[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

These jutsu's already got approved a while ago, I'm just resubmitting them as I did some small changes.

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses daton-based chakra into his hand.After that he slams his fist into the ground, sending the chakra into the earth.
If you would draw a straight line between the point of impact and the oppenent, all the earth on this line starts to rise starting from the point of impact and then comes rapidly to the opponent in one straight line. Every time the earth rises spikes appear instantly out of it into all directions(left, right above, even underground) and have different sizes. However the end of these spikes are completely flat(just like a tree trunk). Just before the line reaches the opponent, it releases some large spikes(over 10m) that goes straight for the opponent(also some are released underground)
These spikes are pushed out of the earth with such force that a frontal hit instantly breaks the bones it hits.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used 4 times/battle*

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr).
When it travels just above the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
The jutsu doesn't require any handseals and by clicking your teeth, the cloud explodes tremendously. However even without blowing up it's incredibly strong.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next turn*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It only travels faster if it goes straight over water, but this doesn't mean it's stronger than water*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: By very extensive training in swordsmanship the muscles of the swordsman have been developed so much that they even can react without interference of the brain as a reflex. The reflex kicks in when the user is attacked from a blind spot/ambushed/suddenly looses track of the opponent. When something/someone enters the reach of the sword, the arm(s) automatically pull out the sword(s) (unless the user already is wielding one) and slash at it/deflect it. It's mainly used for when things as kunai are thrown at the users blind spot or when the opponent is to fast for the user and attacks him head on, in that case it could sever limb(s). The reach is considerd as a globe(the user is the center of it and the edges are the reach of the sword). By dislocating the shoulder and elbowjoints the user can block them on all sides. Of course it won't be of much use when encountering jutsu's, unless the jutsu's are based on projectiles.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user pulls out Yubashiri from its scabbard, but he slides the blade (from the guard to the tip) along the metal edge of the scabbard or any other metal object, so lont it causes friction. Yubashiri is an ancient sword that killed thousends of men and creatures across the ages and absorbed their fat into the blade. Fat is very flammable, thus due to the friction with metal, Yubashiri is set on fire. Yubashiri gets surrounded by quick-spinning mini-cyclone of fire, this fire is extremely hot and can even melt boulders and other metal weapons when it collides with them.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*This not a fire-jutsu, this is real natural fire*

~ Put the old ones in quotes, and highlight the changes please ~

Old one:

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range: Short-medium-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses daton-based chakra into his hand.After that he slams his fist into the ground, sending the chakra into the earth.
If you would draw a straight line between the point of impact and the oppenent, all the earth on this line starts to rise starting from the point of impact and then comes rapidly to the opponent in one straight line. Every time the earth rises spikes appear instantly out of it into all directions(left, right above, even underground) and they have differents sizes(3-7meters). However the end of these spikes are completely flat(just like a tree trunk). Just before the line reaches the opponent, it releases a large spike(over 10m) that goes straight for the opponent.
These spikes are pushed out of the earth with such force that a frontal hit instantly breaks the bones it hits.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used 3 times/battle*

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New one: the blue are things that changed, also I just deleted the 3-7 meters part and I edited the restrictions as it was a bit to much for a normal A-rank.

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses daton-based chakra into his hand.After that he slams his fist into the ground, sending the chakra into the earth.
If you would draw a straight line between the point of impact and the oppenent, all the earth on this line starts to rise starting from the point of impact and then comes rapidly to the opponent in one straight line. Every time the earth rises spikes appear instantly out of it into all directions(left, right above, even underground) and have different sizes. However the end of these spikes are completely flat(just like a tree trunk). Just before the line reaches the opponent, it releases some large spikes(over 10m) that goes straight for the opponent(also some are released underground)
These spikes are pushed out of the earth with such force that a frontal hit instantly breaks the bones it hits.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used 4 times/battle*

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Old one:

