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***Alternate Kaguya arc and Toneri Ootsutsuki, The last the movie***
Hello guys, I know that the manga is basically over for quite some time, Anyway I would like to share with you completly alternative scenario of Kaguya arc. Some of them are in continous order and some of them as separate parts only being based on previous canon Manga chapters.
The main point of that thread is for me to make poll asking how many of you would like for me to write The last the movie as prediction, or at least just battle scenes, as I am not good in romance story. Here I go:
Enjoy reading
^^ These are just examples which I let myself post here.
Due to big size, I left other predicitons as links to my original prediciton threads:
682:
SEQUEL 683:
685:
686:
687:
SEQUEL 688:
688:
SEQUEL 689:
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690:
So, What do you think about them ? =D
PLEASE VOTE IN THE POLL
Hello guys, I know that the manga is basically over for quite some time, Anyway I would like to share with you completly alternative scenario of Kaguya arc. Some of them are in continous order and some of them as separate parts only being based on previous canon Manga chapters.
The main point of that thread is for me to make poll asking how many of you would like for me to write The last the movie as prediction, or at least just battle scenes, as I am not good in romance story. Here I go:
- characters
- [] - descriptions of scenes
- () - actions
- techniques
POV - point of view
Enjoy reading
680 - Witness in fear of Kaguya Ootsutsuki
The End beginsl!
Naruto(scared): uwaaah !
[Sasuke falling down in lava pool with his back turned in lava direction from Sasuke's POV].
Sasuke(concerned face): Shit !
[Kakashi, Sakura and Obito falling down in lava pool next to Naruto are shown from Naruto's POV]
Kakashi(scared): ?! *I have to find out how to get out of it !*
Sakura: Uwaah !
Naruto(focus): NO, Kakashi- sensei, Sakura-chan and Obito ! *Sasuke !*
Sasuke(focus): I know Naruto
[Kaguya emotionlessly watches as Naruto, Sasuke and other are about to vanish in lava pool.]
[Sasuke within Perfect Sussano and Naruto within Ashura's chakra warrior about same size land hard on lava's surface. Lava splash under chakra constructs.]
Naruto(serious face): Don't
Sasuke(serious face): understimate us !
[Kaguya look on them showing no emotions on her face]
[Keep falling down Kakashi, Sakura and Obito are shown]
Naruto(worried): Kakakshi- sensei, Sakura- chan, Obito ! (grabs them with Ashura's avatar hands)
Sasuke(smirks): hmpf, you have to destroy every entrance, eh Naruto
Naruto(shouts): shut your mouth Sasuke, stop acting supperior.
Kaguya(cold and low voice): Are you finished with your childlish argument ?!
Naruto/Sasuke(look above themselves): ?!
[Barrage chunks of rocks are shown strafing at them from above at amazing speed]
[Sasuke manifest Giant Sussano blade in both Sussano hands]
Sasuke(serious): Come !
[Naruto sends Truth seeking balls at Incomming pieces of rocks incomming at him]
Naruto(serious): bring it on !
[Truth seeking balls collide with chunks of rocks as well as Sussano's blades swinging cause shockwaves which erases many big chunks of rocks.]
Kaguya(watches rocks being destroyed): Persistent brats.
[Inner chakra flowing through Naruto and Sasuke chakra systems are shown. Thick amount of focused chakra located around Naruto and Sasuke's chakra warriors's feet]
Kaguya: I see... *They are very skilled to send such amount chakra to feet of their chakra's avatars and even keep it going.*
[There is no trail of any chunks of rocks falling down anymore, while Naruto and Sasuke stand firm]
Kaguya(smirks in evil way): You handled it well, now let's see how you survive it (swing her hands down)
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Spikes sticking out of cavern ceiling shoot out in Naruto and Sasuke's direction by streetching]
[Sasuke moves his Sussano's hands with Sussano blades upwards while Naruto shapes just returned truth seeking balls in black blades.]
