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[Fex]

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[Saikyokami]

the hair behind the light white light looks sharpened to a very annoying point.
maybe it's just that I find the brightness weird... the rest of it being dark

 

[IchaIchaSage]

dang nice

 

[IndraGripen]

Indit, which program do you use?

 

[Fex]

Indit, which program do you use?

Pxlr.​

 

[Hei]

I'll give CnC on that one ~

So,let's start with problematic parts: the signature overall is oversaturated.Background is a pure,strong light that one the one hand gives good lightning in the tag,on the other hand it doesn't pleasant eyes.Nothing is going on there,hence looks boring.
Look at the left girl's back,there is no light source but use lightned her back ? Then,red eyes...use brushes more accurate,your red light steped over the skin (and it's not really part of glaw i think).
Shades of grey lows the quality of the signature,so use it carefully.The color choice is not the best, considering color scheme of the render,you deafed original colors.These color manipulation needs some sort of skill and pratice in order you could change colors wisely.
C4ds below should be blurred ,so that they wondt distract that much from your render and text.
As for the text,i'm not sure about it.Neither like nor dislike the text.Just think "together" is a bit large imo.
Thick stroke without sides would look better.

Anyway,you did a nice job and i'd like to see more works from you

 

[Fex]

I'll give CnC on that one ~

So,let's start with problematic parts: the signature overall is oversaturated.Background is a pure,strong light that one the one hand gives good lightning in the tag,on the other hand it doesn't pleasant eyes.Nothing is going on there,hence looks boring.
Look at the left girl's back,there is no light source but use lightned her back ? Then,red eyes...use brushes more accurate,your red light steped over the skin (and it's not really part of glaw i think).
Shades of grey lows the quality of the signature,so use it carefully.The color choice is not the best, considering color scheme of the render,you deafed original colors.These color manipulation needs some sort of skill and pratice in order you could change colors wisely.
C4ds below should be blurred ,so that they wondt distract that much from your render and text.
As for the text,i'm not sure about it.Neither like nor dislike the text.Just think "together" is a bit large imo.
Thick stroke without sides would look better.

Anyway,you did a nice job and i'd like to see more works from you

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Thanks for the CnC man​

 

[Akumetsu]

If I may ask, when was the last tine that you read a tutorial? Just like the previous signature, I really like the idea behind the tags, but the execution goes completely wrong. It feels like an experienced person came up with the idea and a beginner had to make it.

Hēi already stated the major points but I had like to add a couple of small advices.

• like with your last sig, using white in a signature with dark vocals is dangerous. It quickly takes away the attention from the intended vocal point
• never use two strong colors in one signature, pick one and add other colors to supplement the main color
• when using multiple vocals, dont try to seperate them, otherwise you end up with a signature with too many things going on at the same moment

 

[Fex]

If I may ask, when was the last tine that you read a tutorial? Just like the previous signature, I really like the idea behind the tags, but the execution goes completely wrong. It feels like an experienced person came up with the idea and a beginner had to make it.

Hēi already stated the major points but I had like to add a couple of small advices.

• like with your last sig, using white in a signature with dark vocals is dangerous. It quickly takes away the attention from the intended vocal point
• never use two strong colors in one signature, pick one and add other colors to supplement the main color
• when using multiple vocals, dont try to seperate them, otherwise you end up with a signature with too many things going on at the same moment

I don't really go off tutorials
I mainly go off with inspiration like life I see a tag I would to make a tag to look similar to it without copying it or having the PSD.​

 

[Akumetsu]

I don't really go off tutorials
I mainly go off with inspiration like life I see a tag I would to make a tag to look similar to it without copying it or having the PSD.​

Tutorials aren't meant for straight copying, but to understand the reasoning behind every step. And when you understand how all the things go, you can freely create tags, without having to follow any tutorials.

I understand how how trying to re-create things while giving it your own twist is fun, but if you lack the basic knowledge of what actually makes a signature better or worse, it can become quite a tough job to produce a good signature. I just looked at your most recent works and all I see are major flaws in the basics. Don't get me wrong, I am not trying to bash or anything of that kind, but I am just sad because I see such a huge potential without any progress.

 

[Azu]

Uh, it's way better than your other tags. The others looked pretty unfinished to me. This one is pretty good.

But I hate the text, completely distracted me from the focal. It looks over-saturated or is it just me?
But nice one!