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/medium/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr). This cloud can only travel over ground and water. When it travels over the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next 3 turns*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It's still weak against water jutsu's, it only travels faster if it goes straight over it*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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New one: I deleted the part that it only can travel over ground and water as it's just not needed, the blue parts are the things I added and I changed the restrictions a bit.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr).
When it travels just above the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
The jutsu doesn't require any handseals and by clicking your teeth, the cloud explodes tremendously. However even without blowing up it's incredibly strong.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*It only travels faster if it goes straight over water, but this doesn't mean it's stronger than water*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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Old one:

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 0-80
Description: By very extensive training in swordsmanship the muscles of the swordsman have been developed so much that they even can react without interference of the brain as a reflex. The reflex kicks in when the user is attacked from a blind spot/ambushed/suddenly looses track of the opponent. When something/someone enters the reach of the sword, the arm(s) automatically pull out the sword and slash/deflect it. It's mainly used for when things as kunai are thrown at the users blind spot or when the opponent is to fast for the user and attacks him head on, in that case it could sever a limb. The reach is considerd as a globe(the user is the center of it and the edges are the reach of the sword). By dislocating the shoulderjoints the user can block them on all sides. Of course it won't be of much use when encountering jutsu's, unless the jutsu's are based on projectiles.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*

New one: Just changed some small part in blue.

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
@Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: By very extensive training in swordsmanship the muscles of the swordsman have been developed so much that they even can react without interference of the brain as a reflex. The reflex kicks in when the user is attacked from a blind spot/ambushed/suddenly looses track of the opponent. When something/someone enters the reach of the sword, the arm(s) automatically pull out the sword(s) (unless the user already is wielding one) and slash at it/deflect it. It's mainly used for when things as kunai are thrown at the users blind spot or when the opponent is to fast for the user and attacks him head on, in that case it could sever limb(s). The reach is considerd as a globe(the user is the center of it and the edges are the reach of the sword). By dislocating the shoulder and elbowjoints the user can block them on all sides. Of course it won't be of much use when encountering jutsu's, unless the jutsu's are based on projectiles.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*

Old one:

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user pulls out Yubashiri from its scabbard, but then the user slides the blade along the metal edge(from the guard to the tip) of the scabbard. Yubashiri is an ancient sword that killed thousends of men and creatures across the ages and absorbed their fat into the blade. Fat is very flammable, thus due to the friction with the metal edge, Yubashiri is set on fire. Yubashiri gets surrounded by quick-spinning mini-cyclone of fire, this fire is extremely hot and can even melt boulders and other metal weapons when it collides with them and the user keeps pressuring on the boulder/weapon with Yubashiri.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*This not a fire-jutsu, this is real natural fire*

New one: Added the blue parts and deleted some small parts. And I made it three times instead of two.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user pulls out Yubashiri from its scabbard, but he slides the blade (from the guard to the tip) along the metal edge of the scabbard or any other metal object, so long it causes friction. Yubashiri is an ancient sword that killed thousands of men and creatures across the ages and absorbed their fat into the blade. Fat is very flammable, thus due to the friction with metal, Yubashiri is set on fire. Yubashiri gets surrounded by quick-spinning mini-cyclone of fire, this fire is extremely hot and can even melt boulders and other metal weapons when it collides with them.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*This not a fire-jutsu, this is real natural fire*

~ All Approved except for the Pyroclastic Flow ~

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Fuzen Yonbi no Saru) – Bijuu Style: Partial Four-Tailed Monkey Transformation

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•Type: Supplementary
•Rank: S
•Range: N/A
•Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn to mantain the control over the bijuu)
•Damage Points: (+20 to Bijuu Style, Lava Release and Taijutsu)
•Description: As seen with Naruto and Killer Bee, the hosts of the Bijuus can make a demon chakra cloak around them. Like Killer Bee, Roshi has perfect control over his Bijuu so that he can borrow his bijuu some chakra and transform himself into the Four-Tailed Monkey in a human shape tough he still has control over his body. With the cloak around him, Roshi drastically increases his speed and strength, the user will also become immune to fire jutus since the bijuu has power over earth and fire elements, as much as Killer Bee or Naruto when they partially transformed into their Bijuu.
•While in this mode the user can only use Bijuu Style and Lava Release Jutsus.
•Can only be used once per battle and lasts 3 turns
• The user cannot perform any summonings for the same and the following 2 rounds.
•Causes 5 damage to user per turn