[Spikes keep streetching as they are in Naruto's and Sasuke's chakra avatars range]
Naruto/Sasuke: now !
[Both Naruto and Sasuke swings their blades within grip of Sussano and Ashura's avatar hands at incomming hard and very sharp spikes shattering them.]
[Both Kakashi and Sakura look in awe as they watch within ashura's avatar. Obito is shown floating limply close to them]
Kaguya(interested): It looks like they are indeed Ashura and Indra.
[Dust fall down in lava pool revealing unharmed and unscatched both Naruto and Sasuke within chakra avatars]
Sasuke(spot Kaguya about to move her fingers): ?! I won't let you
[Sussano's blades fade away to be replaced by chakra layered bow and arrows in different]
Sasuke: Blaze release: Sussano arrow !
[Perfect Sussano shoot arrow ignited by black flames at Kaguya]
[Chakra multi layered wall about enough size as arrow appears ]
[Sussano's chakra arrow cracks upon contact with chakra inforced wall]
[Chakra layered pieces formed into walls shatter and disappear]
Sasuke(schocked): what the ?!
Kaguya(calm tone): It is futile, Indra's reincarnation
Sasuke: Let's see about this !
[Sasuke put many chakra layered arrows at bow ready to shoot as all arrows get engulfed by black flames]
Naruto: Sasuke, let me help you !
[Naruto creates six Rasenshurikens in each Ashura's avatar aiming at Kaguya]
[Naruto throws all six Rasenshurikens from different angles at Kaguya]
Naruto: Takes this ! Wind release: Rasenshuriken !
[Chakra shields just appeared in thin air cracks and fade away due to overhelming amount of attacks]
[Barrage of black flaming spheres or swirls push their way further]
[Zoom in Kaguya's face is shown]
Kaguya(Byakugan glow violently): Heavenly Rotation !
[Chain of explosions of wind blades cutting her over and over while black flames fully engulf her]
[Whirl of dense spiraling black chakra begin to surface through dust fading away ]
Naruto/Sasuke: Did we get her ?!
Naruto/Sasuke: Damn !
Kaguya(calm): You are skilled Ashura and Indra's recincarnations I will give you that
Kaguya(smirk in evil way): However it is not enough to stop me
[The lava begin to boil more and more intense as very intense steam evaporates]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Perfect Sussano and Ashura's avatar begin to melt as lava consumes it drawing it inside. Lava pool seem also to raise as well.]
Kakashi/Sakura: Naruto !
[Both Naruto and Sasuke jumps high releasing their chakra avatars to avoid raising lava.]
Kakashi/Sakura: ?!
[Kaguya watches them with pleassure as she move her arm upwards causing huge stream of lava to raise in front of her]
Naruto: Kakashi, Sakura ?! *Damn i have to focus ! Chomei !*
Chomei: got it
Naruto(forms handseals): Wind release: air platform !
[Invisible platform creates under Kakashia and Sakura allowing them to land safely from lava]
Sasuke(spot something with uneasy look): Naruto !
Naruto: ?!
[Intense stream of lava flows over Naruto and Sasuke as Kaguya moves her hand]
Naruto: shit !
[Both Naruto and Sasuke activates their chakra avatars in last second moving themselves out of lava stream way]
Naruto(turns his head): No Kakashi, Sakura-chan ! *Damn I won't make it in time !*
[Scared to bone Kakashi and Sakura watch as lava descends towards them from above]
[Suddenly kakashi and Sakura disappear as lava pours down back into pool]
[Branches shoots of from ground uncovered by lava and bind around Kaguya, who doesn't even bother to dodge]
[Hiruzen appears in front of Kaguya unleashing all nature attacks at grand scale hitting her over and over ]
Naruto: Songoku !
Songoku: I am on it !
[Naruto extend his hand forward then move it upwards]
Naruto: Sage art: lava pillars !
[All lava pillars shoot of around where Kaguya was hit enclosing around her]
Naruto: Haha, Take this Kaguy ?!
