Hitomi Yamanaka

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Basic Information

Name: Hitomi Yamanaka
Nickname: n/a
Gender: female
Age: 17
Clan: Yamanaka

Looks:
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Personality:
Shy and gentle, she is a tomboy who is a loner. She invests a lot of time into her training. She is easily startled do to an incident that happened to her when she was very young.
Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: n/a
Elements: wind
Your ninjutsu:
Taijutsu
ninjutsu


Background Info

History: She was picked on in the ninja academy for being very shy and easily startled. When she was a very young child she was attacked by an anbu ninja from another village, and was rescued by an unknown ninja, who brought her home. This attack on her left her traumatized and caused her to turn into a shy girl who is easily scared.

Other

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won:50%
Lost:50%
 

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Can't Make a Yamanaka until you have 1000 posts
 

Erzo

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Another Yamanaka, nice.

Very plain bio but you kept to the template (at least I think you did), so it should be fine, hopefully.
Welcome to the RP.

EDIT: Damn, the man in blue has spoken.
 

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It's Ironic Erzo, you made Decim yet I am the Arbiter of Bios :coffee:
 

Erzo

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It's Ironic Erzo, you made Decim yet I am the Arbiter of Bios :coffee:

I'll come back to understand this once I watch Death Parade and learn of the character that is Decim. <_>
 

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Yes, learn the damn character you made a bio of. As for the rest of you, hopefully somebody has watched Death Parade to understand the arbiter ref...
 

Kai NB

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Can't Make a Yamanaka until you have 1000 posts

All Hail the Lord and Decision Maker
Scorps :scorps:

OT: Sorry about that, guess you'll have to try another bio :/
 

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I'll give you 48 hours to edit your bio before I check it, presuming you still want to RP. Hopefully you'll have it changed so I don't decline it.

Normally I'd decline it now but I'm trying to be nicer. I could always leave it to the 10 day period you have to edit it but I'm not that nice yet.

Odds are I won't even check it in that time frame anyway so it's like meh...
 

Kai NB

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I'll give you 48 hours to edit your bio before I decline it, presuming you still want to RP.

Normally I'd decline it but I'm trying to be nicer. I could always leave it to the 10 day period you have to edit it but I'm not that nice yet.

Baby Steps, move one by one
[video=youtube;PIE5QtkxzvM]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PIE5QtkxzvM[/video]
 

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Anyway no more spam on this poor individual's bio. Only post if you're giving them useful advice upon edits made to their bio. That is all.
 

Kai NB

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Well, for one, you can't say that you're tied with Konoha. You can say you were born there (actually have to because it's a Yamanaka bio) but not as your Village of Alliance. You only put something there if you join one of the permission groups. Like my Konoha banner or Reborn's Kiri banner shows that we are officially part of that village, so that is what we would put for our Village of Alliance

So simply put, just put N/A for Village of Alliance

Next, for battles, it doesn't seem like you've had any yet, so just put None on both wins and losses

If you want to simply have a custom bio, then just change the last name to something else instead of Yamanaka clan. That way, you can submit it. If you want a Yamanaka bio, I suggest still changing it. You need to make 1000 posts as stated before, but if you make this a totally different clan, you can submit it and then train for the next month while. After 1 month, you're allowed to post another bio change. By the time it's been a month, you could probably reach the 1000 post requirement to then submit a Yamanaka bio and even have some training stats in
 

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Yes, learn the damn character you made a bio of. As for the rest of you, hopefully somebody has watched Death Parade to understand the arbiter ref...
I get this reference :~) cuz decim is an arbiter for the dead xD

Good bio! Simple and neat.
 
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