Looks like Kirabi on his mode, last chapter:

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~ Declined ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Fuzen Yonbi no Saru) – Bijuu Style: Partial Four-Tailed Monkey Transformation

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•Type: Supplementary
•Rank: S
•Range: N/A
•Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn to mantain the control over the bijuu)
•Damage Points: (+20 to Bijuu Style, Lava Release and Taijutsu)
•Description: As seen with Naruto and Killer Bee, the hosts of the Bijuus can make a demon chakra cloak around them. Like Killer Bee, Roshi has perfect control over his Bijuu so that he can borrow his bijuu some chakra and transform himself into the Four-Tailed Monkey in a human shape tough he still has control over his body. With the cloak around him, Roshi drastically increases his speed and strength, the user will also become immune to fire jutus since the bijuu has power over earth and fire elements, as much as Killer Bee or Naruto when they partially transformed into their Bijuu.
•While in this mode the user can only use Bijuu Style and Lava Release Jutsus.
•Can only be used once per battle and lasts 3 turns
• The user cannot perform any summonings for the same and the following 2 rounds.
•Causes 5 damage to user per turn

Looks like Kirabi on his mode, last chapter:

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O_O wtf you ripped my submission.
Anyway, you dont need that anymore because you have bijuu modes with multiple versions created by Kirabi, which was the objective of this jutsu.

 

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Kage Batto) Summoning: Shadow Bat

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Type:Suppplementary
Rank:A
Range:All
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:
This is a special summon for those in the Nara clan.The bat can only be summoned when there is a shadow jutsu on the field, this is when the user will make the shadow contract appear by using his shadows.The bat can go up to the sky and intercept the sun, making a big shadow that will cover a big part of the field.The bat can only attack with sonic attacks, stunning the opponent for a moment.
*it is very weak against lightning attacks (B and above)
*the ultra sonic sound of the bat makes it impossible for crystal users or earth users to use any jutsu
*lasts up to three turns
*cannot be summoned again
*can only be summoned with the Shadow Scroll (Summoning Contract)
*must be taught by Konoha?s Yellow Flash or Deidara Nara

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[~Rerrando~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose:Tenkuu Kamisama) Summoning: Sky God

Type:Suppplementary
Rank:A
Range:All
Chakra:70
Damage:N/A
Description: The user summons the sky god slither.Slither is the king of all sky dragons. He can be only be summoned when the elements wind and fire are present on the field.When he is called upon slither will arise from the fire and fly high into the sky. Slither can redirect any wind or fire attack.
*Slifer is vulnerable against earth and lightning attacks*(B rank and above)
*Remains on field for 3 turns*
*Must wait 2 turns before re-summoning*
*Only taught and used by me*

(Kuchiyose:Tenkuu koushaku ) Summoning: Sky Prince

Type:Suppplementary
Rank:A
Range:All
Chakra:35
Damage:N/A
Description:
When (Kuchiyose:Tenkuu Kamisama) Summoning: Sky God is not summoned correctly Sirrush will appear.(Slither's eldest son) Sirrush is summoned the same way as Slither.
Sirrush has all the abilities as his father there at half strength.
*Vulnerable to earth and lightning attacks* (C rank and above)
*Last 2 turns*
*Must wait 1 turn before re-summoning*
*Must be taught by me*

~ Both Declined O_O Dragons summoning exist already. Please note what summoning exist before you submit yours ~

 