[All lava streams along with dust shrouding her get blown away in one second]
[Unharmed with no scratches Kaguya floating is shown]
[Tobirama, Minato along with Kakashi and Sakura land safely on the ground where lava doesn't reach.]
[Kaguya streetches both her hands in different directions with just one finger pointed at. Hashirama from below her is shown standing on giant branch at other at in front of her Hiruzen]
Hiruzen: ?!
Hashirama: ?!
Kaguya: Lightining touch !
[Hiruzen begin to fall down into lava pool as he disappears]
[Tobirama along with Hiruzen appear next to him]
Hiruzen: as always on Time Second ?!
Tobirama: Any ideas how to beat her Saru ?!
Hiruzen: Sorry to disappoint you, but she seems to be invincible and yet I was struck just by glimpse of her power which caused me shivers going through my body...
Minato(curses): If I only had arms, then maybe I could think about something.
Hashirama: This woman... her power is unreal
[Kaguya cracks her head as she spots Naruto and Sasuke joining Hokages]
Kaguya(smirks): Very well
[Kaguya swings her hand smootly creating powerfull blow of winds shattering Hokages in pieces while Naruto and Sasuke avoid bringing Sakura, kakashi and Obito with themselves.]
Kaguya(watches Hokages regenerating): ?!
[All Hokages are shown regenerated with Minato having his arms back]
Minato: I can finally act again (flashes to Naruto tapping his both shoulders)
Hokages: ?!
Kaguya(takes Gentle fist stance): Eight Trigrams: 512 heavenly strikes !
[All Hokages are hit so many times that they bodies cracks and become more heavy as kaguya strike them last time sending theim into lava]
Naruto: Hokages !, Sasuke !
Sasuke(focus on his Rinnegan): I know !
Kaguya: Not so fast, young boy. Eight trigrams: Vacuum strikes !
[Kaguya turns around as she thrust her hand forward in thin air aiming at Sasuke who is far away]
Sasuke: What The ?!
Sasuke(clutches his eye in pain): Gah !!! *Impossible , she shut down my nerves in my eye !*
Kaguya(cold commanding voice): I warned you
Kaguya(only lower face is visible with mouth moving): You are next, Ashura's reincnarnation
[Unseen by noone Kaguya moves so fast that she becomes visible when she appears in front of Naruto in gentle fist pose with her nails touching Naruto's chest]
Naruto(schocked): When ?!
Kaguya: It is end my boy, Eight Trigrams: 512 heaveny strikes !
????: Kamui !
[Kaguya keep striking as he changes poses while all her attack pass through Naruto makes her confused]
Kaguya: How ?!
[Shot of known to us handseals made by Kakashi's hands]
Kakashi: Shiki Fuijn !
[Repear death demon appear behind Kakashi to freeze his glance at someone as his mouths move]
[Cross panel of Kaguya and Death demon asking each other]
Kaguya/Repear death demon: Hamura ?!/ Mother (demon's voice translated)
Side text: Powerless againt her overhelming power, then repear death demon appears to be frozen as it locks it eyes with Kaguya who call it Hamura, what is the shocking truth about Hagoromo's brother[/B]
END
681 - Hamura Ootsutsuki and Hagoromo Ootsutsuki
PAGE ONE
[Naruto falling down in lava pool is shown from Naruto's POV]Naruto(scared): uwaaah !
[Sasuke falling down in lava pool with his back turned in lava direction from Sasuke's POV].
Sasuke(concerned face): Shit !
[Kakashi, Sakura and Obito falling down in lava pool next to Naruto are shown from Naruto's POV]
Kakashi(scared): ?! *I have to find out how to get out of it !*
Sakura: Uwaah !
Naruto(focus): NO, Kakashi- sensei, Sakura-chan and Obito ! *Sasuke !*
Sasuke(focus): I know Naruto
[Kaguya emotionlessly watches as Naruto, Sasuke and other are about to vanish in lava pool.]
