Unperceived by them,
As a phoenix, again and again I rise;
Just to show that this little poet,
Knows of no compromise.

Just keep going like this bro.:cool: Excellent poem. :)
 

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Whoa I actually get this one XD
 

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Whoa I actually get this one XD

You do? :rolleyes:
Enlighten me?

It was actually a poem request by Azu, she told me that I should go write a poem on how I'm a little poet writing little poems, but go figure I dived a bit deeper into it. xd
 

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You do? :rolleyes:
Enlighten me?

It was actually a poem request by Azu, she told me that I should go write a poem on how I'm a little poet writing little poems, but go figure I dived a bit deeper into it. xd

Nahh you good xd
 

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Awesome, like it <3
 

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Very nice, now you'll say that I'm picky but you might want to change forth stanza's last word since you tried so hard to keep the rhyme between the second and forth line of every other stanza :)
 

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Very nice, now you'll say that I'm picky but you might want to change forth stanza's last word since you tried so hard to keep the rhyme between the second and forth line of every other stanza :)

True, but for me it weirdly goes well along w second stanza, I liked the rhythm. Try to reread it few times. :p

Glad you liked it bro. :)
 

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True, but for me it weirdly goes well along w second stanza, I liked the rhythm. Try to reread it few times. :p

Glad you liked it bro. :)

Yeah the meaning was very good, I was pointing towards the format since you chose to follow it strictly XD
 

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Yeah the meaning was very good, I was pointing towards the format since you chose to follow it strictly XD

F**k the rules, I live dangerously.xd :scorps:
 
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