[biojumaru]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

summoning jutsu:vulture
kuchyoseno jutsu:hagetaka

Type:Suppplementary
Rank:A
Range:All
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:
Summoning Animal:vultrure
Scroll Owner:biojumaru
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A (for the time beeing)
Summoning Boss if existing:hagetaji
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A (hagetaji can be summon in a various of sizes)
attakcs whith wind jutsus and regular taijutsu
last 2turns
weakness:lightning attaks
can be summon just 1 as boss but 3 times low lvl sizes


suiton:mizu dangan
water style:water bullets

rank:a
range:mid/long
chakra:30
damage:60
a continous flow of water shots come out from the user's mouth hitting very hard its target (can be use as blocking a fire attk to)

water style: water assimilation
suiton:mizu douka

range:N/A
rank: D
chakra:10
damage:N/A
the user suddenly turns into water preventing any harm or just for hiding
cant be used in a waaater surface

~ All Declined. Please use grammar properly and read the existing techniques and restrictions before you submit any other jutsus ~

 

[Chago]

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Sword Arts: shadow dance (subeta Gegei: Showdis Dansus)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The user makes a copy of their sword and throws it at the opponent to fool them then the user or a clone can appear from that sword then the user or clone does a combo of 7 slashes at the opponent.
(can only be taught by chago)
(can only be used 3 times a battle.)

wind scar (fuuton tsumeato)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/defense
Range: short/long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The user will strike their sword to the ground and then make a huge energy wave of wind come out of their sword that hones the opponent and does heavy wind damage.
(can only be used with the ventus sword)
(can only be used 3 times a battle.)
(have to wait 3 turns to re-use)
(the tecnique can be vanquished by A rank and above katon techniques)

Typhoon Dance
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The user swing up the sword of ventus to create a large size typhoon in the sky then the user moves in really high speed to slash the opponents all round (a combo of 9 slashes).
(can only be used with the sword of ventus)
(can only be used 3 times a battle.)
(have to wait at least 2 turns in order to re-use)

Ventus Armor (Fuuton yoroi)
Rank: S
Type: defense
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: none
Desciption: The user concentrates and makes a white armor around themselves of chakra that can block wind and lighting techniques from up to A rank also the user is able to move in high speed while having this armor. but also Katon tecniques from A-Rank and above takes 20+ damage.
(can only be used 3 times a battle.)
(The armor last 4 turns)
(The user cannot use above B rank wind jutsu after using this technique for 2 turns also the users movement slows down for two turns.)

~ All Declined ~

 

[Pain..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchyose: Fuka: Shunshuu) Summoning Jutsu: Bird

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After the user do the handseals he bite his finger over a Scroll/Tatoo. The User will Summon a great Bird the summoning most
happen i natures things like trees and plants if is close to water or will
not be able to move. The bird is a big bird and can throw Fire from his
mouth and can throw air from the mouth too.

Note: can only be use once per battle
Note: Only Obito-Uchiha can grant the Scroll/Tatoo

~ Declined do not resubmit this summoning contract~

 

[Azaghast]

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
The user focuses wind element chakra into their hand, and then shapes it into a spiralling drill one meter long. The drill revolves at extremely high speeds. Though this drill is useful in close combat, it is primarily used to send forward a spiralling stream of slicing wind. The Jinchuuriki of the Five-Tailed Beast can merge his Steam Element with this to create a super heated stream while anyone above Jounin can merge some fire element with it to create the same heated stream but slightly less powerful - but a Kage's attack this way replicates the same power.
*Can only be used 3 times/battle*

~ Approved ~

 

[biojumaru]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

kuchyoseno jutsu:komouri
summoning jutsu:bats
Type:Suppplementary
Rank:A
Range:All
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:
Summoning Animal:bat
Scroll Owner:biojumaru
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A (for the time beeing)
Summoning Boss if existing:koumoriji
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A (koumoriji can be summon in a various of sizes)
attakcs whith wind jutsus and regular taijutsu
last 2turns
weakness:lightning attaks
can be summon just 1 as boss but 3 times low lvl sizes

