My Artwork: Obito

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Joon

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Oddly shape head. Lol Good job. Needs more work tho.
 

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Cool I like it.
 

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Nice technique, you should work on the facial proportions though. Keep it up nonetheless :win:
 

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I know its hard to draw a face while adjusting angles. In your draw I assume you made Obito had his head bend down but it isn't quite drawn as its suppossed to be. I don't got talent in drawings but have a friend who keeps showing his stuff to me, so I'm sorry i am sounding like a smartass but I think you need to work on angles a bit more. Though its still a hundred times better than the garbage i could 'draw'.
 

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For me, paints are impossible to work with. Excellent job!
 

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It looks disgusting. I have no idea why so many likes.
 

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But if I dislike his work, I should press dislike button, not like, correct ? :hint:

You could, but then you'd be categorized as an insensitive, prick, douche, whatever person they see fit to call you, by these good Samaritans...
 

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Criticizing is fine, but the artist should feel encouraged to improve, not humiliated :rolleyes: I say it as someone who's been drawing for more than 20 years (and is still bad at it), professional courses included.
 

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I will copy paste what i posted in another thread. It might help you of you have passion:

When you are drawing humans , try to understand their anatomy not the mere image of what you see.

What constructs a human? You should ask that question first instead of plastering what you see on paper like sticker. Human has a skeletal structure that gives him/her the basic standing, structure and shape. Check out their pics and look a model if you have the chance . You probably have one in school"s biology lab. Or even touch yourself to feel the bones, you can understand better.

Then we have muscles to give us movement and a more defining shape. Again you can look their pic and observe your movements to understand them. Observe/touch people who are close enough to let you do so.

Check out the exhibition "body worlds" if it comes tou your country. If not look on net, but waxed dead bodies might disturb you, a fair warning:


For references google stuff like "human anatomy sketch". You will see stuff like this:

Do not copy them but look examples of how a human shape can be grasped and conveyed. There are simple lines to follow up first.

For ex. this is my skecth to be fleshed out:

You can realize that it is basic, sketchy and draft but starting off from a single point reduces the way you can grasp something as a whole. There can be too manh lines, and they are all for directing you to the most correct ones. Don't hesitate to draw over and over them' being courageous while drawing will lead you both in motivation and improvement.

Have fun and good luck.
 
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