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You picked such a good music... I can't stop listening to it
 

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Your bio is quite cool as well xD I read the whole story, very well written. I wonder if you're basing that brother in someone from NB

The pictures though, a bit chilly for a Yuki, no?
 

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Your bio is quite cool as well xD I read the whole story, very well written. I wonder if you're basing that brother in someone from NB

The pictures though, a bit chilly for a Yuki, no?

You know what Lili ive been wondering the same thing
 

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Your bio is quite cool as well xD I read the whole story, very well written. I wonder if you're basing that brother in someone from NB

The pictures though, a bit chilly for a Yuki, no?

Well, I'd imagine they don't really feel the cold, that was my logic anyways xD but thanks! Read LA's bio too love... I'm sure you'll appreciate that as well <3

You know what Lili ive been wondering the same thing

Funny guy.
 

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A skimpy and scantly-clad young, beautiful woman with a heart of gold?
Sounds like someone Hawke would like to meet :)

Nice bio, as always. Hope you and LA'll get something out of this.
 

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A skimpy and scantly-clad young, beautiful woman with a heart of gold?
Sounds like someone Hawke would like to meet :)

Nice bio, as always. Hope you and LA'll get something out of this.
Hawke is everything.
 

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A skimpy and scantly-clad young, beautiful woman with a heart of gold?
Sounds like someone Hawke would like to meet :)

Nice bio, as always. Hope you and LA'll get something out of this.

Haha! If only the two were controlled by people with some way of forcing them to meet... Pre-planning of some sort... I mean, obviously that's not the case but wouldn't it be nice?

Thanks x

Hawke is everything.

I disagree under the correction, 'Hawke is most things'
 

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Haha! If only the two were controlled by people with some way of forcing them to meet... Pre-planning of some sort... I mean, obviously that's not the case but wouldn't it be nice?

Thanks x



I disagree under the correction, 'Hawke is most things'
Weeeeell, okay, i'll give you that, but answer one question. Is Katniss ever coming back?
 

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Weeeeell, okay, i'll give you that, but answer one question. Is Katniss ever coming back?

I doubt it, if she does it'll most likely be a one off adventure with my other bio.
 

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Awh, that sucks, nice biography though, you read comics?

Yeah, I've recently fallen back into super nerd mode so I'm all about comics at the moment xD I go through phases
 

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I read his bio. Your story is better, but that twist with the hooded guy... Amazing plot that you both see eachother! That sounds like something Toriann would do O_O And I have just the jutsu to do it xD (Myriad of Mockingbirds)
 

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I read his bio. Your story is better, but that twist with the hooded guy... Amazing plot that you both see eachother! That sounds like something Toriann would do O_O And I have just the jutsu to do it xD (Myriad of Mockingbirds)

I said this :T_T: Well I said "Lili is good with Gen", but it was in this context Z_Z
 

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I read his bio. Your story is better, but that twist with the hooded guy... Amazing plot that you both see eachother! That sounds like something Toriann would do O_O And I have just the jutsu to do it xD (Myriad of Mockingbirds)

Glad you liked it, what'd you think of the first person nature of the text? Nice? Or better in third?

Me neither, but I'm just glad she mentioned it :shy:

Hehe, Lili was always the obvious choice for meany... And I guess it'd be pretty cool being as she taught me most of the stuff in my history... But meh, I like Lili too much to kill her ;)
 

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Yeah, and Lili wouldn't really do that to her beloved Jay :)
She could though... she could definately do it *evil laugh*

I liekd the first person aspect of it, it make sit really personal. What I like the most, though, was your description of your scent. It's very beautiful and feminine, yet denotes such an emotional weight and depth, like a beautiful scar. I also loved the drawing, kept imagining it as a really well drawn sea lion, being burnt and enveloped in ashes and flames, but still piercing through you with it's eyes.
Veyr well done, I liked it. great emotional depth throughout.

And that theme song just enforces that emotional depth, making your character a really powerful one, not in power but in fortitude and weight of spirit.
 

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Yeah, and Lili wouldn't really do that to her beloved Jay :)
She could though... she could definately do it *evil laugh*

I liekd the first person aspect of it, it make sit really personal. What I like the most, though, was your description of your scent. It's very beautiful and feminine, yet denotes such an emotional weight and depth, like a beautiful scar. I also loved the drawing, kept imagining it as a really well drawn sea lion, being burnt and enveloped in ashes and flames, but still piercing through you with it's eyes.
Veyr well done, I liked it. great emotional depth throughout.

And that theme song just enforces that emotional depth, making your character a really powerful one, not in power but in fortitude and weight of spirit.

All I have for you is <3. I'm sorry I can't offer you more, but that will have to do. Xx
 

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I like that more people are creating sibling bios now, its a good look.
 
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