[Approved] Sebastian

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Sebastian
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Name: Sebastian; Jacob
Nickname: Firebrand
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Clan: N/A
Height: 156 centimeters
Looks:

Sebastian is a slim, handsome, athletic teenage boy. His normal hair color is orange with green eyes, which can be seen during times of peace. He has a disorder, however which gives him multiple personalities that will take over his body, given the correct circumstances on a day-to-day basis. A person is able to tell exactly "who" he his by looking at the color of his hair. This distinction, is what gave him his true attractiveness as a person since early childhood.

Personalities:



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Sebastian's varying personalities change by conditions and mood. His lead persona-the original one from childbirth-name is Sebastian.​
Sebastian is nice, gentle, and caring; especially towards those who he holds dear. After losing both of his parents, he made up his mind about caring for everyone and everything, and giving everything the love he feels, it deserves. Sebastian however, is very shy when it comes to meeting new people, and he tends to keep himself within his immediate circle of friends. He is also very trusting when it comes to people who he met before, and would even go as far as to trust them with his life. He has an often laid back, compassionate vibe that's given off from him to everyone around him. This is what so many people loved about Sebastian. Sebastian however, almost vanished from earth, when the most traumatic event in his life took place; the death of his beloved parents. This event awakened a new personality deep within Sebastian. That persona's name is Jacob, The Firebrand.


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Jacob (A.K.A Firebrand), is an intelligent, brave, athletic, courageous, and powerful tactician. His first appearance was during the Escape Arc (Which can be seen below), immediately following the death of his parents and closest friends. Jacob arose after seeing all of his friends, and parents massacred by 3 brutal criminals who broke into their homes on one dreadful night. The only thing Sebastian could do was cower in a corner, scared for his own life during this event. He trapped himself in a closet, out of sight from the criminals. By looking through a crack in the door, he seen every, single thing (some things too gory and heinous to even mention in this bio), that the sick, twisted criminals did. The thing that changed his life entirely during this event, was hearing the cry of his 2 year old sister, on the ground next to the criminals. After he remembered his little sister who he loved so dearly, the person who he wanted to protect with everything he had, Jacob awakened to save her from those criminals​


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Village of Birth: Amegakure​
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Village of Alliance:
Sunagakure​
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Ninja Rank: Chuunin​
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Specialty:​ None



Techniques:
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Elements:
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Weapons: Kunai, Shuriken, sword. [/LEFT]

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Arc I: The Start of it All
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Sebastian was born Before the destruction of the Rain village. Born to a family in total shambles. Born with his father paralyzed from the waist down, his mother was forced to be the one to find food for them all. The family was too poor to relocate to another village. Their only hope of survival was to find food within the confines of the Hidden Rain. In order to provide for her family, Sebastian's mother resorted to theft, and even "selling herself" to people in order to get food. This of course, wasn't much a choice for the new mother. It was a matter of life and death, and choosing not to do what was necessary wouldn't only mean death of herself, but the death of her family as well. With a new born baby, she had to choose to do whatever it took to get the food, for its sake.

Act II: Second Birth
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9 years following Sebastian's birth, came another child; his sister. His sister, named Genesis had brown hair, red eyes, and weighed in at 2.5 Kilograms. This child was the new ray of sunshine, for the entire family, including Sebastian himself. Her smile made even the meanest of foes happy. She was given the name "Genesis", because her mother believed that she would mark the start of a New Beginning for the entire family, for the better. Little did she know, she was terribly wrong. With another child, the family went deeper into poverty, deeper than anyone could have ever imagined. Sebastian, at the age of 9 had to help care for the family because of that. He had to hunt for fish in the waters, steal from neighbors, and even had to rob a store, barely escaping death from that.

Sebastian wanted to hate Genesis for the hardship that she caused the family, but no matter how much he tried to hate her for ever being born, he found himself with a stronger and stronger urge to protect her, no matter what it would cost. This would actually test itself, soon to come...

Act III (Part One): The Start of the End
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Only a few months after the birth of Genesis, the unexpected happened. The event that changed the hidden rain village forever; its destruction. Sebastian and his family was only one of the few to survive it. With Sebastian's father being paralyzed from the waist down, relocating would be next to impossible. The family decided to stay in the village, in hopes to find more food, now that more people had left. This was the best chance they had at surviving. Sebastian's father, once a shinobi of the Hidden Rain village, health was starting to decline however. His father started to notice the slow, but sure decline in health, and decided to teach Sebastian a few basics about the ninja arts.

