[Adventure] All Of Us

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*click play for mood*​



All of us lead our wars,
But we lose some fights.
All of us pursue our goals,
But sometimes we just lose sight.

All of us give our hearts and souls
Sometimes we don't even know why;
When all is done and all is expressed;
All of us will still die.

All of us follow our dreams,
But sometimes we don't know where to go.
All of us are pure hearted beings,
But sometimes our demons still show.

All of us have determination,
But sometimes sorrow takes control.
And all of us have similar destinations;
We all just want to come home.
 
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This is your most truest and most realistic poem ever!
Yeah I literally just poured my heart out in a minute here....Thank you and I'm glad you've enjoyed the read. :)
Usually not a fan of poems but this one was great.
Good job.
Thank you! :) You're the second person that started reading poetry/enjoyed a poem because of me on NB even though not a poetry fan.
Seems I'm doing it right.

:scorps:
 

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Simply excellent dude loved it from start to finish, one of my favs from you now just brilliant <3. That second stanza, showing human mortality and then the end were just brilliant.:cool: Excellent one.:bouncy:
 

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You cant beat the truth,
You cant beat the poem.. u_u

You should consider publishing.. if you eere in the 18th centyry you'd be as famous as shakespeare was..
 

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You cant beat the truth,
You cant beat the poem.. u_u

You should consider publishing.. if you eere in the 18th centyry you'd be as famous as shakespeare was..
Famous like Shakey...hahahahha. Glad you loved it bro. :)
Nope man, screw that, If anything, I would love to start songwriting more seriously, no bands no BS. Guitar+me+soundcloud and try to go burst trough one day. :p

:scorps:

If not, who cares, I'll still be doing something from the heart and enjoy it. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

(yeah right. :lmao:)
 
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You cant beat the truth,
You cant beat the poem.. u_u

You should consider publishing.. if you eere in the 18th centyry you'd be as famous as shakespeare was..
This is actually something I have told him before and wholeheartedly believe in. Glad I'm not the only one.
:T_T:

But his plan isn't that bad either.
Waindo ftw. =D
 
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