~ I already declined this O_O ~

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ma-Ji Soroi) Merge Suit
Rank: S
Type: Defence/Supplementery/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80 (When using as a attack)
Desciption: The user will spread the chakra of yin and yang, and the 5 elements through there skin and body, making a suit of chakra, and making the user tougher. When an attack hits the attack will be absorbed, and have no effect or damage to the user. The suit can also be used as a absorbing then attack source, when using an attack like a rasengan, the most recent absorbed attack's element, will pour through the rasengan changing it into a Whatever Rasengan without the need of another jutsu. The suit also is strong, when the user is in genjutsu, and the user is attacked, the genjutsu will be released because the genjutsu will think the user is in pain, but the attack is actulley absorbed and given no damage to the user.
Taijutsu is pretty pointless, when the user is attacked by taijutsu, the taijutsu is still used but no damage is given because the chakra is protecting the user's skin, so there is no way it can get through to bones or organs or veins or anything precious.
Ninjutsu is basically the same as taijutsu and genjutsu, when struck no damage
-Can only be activated once per battle
-Lasts for rest of battle
-Only way to destroy is a combo at the same time, because the suit can't absorb both at same time, so the suit would be destroyed
-Sharingan genjutsu will still work
-Can only be taught by Sin
-After use, the user will not be able to use any s-rank attacks or higher for the rest of the battle

~ Declined ~

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

kuchyoseno jutsu:komouri
summoning jutsu:bats
Type:Suppplementary
Rank:A
Range:All
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:
Summoning Animal:bat
Scroll Owner:biojumaru
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A (for the time beeing)
Summoning Boss if existing:koumoriji
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A (koumoriji can be summon in a various of sizes)
attakcs whith wind jutsus and regular taijutsu
last 2turns
weakness:lightning attaks
can be summon just 1 as boss but 3 times low lvl sizes

dont make anime or manga jutsu and if you wish for the bats contract send me them and il sort it out

 

[chanxyz]

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1.Hidden Gun (Hitoshirezu-gan)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: short to mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 + one range push back
Description: The user concentrates chakra into his right index finger and releases it as a chakra ball of one and a half feet in dimension.If hit by this,the victim is pushed one range back.It can break through smaller projetile shots of up to non-elemental S rank.(eg,the jutsu below-Twin shotgun)
Note:Usable only 2 times.Takes one turn to reload.Must have completed the chakra control training session from a sensei.
Created by Chan.

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Twin Shotgun (Tsuin shottogan)
Type:Attack/defence
Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gather chakra into his fists.From each fist,shoots out multiple pellets.A few advantages it has is that the shots are wide spread, which makes it highly effective against quick or invisible opponents.
Note:usable only 2 times.
Created by Chan.

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Please edit some if these jutsus need some editing for approval.If you think these are trash,decline them.I will humbly accept it and won't resubmit.Thank you.

~ Declined, no gun variants ~

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Only for RokuNR to check

X- mo-do(X-Mode)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A(user 15 damage per turn this is active)
Description: This is one of the Strongest moves the X-Gloves can perform once fusion with the Mare Sky ring, the user will drain all the power from the X-Gloves this will cause the Gloves and the ring to become powerless and fall off, once the gloves fall off the user hands, the user eyes will turn red and his body will heat up in to a incredible rate causing steam to come from his nose every time he breaths while in this Mode the user speed will be enhanced speed and all fire jutsus performed will go up a rank and other fire jutsus used on the user will become useless
Note: While in this Mode can only use Fire Jutsus
Note: this Mode will burn the user inside per turn If the user stays in this mode longer then 3 turns his inside will be burned to the point where he will be unable to fight
Note: Gloves and ring are gone for the rest of the fight after the user comes out of this mode he will be unable to use any fire for the rest of the fight

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Muttsu Sacchi) Sixth Sense
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage: -20 to user.
Description: Animals have been seen to know of an upcoming natural disaster and flee the area prior to the event. This "sixth sense" was lost during human evolution, but its ability lies dormant in the brain. The user reactivates this sense by jump starting it by flooding it with chakra. The initial strain of having another sense causes the user some damage, but the brain quickly adapts to the influx of new information. While this sense is activated the user will become aware of incoming danger, but will not know any of the specifics about the attack, they will just know the direction the attack is coming from.
~ Can only be used once per match.
~ Can only stay active for 3 turns.
~ No S-rank or above jutsu while active.
~ Only teachable by Sacrifice.

