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[P3ĮÑ]

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This wasn't actually finished, I just lost motivation.

 

[Netferarri]

You're getting better my man. I like it.

 

[UNDFTD]

Better than most people on NarutoBase but here comes some CnC even though you haven't asked for any. Also, I do not do anything graphically, but I feel like I'm alright to criticise as I have some friends and connections I know that GFX:

First up there is a problem with your blending, the girl looks incredibly pale, and just doesn't match the signature the way she looks. Try to use the burn/dodge tool to create some lighting (you can also use that on the render). Also I take it that the chains are a part of the render too, but they look pix-elated, use the blur tool on a lower opacity to erase those pixels. Other than that, I see that you used some c4d's in the background, use a few in the foreground too, this will improve the overall blending of the tag, thus making it the signature better. I give this signature an 7/10 as my rating.

 

[Dannie]

i like it.

 

[P3ĮÑ]

You're getting better my man. I like it.

Thanks nebs

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Better than most people on NarutoBase but here comes some CnC even though you haven't asked for any. Also, I do not do anything graphically, but I feel like I'm alright to criticise as I have some friends and connections I know that GFX:

First up there is a problem with your blending, the girl looks incredibly pale, and just doesn't match the signature the way she looks. Try to use the burn/dodge tool to create some lighting (you can also use that on the render). Also I take it that the chains are a part of the render too, but they look pix-elated, use the blur tool on a lower opacity to erase those pixels. Other than that, I see that you used some c4d's in the background, use a few in the foreground too, this will improve the overall blending of the tag, thus making it the signature better. I give this signature an 7/10 as my rating.

Not a problem, I'm always open to critics, that's why I share my work so people can point out the flaws, which in turn allows me correct them. Thanks a lot for the CnC btw.

i like it.

Thank you.

 

[Azu]

This wasn't actually finished, I just lost motivation.

Dun't be lazy! :bouncy:
JK, I sometimes lose myself when I am doing a tag and I just leave it. U can always continue doing it when u have more inspiration.

Good things about the tag:
a) Tag size- It may look completely irrelevant but depending on the render and other things we plan to do even tag size can play important role
b) Light- Well, at least u started doing it- U need to practice more

Things u may do a bit different:
a) Placement- Google the rule of thirds
b) Blending and depth- U know some basic things now so try focusing on some details. Blending and depth give tag feeling of reality when u are looking on it so work on it
c) Lighting is really important for a tag as well. Try practicing more. Look at things IRL, where light comes from, where it hits things and stuff like that
d) Borders- If you put borders make sure we see it all the way, it's kind of confusing when we now see it and then we don't see it
e) Try doing texts- It won't be perfect for the first time but practice with it

Edit: And I also wanted to say good job and KIU! :bouncy:

 

[Klad]

Looks so unprofessional.

Lame title btw

 

[P3ĮÑ]

Dun't be lazy! :bouncy:
JK, I sometimes lose myself when I am doing a tag and I just leave it. U can always continue doing it when u have more inspiration.

Good things about the tag:
a) Tag size- It may look completely irrelevant but depending on the render and other things we plan to do even tag size can play important role
b) Light- Well, at least u started doing it- U need to practice more

Things u may do a bit different:
a) Placement- Google the rule of thirds
b) Blending and depth- U know some basic things now so try focusing on some details. Blending and depth give tag feeling of reality when u are looking on it so work on it
c) Lighting is really important for a tag as well. Try practicing more. Look at things IRL, where light comes from, where it hits things and stuff like that
d) Borders- If you put borders make sure we see it all the way, it's kind of confusing when we now see it and then we don't see it
e) Try doing texts- It won't be perfect for the first time but practice with it

Edit: And I also wanted to say good job and KIU! :bouncy:

Thanks a lot. I am gonna keep practicing.

Looks so unprofessional.

Lame title btw

 

[Dannie]

LMFAO.

Don't listen to them.