PAGE TWO
SFX: Splash, Splash[Sasuke within Perfect Sussano and Naruto within Ashura's chakra warrior about same size land hard on lava's surface. Lava splash under chakra constructs.]
Naruto(serious face): Don't
Sasuke(serious face): understimate us !
[Kaguya look on them showing no emotions on her face]
[Keep falling down Kakashi, Sakura and Obito are shown]
Naruto(worried): Kakakshi- sensei, Sakura- chan, Obito ! (grabs them with Ashura's avatar hands)
Sasuke(smirks): hmpf, you have to destroy every entrance, eh Naruto
Naruto(shouts): shut your mouth Sasuke, stop acting supperior.
PAGE THREE
[Kaguya raises her both hands upwards while still floating]Kaguya(cold and low voice): Are you finished with your childlish argument ?!
Naruto/Sasuke(look above themselves): ?!
[Barrage chunks of rocks are shown strafing at them from above at amazing speed]
[Sasuke manifest Giant Sussano blade in both Sussano hands]
Sasuke(serious): Come !
[Naruto sends Truth seeking balls at Incomming pieces of rocks incomming at him]
Naruto(serious): bring it on !
[Truth seeking balls collide with chunks of rocks as well as Sussano's blades swinging cause shockwaves which erases many big chunks of rocks.]
PAGE FOUR
[Zoom in Kaguya's face with focus on her Byakugan activated]Kaguya(watches rocks being destroyed): Persistent brats.
[Inner chakra flowing through Naruto and Sasuke chakra systems are shown. Thick amount of focused chakra located around Naruto and Sasuke's chakra warriors's feet]
Kaguya: I see... *They are very skilled to send such amount chakra to feet of their chakra's avatars and even keep it going.*
[There is no trail of any chunks of rocks falling down anymore, while Naruto and Sasuke stand firm]
Kaguya(smirks in evil way): You handled it well, now let's see how you survive it (swing her hands down)
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Spikes sticking out of cavern ceiling shoot out in Naruto and Sasuke's direction by streetching]
PAGE FIVE
Naruto/Sasuke: Here they go [Sasuke moves his Sussano's hands with Sussano blades upwards while Naruto shapes just returned truth seeking balls in black blades.]
[Spikes keep streetching as they are in Naruto's and Sasuke's chakra avatars range]
Naruto/Sasuke: now !
[Both Naruto and Sasuke swings their blades within grip of Sussano and Ashura's avatar hands at incomming hard and very sharp spikes shattering them.]
[Both Kakashi and Sakura look in awe as they watch within ashura's avatar. Obito is shown floating limply close to them]
PAGE SIX
[Kaguya watches spikes keep getting shattered as dust floats around shrouding them ]Kaguya(interested): It looks like they are indeed Ashura and Indra.
[Dust fall down in lava pool revealing unharmed and unscatched both Naruto and Sasuke within chakra avatars]
Sasuke(spot Kaguya about to move her fingers): ?! I won't let you
[Sussano's blades fade away to be replaced by chakra layered bow and arrows in different]
Sasuke: Blaze release: Sussano arrow !
[Perfect Sussano shoot arrow ignited by black flames at Kaguya]
[Chakra multi layered wall about enough size as arrow appears ]
[Sussano's chakra arrow cracks upon contact with chakra inforced wall]
[Chakra layered pieces formed into walls shatter and disappear]
PAGE SEVEN
[Kaguya is shown looking at the same place when chakra inforced shield appeared]Sasuke(schocked): what the ?!
Kaguya(calm tone): It is futile, Indra's reincarnation
Sasuke: Let's see about this !
[Sasuke put many chakra layered arrows at bow ready to shoot as all arrows get engulfed by black flames]
Naruto: Sasuke, let me help you !
[Naruto creates six Rasenshurikens in each Ashura's avatar aiming at Kaguya]
[Naruto throws all six Rasenshurikens from different angles at Kaguya]
Naruto: Takes this ! Wind release: Rasenshuriken !