One night, Sebastian's father did something that at first seemed horrible to his son. He forced his own son into a genjutsu during which, his father implanted his will into his mind. That will had the true secrets of his family, love, and pretty much the meaning of his life and why he was brought into this world by his father. The genjutsu only stopped a little pain, on what was being caused on Sebastian's real, physical body. His father's near perfect chakra control was literally burning messages and knowledge into his son's brain. After he was finished, he used a jutsu to make Sebastian forget about everything that had happened, so he wouldn't have any recollection of the pain that he went through on that fateful night.

Act III (Part II): Night Zero
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Three months following the implantation, a dramatic event happened to everyone that Sebastian would ever come to love in one night. Three robbers broke into the family's home to steal everything that they had. The ill father skilled with many ninjutsu and genjutsu skills stood no chance for the 3 overpowered criminals who broke into their home. His father was executed by a small man who was only armed with a demon wind shuriken and a sword. The criminal managed to sever each of his limbs, slowly and horribly, starting with his arms, then legs. The last thing that the criminal did to him was decapitate his head from his shoulders with the demon wind shuriken, and throw it into a corner; a corner where Sebastian was hiding. After seeing his father's head, with his eyes in the back of his head, Sebastian ran into a nearby closet, fearing for his life.

The second criminal, a large girl, with blue hair and blue brown eyes heard him enter the closet. Before she could open the door to the closet, Sebastian's mother tackled her to the ground by biting her hand, and by sucker punching her dead in the throat. This stunned the criminal, but only for a moment. For the criminal was now angry at her attempt to save her pathetic son, and she decided to show the mother no mercy whatsoever. By focusing her chakra, and with a summoning scroll, she managed to summon a ninja tool, a kunai. With that kunai, she used her chakra to enhance its range and power, along with giving it a poison tip so she could paralyze the mother. All it took was one jab with the kunai to bring the mother down to her back. She wasn't dead yet, however. No matter how hard she tried to move, she was stuck on the ground; she couldn't move. The criminal used that to her advantage and decided not to kill her quickly and easily, but to suck up every ounce of chakra the mother had inside of her first. All Sebastian heard was the bloodcurdling of his own mother, as she was slowly dying by the hands of a robber.
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The only thing that he could do, was nothing...

Sebastian was crying, regretting ever being alive at this point. He seen both of his parents brutally murdered by the hands of some heinous, cold-blooded criminals. He wanted to do something to stop them, but, his body was paralyzed. He wasn't paralyzed by some poison, or by a genjutsu, but it was fear. He was scared of dying; Sebastian was scared of being hurt by those criminals like his parents. He was scared of not being strong enough to stop them. He could do nothing, and nothing at all to stop them in this state, and he knew it. Just as the criminals was closing in on the closet that he was hiding in, they changed their direction quickly and swiftly. Why did they change their direction? Sebastian's sister, Genesis was crying in her crib near the entrance of the house. Sebastian heard his sister's cries and wails. He heard his little sister crying; the little sister that he vowed to protect with everything that he had, no matter what the cost would be. He wanted to move, but he couldn't. He was still paralyzed with the fear of his own death. Just as the criminals was closing in on his sister's crib, Sebastian had a vision; a flashback of a time when he was holding his sister in his arms... This vision was what changed Sebastian forever. This vision is what gave Rise to a King.

Arc II: The Escape

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Act I: The Rise of a King
Just before the criminals was about to harm Sebastian's sister, Sebastian came out of the closet. After being awakened for the first time, his speed was on levels that was unheard of from a child. His speed was on a tier equivalent to a Jounin, and his power was equal to that of a chunin. With no weapons, Sebastian quickly and swiftly took down the first criminal, the one who killed his father, without making a sound. The criminal dropped like a bag of rocks, and the two other criminals seen nothing but their comrade falling. Sebastian was nowhere to be found. The only thing that they seen was the open closet door that he was in only a few moments ago. Sebastian's whole demeanor changed in this state. He was no longer afraid of these robbers. The only thing that he was focused on was taking them out, and saving his little sister.

One of the robbers decided to quietly go up to the open closet door, only to see that no one was in there. The othesr robber stayed near Genesis, Sebastian's sister. Like a shadow, Sebastian managed to take down the criminal next to his sister's crib first with a punch to the chest, to stop his heart. This criminal was the one who killed his mother.

The only criminal that was left is the one who raised his hand at Sebastian's sister. Unlike any of the other criminals, sebastian showed this guy no mercy whatsoever. He wanted him to pay. He planned on giving him the worst death imaginable.

Only after a mere 5 seconds of showing the final criminal his true intentions, the criminal was stunned, paralyzed and on his knees by sheer fear. Sebastian couldn't care less however. He quickly grabbed the demon wind shuriken that the robber who killed his father had, and threw it directly at the criminal's head to decapitate, thus killing him.