~ Declined, jutsu exists ~

 

[aTastyCookie]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kanji Enchou Kanmon)Sensory Dome Barrier
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakara cost:20
Damage:N/A
Description: The Sensory Dome Barrier jutsu is a defensive Jutsu. The user will perform the necessary hand seals and release chakra. This chakra will then extend outwards from the user and create an invisible spherical dome around the user 360 degrees. This barrier extends outwards from the user 5 feet in all directions. If anything were to break this barrier (a projectile weapon, person, animal, ect.) then the user would immediately sense that it is coming and pin point what direction it is coming from.
-Can Only Be Used 3 times
-Only Last 2 turns

~ Declined; this is a canon jutsu ~

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu:.Panda Ohitsujikyuuji)Summoning Technique:.Panda Rampage
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The User Will First Perform The Hand-seals For The Summoning Then Minor Pandas Will Come About Then The Pandas will Charge At The Enemy Head Strong Like A Rhinoceros. Any Attack Under C Rank Will Be Blasted Off and Will Have no Effect.
-Can Only Be Used 2 Times

Panda Restrictions and Abilities
-There Are 3 Types Of Panda Summonings Minor Pandas, Major Pandas And boss Pandas

Minor Pandas Ability
Minor Pandas are low level jutsu user that rely on physical combat, so they tend to travel with other panda's that can use There body's/numbers to deal damage.

Major Pandas
Major Pandas are highly skilled in big, heavy weapons that do major damage. so they have the ability to fight with sticks that hit as hard as rocks.

Boss Pandas
Boss Pandas are Mid Level Mokuton users that have no skill in weaponry, instead they use awkward wood type techniques to attack and defend.
-Can Only perform C Rank And Below Wood Techniques
-Can Only Perform 1 Mokuton Jutsu Per Post

~ Declined, contract exists ~

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(yottsu kame senshi) Four Turtle Combatants
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons four ninja turtles by his side, these turtles can each use up to A-rank Nin and Tai jutsu, each turtle has a specific element, these turtles cannot use Genjutsu
Note: must have a turtles contract
Note: must be taught by Axle
Note: can only be used once per battle

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(Kame mo-do)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user's skin turns green and his muscles double in size, the user's whole body is a gigantic shell (similar to Gaara's Sand armor) this shell doesn't reduce the user's handsign making speed, only reduces the user's running, jumping, and agility, the shell cannot break except from forbidden rank attacks. The user can now blast A-rank water attacks out of his mouth, and after soaking to the ground, it turns the whole field into a gigantic lake, the user also gains the ability to breath under water and must get wet every 2 turns or else this technique ends. The user becomes more un-affected by A-rank wind moves and S-rank fire moves. The user is super-effective to any lightning moves what so ever
Note: this technique can only be taught by Axle
Note: this technique can only be used once per battle
Note: after this technique is over, the user takes 100 damage
Note:

~ Both Declined. Do not submit the first one, restrict the second ~

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kame mo-do)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user's skin turns green and his muscles double in size, the user's whole body is a gigantic shell (similar to Gaara's Sand armor) this shell doesn't reduce the user's handsign making speed, only reduces the user's running, jumping, and agility, the shell cannot break except from forbidden rank attacks. The user can now blast A-rank water attacks out of his mouth, and after soaking to the ground, it turns the whole field into a gigantic lake, the user also gains the ability to breath under water and must get wet every 2 turns or else this technique ends. The user becomes more un-affected by A-rank wind moves and S-rank fire moves. The user is super-effective to any lightning moves what so ever. Water moves are increased +50
Note: this technique can only be taught by Axle
Note: this technique can only be used once per battle
Note: after this technique is over, the user takes 100 damage
Note: the user cannot use lightning and fire attacks while in this mode
Note: only 1 other jutsu can be used in the turn making this move