PAGE EIGHT
[All Wind release: Rasenshurikens mix with arrows engulfed by black flames creating black flaming spheres colliding with again formed chakra's layered shields appearing in Kaguya's vision range ][Chakra shields just appeared in thin air cracks and fade away due to overhelming amount of attacks]
[Barrage of black flaming spheres or swirls push their way further]
[Zoom in Kaguya's face is shown]
Kaguya(Byakugan glow violently): Heavenly Rotation !
[Chain of explosions of wind blades cutting her over and over while black flames fully engulf her]
[Whirl of dense spiraling black chakra begin to surface through dust fading away ]
Naruto/Sasuke: Did we get her ?!
PAGE NINE
[Kaguya stop spining around in air cause chakra swirl to diffuse in thin air.]Naruto/Sasuke: Damn !
Kaguya(calm): You are skilled Ashura and Indra's recincarnations I will give you that
Kaguya(smirk in evil way): However it is not enough to stop me
[The lava begin to boil more and more intense as very intense steam evaporates]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Perfect Sussano and Ashura's avatar begin to melt as lava consumes it drawing it inside. Lava pool seem also to raise as well.]
Kakashi/Sakura: Naruto !
[Both Naruto and Sasuke jumps high releasing their chakra avatars to avoid raising lava.]
PAGE TEN
[Kakashi and Sakura are shown falling down as Naruto's chakra avatar disappear]Kakashi/Sakura: ?!
[Kaguya watches them with pleassure as she move her arm upwards causing huge stream of lava to raise in front of her]
Naruto: Kakashi, Sakura ?! *Damn i have to focus ! Chomei !*
Chomei: got it
Naruto(forms handseals): Wind release: air platform !
[Invisible platform creates under Kakashia and Sakura allowing them to land safely from lava]
Sasuke(spot something with uneasy look): Naruto !
Naruto: ?!
PAGE ELEVEN
Kaguya(cold): They should be your last concern right now(point at them with her raised hand as she move it forwards)[Intense stream of lava flows over Naruto and Sasuke as Kaguya moves her hand]
Naruto: shit !
[Both Naruto and Sasuke activates their chakra avatars in last second moving themselves out of lava stream way]
Naruto(turns his head): No Kakashi, Sakura-chan ! *Damn I won't make it in time !*
[Scared to bone Kakashi and Sakura watch as lava descends towards them from above]
[Suddenly kakashi and Sakura disappear as lava pours down back into pool]
PAGE TWELVE
Kaguya(narrow her eyes): Another pests [Branches shoots of from ground uncovered by lava and bind around Kaguya, who doesn't even bother to dodge]
[Hiruzen appears in front of Kaguya unleashing all nature attacks at grand scale hitting her over and over ]
Naruto: Songoku !
Songoku: I am on it !
[Naruto extend his hand forward then move it upwards]
Naruto: Sage art: lava pillars !
[All lava pillars shoot of around where Kaguya was hit enclosing around her]
Naruto: Haha, Take this Kaguy ?!
PAGE THIRTEEN
Kaguya: Full body blow ![All lava streams along with dust shrouding her get blown away in one second]
[Unharmed with no scratches Kaguya floating is shown]
[Tobirama, Minato along with Kakashi and Sakura land safely on the ground where lava doesn't reach.]
[Kaguya streetches both her hands in different directions with just one finger pointed at. Hashirama from below her is shown standing on giant branch at other at in front of her Hiruzen]
Hiruzen: ?!
Hashirama: ?!
Kaguya: Lightining touch !
PAGE FOURTEEN
[Hiruzen is struck by sudden black lighting striking him comming from Kaguya's finger while Hashirama summons wood golem to shield himself which get destroyed instantly.][Hiruzen begin to fall down into lava pool as he disappears]
[Tobirama along with Hiruzen appear next to him]
Hiruzen: as always on Time Second ?!
