[CJ] Business with Kureh

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(Katon: Kasō) Fire Style: Cremation
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals while kneading their fire chakra into their mouth which then turns into a superheated heated ash. The user then exhales the hot ash in between their raised hands, which is positioned in front of their chest, rapidly condensing the hot ash into a basketball sized sphere which they then fire at the opponent. The heated ash sphere on contact, or by the user clapping their hands, explodes into a 3m wide vortex that can reach up to mid.range in the sky. The heated ash can easily burn through the human skin resulting in 2nd degree burns throughout the opponents body.*
NOTES
►Can be used 3x per battle
►No fire jutsu in the next turn
►Can only be taught by Zanda
Tell me what you like about the jutsu, and advantage, and a disadvantage.
 

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I like the jutsu because of how it can be used. Ya'know like you can clap your hands together which causes it to explode into a 3 meter vortex, rather than just exploding on contact so I found it unique and wanted it, lol.

Advantage - If the opponent evades the attack somehow before it goes out of reach you can clap your hands to cause it to explode into a 3 meter range to harm the opponent and limit their chances of escape.

Disadvantage - I didn't really see any disadvantages here except for the hand seal usage delay.

(Doton: Wakideru hakkutsu) - Earth Release: Gushing Excavation
Type: Offensive | Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long (Created at short, has a Long range reach)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Through a single hand seal, the user will send earth-based chakra on an area within short-range, manipulating it to have it erupt upwards to resemble a small volcano head. It has a diameter of about 3 meters, and the height of five meters. Immediately after creation, massive amounts of mud, similar to that found in (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld, is spewed out from the structure created, flowing out with great speed and momentum taking the form of large ten meter waves. It would easily push away anyone within the area of effect. The user can have the mud released outwardly, expanding outwards from the source with a 360 degree scope, or aiming it at a specific area in order to have a stronger effect. An example of the second would be creating the volcano-head and manipulating the mud to spew out towards the opposite side of the battlefield, keeping you safe from harm while attacking the enemy. Alternatively, the user can maintain the handseal and continuously manipulate the movement of the mud to manipulate it to the direction they want to, which would allow them to do a multitude of things like preventing their own technique from harming the user by manipulating the mud away. However, a drawback would be the inability to perform other techniques unless the user is able to use Yin-Yang. Lastly, the damage from this comes from the massive waves of dense mud that would surely crush, as well as suffocate the enemy if left undefended. The technique results in the area targeted to be covered with up to ten meters of mud.
Notes & Restrictions:
Note: Usable twice per battle with a three turn cooldown before each usage.
Note: Cannot use any A-rank or higher Doton techniques for the turn used, and the next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Draigo
Analyze it.
 
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I like the jutsu because of how it can be used. Ya'know like you can clap your hands together which causes it to explode into a 3 meter vortex, rather than just exploding on contact so I found it unique and wanted it, lol.

Advantage - If the opponent evades the attack somehow before it goes out of reach you can clap your hands to cause it to explode into a 3 meter range to harm the opponent and limit their chances of escape.

Disadvantage - I didn't really see any disadvantages here except for the hand seal usage delay.



Analyze it.
That custom jutsu is useful as hell, and it only requires one hand seal.

U_U
 
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