~ Declined, reduce its strength ~

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

fire style: fire manipulation (katon: kasai manipyure-shon)
rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: n/a
description: the user will spread his fire chakra around the battle field causing already created fire to fall under the users manipulation. the chakra also stays there so if the opponent uses a fire jutsu the user can take control of the opponents fire as well
~once per battle
~lasts 2 turns
~no fire jutsu 3 turns after usage

~ Declined, do not try this again ~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom weapon: ( Na kumi no rōnin ) - Blade set of Ronin

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 5 per turn when chakra is infused to smaller blades )
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is the blade set of skilled ninja. It contains four different parts. The first part is giant sword that's similar to Zabuza's hidden swordmen of the mist sword. The sword is called Guillotine and it was forged inside of hidden mist's master smith's workshop from eighteen smaller steel swords while he was inspired by the design of Zabuza's sword and decided to make something that looks like it but these swords differ from each other by the fact that zabuza's sword is longer, has the holes in the blade and is heavier. This sword is mainly carried on back. The three other swords are smaller type katanas that were too forged on the same place. The Katanas are made from special metals that causes them to have the ability to absorb elemental affinities just by user focusing different natured chakra into them meaning that one katana can contain one only one element that it can absorb. Shortest katana can only absorb wind element chakra causing it become sharper and the length of katana is increased by 4-6 inches. The middle sized katana can absorb only lightning nature chakra making it slightly numb place around the cut. The longest katana can only absorb water nature chakra making it cut faster in rain or underwater.

• [*] The Guillotine is carried on back of ninja
  [*] Three smaller swords are carried on left hip
  [*] Guillotine sword can be only swung by its master
  [*] Three smaller swords contain the ability to absorb elemental affinities.
  [*] Only skilled swordman can carry this set
  [*] While wearing these user can't perform any taijutsu
  [*] Shortest Katana can only absorb wind element chakra
  [*] Middle sized Katana can only absorb lightning element chakra
  [*] Longest katana can only absorb water element chakra

Guillotine looks similar to this expect it doesn't have the holes or isn't that long:

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Three smaller blades:

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~ Approved ~

( Suiton: Suikujira dangan ) - Water release: Water Whale missile

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Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( + 10 if used with lightning attack )
Description: User will focus huge amount of water chakra into large water source and perform Rabbit - Bird - Dog handseals causing the water chakra that's infused to water source raise up in form of big whale that's size of tsunami tidal wave. The Whale can only be used as a missile causing it to jump on its target crushing everything that's beneath it. When the whale collides with soild materials it will explode and send water that's inside of it 50 meters above the ground due the strong blast that it makes.
Note:
- Causes 15 damage to user due strain of this move
- Requires very large water source.
- The whale is size of tidal wave
- The water that is sent to skies from the blast can be used for rain jutsu
- The rain of water lasts only one
- No water moves for one turn.

( Rōnin kenshi jutsu: Shi ken jiten ) - Ronin swordsman arts: Four sword rotation

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Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user )
Description: User will draw out all four blades of Ronin sword set and take place them in specific order. The shortest blade is held in mouth sideways while user focuses wind chakra into it. The middle sized blade is held in your left armpit while user focuses lightning chakra into it. The Longest blade is held between your legs as Guillotine is still on your back. After the user has placed these blades on their spots he/she will start spinning in high speeds creating three element sword twirl. As that twirl hits user will keep hold of the swords until every sword has hit the opponent three times. After the three hits has landed user will place the swords into their scabbards in a blink of an eye and pull out the Guillotine from his back and hit opponent while twirling cutting the target half.
Note:
- Causes - 10 damage to user due the damage that spinning causes to muscles
- No sword moves or taijutsu for one turn after
- Hardening can't stop this move since one of the blades is infused with lightning chakra.
- The attack lasts five seconds and the opponent is hard to keep up with user unless he/she has sharingan
- Only skilled swordmen can learn this jutsu

~ Both Declined. Do not resubmit the first one, and only at maximum two types of elemental chakra at one time in the second and make it at least realistic ~