Tobirama: Any ideas how to beat her Saru ?!
Hiruzen: Sorry to disappoint you, but she seems to be invincible and yet I was struck just by glimpse of her power which caused me shivers going through my body...
Minato(curses): If I only had arms, then maybe I could think about something.
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Hashirama is shown with widden eyes and shocked expression as wood pieces fall downs into lava in front of him ]Hashirama: This woman... her power is unreal
[Kaguya cracks her head as she spots Naruto and Sasuke joining Hokages]
Kaguya(smirks): Very well
[Kaguya swings her hand smootly creating powerfull blow of winds shattering Hokages in pieces while Naruto and Sasuke avoid bringing Sakura, kakashi and Obito with themselves.]
Kaguya(watches Hokages regenerating): ?!
[All Hokages are shown regenerated with Minato having his arms back]
Minato: I can finally act again (flashes to Naruto tapping his both shoulders)
PAGE SIXTEEN
[Before Hokage can act Kaguya appear in front of them ]Hokages: ?!
Kaguya(takes Gentle fist stance): Eight Trigrams: 512 heavenly strikes !
[All Hokages are hit so many times that they bodies cracks and become more heavy as kaguya strike them last time sending theim into lava]
Naruto: Hokages !, Sasuke !
Sasuke(focus on his Rinnegan): I know !
Kaguya: Not so fast, young boy. Eight trigrams: Vacuum strikes !
[Kaguya turns around as she thrust her hand forward in thin air aiming at Sasuke who is far away]
Sasuke: What The ?!
Sasuke(clutches his eye in pain): Gah !!! *Impossible , she shut down my nerves in my eye !*
Kaguya(cold commanding voice): I warned you
PAGE SEVENTEEN
Naruto: You will pay ! (chrages Tailed beast bomb)Kaguya(only lower face is visible with mouth moving): You are next, Ashura's reincnarnation
[Unseen by noone Kaguya moves so fast that she becomes visible when she appears in front of Naruto in gentle fist pose with her nails touching Naruto's chest]
Naruto(schocked): When ?!
Kaguya: It is end my boy, Eight Trigrams: 512 heaveny strikes !
????: Kamui !
[Kaguya keep striking as he changes poses while all her attack pass through Naruto makes her confused]
Kaguya: How ?!
[Shot of known to us handseals made by Kakashi's hands]
Kakashi: Shiki Fuijn !
[Repear death demon appear behind Kakashi to freeze his glance at someone as his mouths move]
[Cross panel of Kaguya and Death demon asking each other]
Kaguya/Repear death demon: Hamura ?!/ Mother (demon's voice translated)
Side text: Powerless againt her overhelming power, then repear death demon appears to be frozen as it locks it eyes with Kaguya who call it Hamura, what is the shocking truth about Hagoromo's brother[/B]
END
681 - Hamura Ootsutsuki and Hagoromo Ootsutsuki
681 - Hagoromo and Hamura Ootsutsuki
Thrust and slash!
[Zoom out on thick chakra filled ring schockwave created from Sasuke using Sussano to slash Kaguya.] [Schockwave spread around anihilating anything in it's way. Under shockwave affected area of lava is shown]
[Heavy wind blows instantly.Walls and ceiling of cave shake violently and crumble ]
[Schockwave fade leaving wind blows and lava splashing which slowly wear off]
Naruto(corcerned): *Did he get her ?!* (floating)
[Schocked Sasuke within Sussano struggles to move his Sussano's blade any further].
Sasuke: *Tell me this is bad joke* Impossible...
[Naruto and Naruto clones in company of Kakashi and Sakura are shown with widden eyes watching the scene]
Naruto/Kakashi/Sakura: How ?!
Kaguya(eyes Sasuke in front of her): You couldn't think it could work, Could you ?
