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How can I describe,
What's going on in my mind;
When even my heart can't seem to find,
That right feeling,
To define the meaning,
Of the thought that started it all?

How can I fix,
This deep chain of events,
That appear to have mixed;
In this world that has now been created?
Out in the open and love sedated.

Cornered in anxiety,
I'm afraid of nothing
But in fear of everything.

I'm trying to define,
This hurricane of emotions that howls inside,
And maybe, just maybe, finally bring some closure to my mind.​
 
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That's a very deep poem. Thank you for sharing.
 

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Thank you for reading and enjoying the read.
 

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The last line really overwhelmed me.
 

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"I'm afraid of nothing
But in fear of everything. "
Like this line. Entire piece was good bro. xD
 

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Thx for the kind words guys, I'm glad you've enjoyed the read. :)
 

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How can I fix,
This deep chain of events,
That appear to have mixed;
In this world that has now been created?
Out in the open and love sedated.

daym..... i got you bro u_u
 

Waindo

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Ikr, I'm writing so deep I'm drowning atm. o_O
 

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That stanza 2 and 3 left me at a loss of words. U_U, The emotional turmoil is beautifully reflected in your words, a powerful one dude.=D.
 

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That stanza 2 and 3 left me at a loss of words. U_U, The emotional turmoil is beautifully reflected in your words, a powerful one dude.=D.

2nd stanza is my fav too. U_U
Well I always pour my soul out don't I...:wesobi:
If I keep up with this writing pace people are gonna be like; "poem or it didn't happen."

:lmao:
 

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2nd stanza is my fav too. U_U
Well I always pour my soul out don't I...:wesobi:
If I keep up with this writing pace people are gonna be like; "poem or it didn't happen."

:lmao:

This I totally agree with :).
Yep soon they'll not believe your emotions unless you write a poem about it. XD
 

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No, no...Fold my laundry,, I was just folding it back then.ᕦ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ᕤ
 

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When you write a poem about not being able to express yourself but you end up expressing yourself, and that too deep-seatedly. :wesobi:
 

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When you write a poem about not being able to express yourself but you end up expressing yourself, and that too deep-seatedly. :wesobi:

Can't help it. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
 
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