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I saw a thread someone posted, I guess some other Naruto fans are working on a project (shipping NaruSaku).

I was wondering if maybe some of us here on Narutobase also wanted to maybe work on a Doujin for Naruto?

I wouldn't do it alone, because I have a one track mind sometimes and would like other people's input.

Open to suggestions and ideas, and anything goes

Trying to make this a group project, not sure how to go about it. Anyone who wants to join or has ideas please comment or send a message
 

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im already doing my own naruto ending. chapters 699 and 700. but thats gonna take a long time, since i never get to draw it further. right now im at like page 6 out of 40 something...so i guess in summer one chapter might be finished lol. after the finals that is XD
 

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That sounds pretty cool, your project

I was thinking something along the lines of elaborating on what could be a backstory of Indra and Ashura because I don't think Kishimoto will give us much more indepth detail on it, he seems really busy (I think he would have had the sage go into detail about it, and tell us how the fight went between Indra and Ashura, and why Indra went curse of hatred, it can't be because his brother died, like with Madara and Sasuke).

I'm open for any other ideas though...

And do you have a link to a tutorial on how to make a doujin? I not good with the panels and knowing how many to put in or other stuff, actually not done anything like this before, but the idea sounds fun
 
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I tried doing a Sakura one, but I couldn't stay on one idea lol
 

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I'll wait to do a doujin on the back story of Indra and Ashura (I've not even written a fan fiction yet of them, I was going to but thought I should wait and see if we get more information on them, we don't even know what their hobbies or favorite foods are, or other stuff) to be respectful to the mangaka and because I don't have enough information on their personalities or of them to even do so.

It was just the first idea I had (my one track mind), but if Kishimoto never gives more information on the back story, I will probably do a doujin on it, as he is almost done with Naruto manga anyways (except for part 3, which is about the children) and probably won't invest into the back story of Indra and Ashura.

But if anyone wants to help me with this doujin, are there any other ideas? And anyone who wants to help out?
 

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Well I do have ideas I wrote down for a story (a love story though, between Indra and my OC, but I can't really get any good ideas for a story and I don't want it to revolve around only love, want to put action in it, I'd want it to be as close to realistic as it would be for a story of Indra and Ashura as possible, but I don't have enough information to do so, my OC isn't well developed either) I'm just having difficulty figuring out his character because I know he has similarities to Madara and Sasuke but he started the war, after being tempted by black zetsu after losing in a fight for ninshuu, I think Indra created ninjutsu (the sage mentioned something to naruto stating that he didn't create ninjutsu he created ninshuu, and that ninjutsu was created for war).

He had to of started a family before going curse of hatred and then continue a war he starts until death, while Sasuke stops being curse of hatred because of Naruto before starting a family (which Ashura probably was trying to do the same with Indra but couldn't which is another difference in their characters). Which is kind of opposite of Indra, who probably started his family before going curse of hatred, instead. Indra remains curse of hatred despite Ashura probably trying to do what Naruto succeeded at with Sasuke, getting him to stop being curse of hatred.

Madara goes curse of hatred from the loss of his brother originally, where Indra doesn't lose his brother (leaving a question as to why he goes curse of hatred, it has to be from deep pain caused by loss of a loved one, like with all Uchiha, he started the clan after all lol), Indra instead battles his brother until he dies and unlike Madara, I doubt he secretly survived. But the monument was altered to provoke Madara like Indra was (guessing whatever was said to Indra by black zetsu was after he lost a loved one), this might mean what was on the monument was similar to what black zetsu did or said to tempt Indra.

Indra probably was after power like Madara (Sasuke originally wouldn't even take his brother's eyes until later. Sasuke was also originally called to soft because he wouldn't kill anyone, just knock them out, stating "they're not the ones I want to kill"). Guessing Indra was after Ashura's power, or whatever power the sage gave to him and not to Indra.

But all in all, this is predictions (and you never know with Kishimoto) and it still doesn't say about who Indra would be as a person, making it hard to write a story and capture his ambiance as a person, it just shows that there are definitely differences between Indra and who he reincarnated into, guessing it's the same for Ashura.

Kishimoto actually had a brilliant idea with coming up with these characters and could do so much for a great back story of them, even unpredictable things, that would give way more to the story, and keep readers interested even now (like where did Kaguya or the Otsutsuki clan come from, they are aliens from another dimension, but where and how did they get there if Kaguya hadn't eaten the fruit yet? What powers did she possess as an alien before eating the fruit?), not sure why he didn't really even go into it... I remain hopeful lol
 
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For Ashura, because it's a given that there are definitely differences between these Otsutsuki brothers and their reincarnations, he I also think will show differences in his personality as well.

I do think Ashura will be more like Naruto than Hashirama. Hashirama had more talent from birth and was already on par with Madara as children if not he was stronger (when fighting Hashirama, Madara told his dad they would lose because Hashirama was stronger, and Izuna was shocked to hear Madara say this, stating something like "someone stronger than niisan?" not his exact quote) Hashirama was also a little quicker with figuring things out, than Naruto who a lot of the time things went over his head, which is more like what I would assume Ashura to be like (the sage stated that Naruto really reminded him a lot of Ashura when Naruto was confused about what the sage was saying to him). We're Hashirama was constantly challenging Madara and showed to be stronger than him from the beginning, and Ashura is stated as opposite by the sage. Personality wise, they both wanted peace, Ashura and Hashirama, Hashirama went as far as to try to make an alliance with all.the villages, but failed and Naruto succeeded in that, I don't see it as a difference though, more like a continuation of the same ideals, dreams and goals, just each one in the Ashura incarnations went one step further than the last one.

Naruto was mischievous (always getting into trouble, for things because it was fun and he was bored) at first, no idea if this is also true for Ashura but Hashirama wasn't known for this. Naruto at first was very jealous of Sasuke and Naruto would try hard and almost didn't graduate at first, while Sasuke easily passed the tests and didn't have to even try, I assume similar to Indra and Ashura's situation just they probably didn't have to graduate from a ninja academy seen as that doesn't start until after Madara and Hashirama make the first village together.

This makes me think that maybe at some point after Indra loses the battle for ninshuu but before black zetsu tempts him, maybe Indra and Ashura worked together and they created something, or perhaps they created ninjutsu together and it's just not mentioned (theory, but that would mean they both had to agree that ninjutsu was a good idea, unless Indra tricked Ashura who didn't know Indra was already curse of hatred or something), because the sage did say he didn't create ninjutsu he created ninshuu and ninjutsu was created for war.

Like Ashura over time Naruto grew stronger with the help of others as was mentioned by the sage. They way the sage says that Naruto reminds him so much of Ashura, I would think Naruto is almost in every way like Ashura, leaving me wondering were the differences are? Maybe the difference was in the way Naruto could talk Sasuke (Indra's incarnation) out of curse of hatred, where Ashura could not do this with Indra.
 
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I tried doing a Sakura one, but I couldn't stay on one idea lol

Maybe we could do a doujin on something Sakura related if you wanted... what were your ideas?

Or even an AU doujin, where Sakura and Sasuke are together and they reanimate Indra and Ashura or something, combining ideas, possibly?
 

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Maybe we could do a doujin on something Sakura related if you wanted... what were your ideas?

Or even an AU doujin, where Sakura and Sasuke are together and they reanimate Indra and Ashura or something, combining ideas, possibly?

Oww the second one seem interesting, dark, but interesting. I'll look over some of your ideas
 
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