[Shot on Kaguya's hand grabbing and stopping Sussano's blade which Sasuke use to keep overpower her]
Naruto(serious face): damn you witch ! (clenches his fists in anger)
Kaguya(eyes Naruto with serious face): Watch your toungue or our fan will end faster then I planed.
Sasuke: ?! *Oppening, now I wil try to push my Sussano's blade to slash her !*
[Shot on Sussabo's blade barerly moves further cutting external layer of skin on her palm]
Kaguya(without even taking look at Sasuke): ?! I thought you could be more wise Indra
[Kaguya's eyes meet with Sasuke's own with great determination]
Kaguya: *This look... that face*
[Flashback of Hamura with deadly expression pointing his left palm with crescent moon mark at her]
Kaguya(getting angry): *You never know when to give up Hamura, my son, hmpf* Time to end it !
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Kaguya extend her free right arm with opened palm aiming at Sussano
[Kaguya pushes away Sussano's blade with her busy left hand ]
[Kaguya takes Gentle fist battle stance as veins bulge around her eyes being sign of Byakugan]
Naruto: Sasuke, get away from her !(moves a bit forward)
Sasuke: *She couldn't break Sussa.?!*
[Kaguya stops striking Sussano with her hand barerly extended as 256 white dots on Sussano glow]
[Cracks spread around entire Sussano form as Sasuke watches with horrified face while Kaguya keep smilling]
[Sussano breaks apart in dissolving chakra pieces as Sasuke try to jump away from her]
Naruto: Sasuke ! (charges at full speed at Kaguya behind her at her back)
Sasuke: ?! *SO fast !*
[Kaguya's hair are shown streeched a lot while being enveloped around him keeping him in air]
Kaguya(calm down): Where did you think you were going ? (tighten her grip of her hairs)
[Kaguya is shown calm as Naruto is shown enclosing towards her from behind her]
Kaguya: Do you want really so badly to die too, Ashura ?
Naruto(schocked): ?! (shaking a bit)
[Sasuke keep looking on as Kaguya closes her eyes just for moment]
Sasuke: ?! *Now is my chance* Chidori Nagashi !
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's left hand glow as black lightining strucks Kaguya going through her hair]
Kaguya(open her eyes instantly): ?!
Sasuke: Naruto, now !
Naruto: Yosh ! *That is Sasuke I known, just one moment of guard down and he can use it, great work !*
[Naruto shoot off one giant chakra arm hitting Kaguya]
[In two seconds before she get dipped into lava pool she points at Sasuke with her three fingers of right hand]
Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly Sasuke feel immense pain going up around his left eye as he keep falling down in slow motion]
Sasuke: ARGH ! *Clutches his closed left eye in pain*
[Lava's surface get disrupted then splash a bit as it wears off signaling Kaguya just get dipped into it.]
[Sasuke land suddenly at Naruto's turth seeking ball flattened to platform shape.]
[Naruto is shown breathing with relief as Naruto's clone is shown flying away in tower's direction in background.]
[Naruto flies next to Sasuke who still keep his eye in pain]
[Surface of lava under them begin to boil violently]
Sasuke: ?!
Naruto: Just Hurry up and do it !
[Sasuke stick his opened palm of left arm with Naruto's right palm as their marks connect to each other]
Nauto/Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly They feel burst of each other power going through their bodies. It feels as being struck by lightining]
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's hand and Sun on Naruto's hand keep glowing as they pull their hands back]
[Suddenly pillars of the lava shoot off around them enclosing them in shape of prison]
Kaguya: My turn, prepare yourseleves Ashura, Indra!
[Heat of air increases terrible in just mere seconds as lava blows into air melting ground around]
[Lava fall down melting a part of ceiling as it comes in contact with it due to heat of lava.]
[Lava fully sink back into lava pool reforming it as surface of lava slowly calm down after some splashing]
[Sasuke within Perfect Sussano even bigger with Naruto within Ashura's avatar floating next to him.]
Naruto: Great timming, Sasuke !