Now that the only people left in his family is himself and his sister, the only thing left for Sebastian to do was simple... He had to escape the Hidden rain Village and start a new life...
To Be Continued...

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Sebastian's Theme Song:
[video=youtube;I7nMc08uUoE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I7nMc08uUoE[/video]

Firebrand's Theme Song:




~Approved~
 
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Great first bio

Couple things you want to change before so it gets approved. As a Genin, you can learn 1 Element, up to D-Rank and Basic Ninjutsu up to D-Rank. You can read about it here on the . So choose one element you want to learn and keep the basic ninjutsu and delete the other stuff and you should be set
 

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Great first bio

Couple things you want to change before so it gets approved. As a Genin, you can learn 1 Element, up to D-Rank and Basic Ninjutsu up to D-Rank. You can read about it here on the . So choose one element you want to learn and keep the basic ninjutsu and delete the other stuff and you should be set
Thanks for the info! I'll get to work right now!
 

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A couple of things here:

1.) This is by far one of the most unique bios I've seen here, truly impressive of one's first bio. Well done with the character history and personality.
2.) Sadly though, a few errors can be found in this bio. Only one is of a technical point, but you have two sections where you have the Village of Birth and Alliance, and each of the Villages of Alliance has a different village in it. Eliminate the one from the Basic Information, and then separate the Village Information from the Chakra/Jutsu Category. In other words, create a Rank//Chakra Info category after the Village Information one. The mods can be a stickler about these things sometimes I'm afraid :/.
3.) The biggest problem, though, is that you have your bio already knowing some jutsus, when you haven't received any formal training within any of the fields that you say you have. For example, you marked down as having Taijutsu and Kenjutsu mastered, and having learned D-Rank Katon. If this is your first bio, and you haven't received any training yet, then you can only have up to E-Rank Ninjutsu, which I have listed:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. The technique is a mix between high speed movement and the use of the transformation technique but has its limits.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Within the above spoiler. Eliminate all the jutsus that aren't E-Ranked from the jutsu list, as well as remove those utilized in the history. Nothing done within the history cannot be replicated through free-form after all, thus allowing you to keep the history the same.

Other than that, I thought that this bio was quite great, welcome to the RP :).

Edit: Jakai was more talking about your rank, at the Chuunin rank, you're allowed to learn two elements up to the C-Rank, as well as Ninjutsu and Taijutsu (Kenjutsu doesn't have a rank limit beyond having 50 posts, but you still need to be of a higher rank in order to learn its B and A rank jutsus). A listing of it is in for future reference.
 
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Within the above spoiler. Eliminate all the jutsus that aren't E-Ranked from the jutsu list, as well as remove those utilized in the history. Nothing done within the history cannot be replicated through free-form after all, thus allowing you to keep the history the same.

Other than that, I thought that this bio was quite great, welcome to the RP .
Thanks for the info! I'll get right to work.
 
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Two things:
One, this D-Rank jutsu:

Shunshin no Jutsu) - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement, the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.


Is still listed in the Ninjutsu list, you have to remove this
And two, you have these listed as specialties:
Specialty:​ Katon, Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
Within this RP, one can only specialize in any field when they have finished their training within those fields. Thus, this bio cannot have any jutsu oriented specializations. Finally, in most Taijutsu training threads I've seen the 1000 Years of Pain being instructed by a sensei, although it's an E-Rank jutsu. I would suggest lastly removing that jutsu from the list you know, my apologies for confusing you about that (I believe you only know E-Rank Ninjutsu as of right now).
 

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In your code where it says techniques replace that section with the following code verbaitum

PHP:
[b][u]Elements[/u]:[/b]
[B][U]Your ninjutsu[/U]:[/B]

[SPOILER](Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique 

Rank:E 
Type:Supplementary 
Range:Short 
Chakra Cost:5 
Damage Points:N/A 
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user. 
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)  

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique 

Rank:E 
Type:Supplementary 
Range:Short 
Chakra Cost:5 
Damage Points:N/A 
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.  

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique 

Rank:E 
Type:Supplementary 
Range:Short 
Chakra:5 
Damage Points:N/A 
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.  

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder 

Rank:E 
Type:Supplementary 
Range:Short 
Chakra Cost:N/A 
Damage Points:N/A 
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.  

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique 

Rank:E 
Type:Supplementary 
Range:Short 
Chakra Cost:5 
Damage Points:N/A 
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.  

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill 

Rank:E 
Type:Supplementary 
Range:Short 
Chakra Cost:5 
Damage Points:N/A 
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).  

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique 

Rank:E 
Type:Supplementary 
Range:Short 
Chakra Cost:5 
Damage Points:N/A 
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)[/SPOILER]
 
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