Sasuke: nicely done, Naruto
[Kaguya emerges from lava pool flying up as she notices them within their chakra avatars about same size]
Kaguya: ?! How ? *Indra shouldn't be able to use Sussano after my attack... and Ashura should be limited a bit too... Could it be work of my son...*
Naruto(smiles): The Old Man Hagoromo, he made us even resistant to your power
Sasuke: hmpf, Naruto is right. It seems you are indeed the stronger one but Hagoromo was much more skilled then you, he was true genious and considering your expression he had to be close to you at some point in power
Kaguya(enraged): ?! *so they realized it already...*
Kaguya(calm down but still serious): I will tell you before I end your lives, you deserve it. It is true that Once Hagoromo was threat even to me.. it was when he became Ten tails host.
[Flashback of Kaguya recalling past in her mind]
Prime Hagoromo(sad): Mother, Hamura died in fight against Ten tails is there any way to bring him back
Kaguya(with obsessed look): There is no point even if there is way
Kaguya: Let me explain to you, my dear son(smirks). Your fight against Ten tails was mere test to check if you are worthy to help me in my goal.
Prime Hagoromo: You can not be serious, Mother is that so joke... Hamura was very strong and has crystal heart ?!(get interrupted)
Kaguya: this is why.(slowing down) This is why he had to be killed anyway at some point. Hamura put too much faith in filthy humans who destroy this beautifull planet which is my nursery.
Prime Hagoromo(enraged and sad): Mother..., Did you mean you wanted to kill Hamura yourself if he didn't die ?!
[Kaguya is shown landing on her ass as Hagoromo with anger in his eyes is shown with staff extended in her direction]
Hagoromo: I will stop you at any cost !
Kaguya: You the only my son, in who I trusted that you would follow me... If you insist on stopping me then I have to kill you (open her all eyes along with Third eye glowing violently)
Hagoromo: I have never believed that I will be the one to kill you mother, but I will save this world from your madness !
[Flashback breaks as kaguya stop recalling her flashback]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (take battle stance within their chakra avatars)
[Kaguya burst huge chakra which glow violently. Air condense and heat in air rise instantly]
Naruto: *Shit, It becomes to hard to breath... and my chakra avatar...*?!
Sasuke: *Shit, This heat so incredible that even my Sussano...* ?!
[Both Ashura's avatar and Sussano keep melting. Naruto and Sasuke pressure to maintain]
[Slowly huge amount expelled by Kaguya recedes back in her body as she eyes them]
[Suddenly Black flames violently waving appear on Sussano and Ashura's avatar]
Sasuke(smirks): This time you chose wrong (focus his left eye at flame on Sussano)
[Black Flame emitting incredible heat keep burning through Sussano.
[Sasuke struggle to control it as flames do not respond to his control/power]
[Naruto brings Truth seeking balls in black flames as they burn through his avatar]
Kaguya(eyes both of them): It is futile, Indra and Ashura.
[Sasuke creates his own black flames to overpower or push Kaguya's black flames]
[Truth seeking balls keep diminishing black flames upon contact]
[Getting weaker black flames burn almost completly inside Sussano and chakra avatar]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (cancel their chakra avatar and Sussano instantly)
Kaguya: Now (send incredible gravity push at them)
[Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke are hit by push force as they send flying into lava]
[They fly up to get away from lava as Kaguya appear between them. Hands ignited by incredible heat and steaming a lot]
Kaguya(smirks): You are done
[Kaguya punches and kicks them as their skin get burnt each time due to heat filled strikes]
Naruto/Sasuke: ARGH ?! (cover themselves with hands)
[Kaguya finishes deadly assault striking Naruto at chest with her nails piercing in flesh]
[Kaguya's POV Nails hitting chakra release point inside Naruto near heart]
PAGE ONE
[Shot on the lava bursting and splashing while rising a bit into air ][Zoom out on thick chakra filled ring schockwave created from Sasuke using Sussano to slash Kaguya.] [Schockwave spread around anihilating anything in it's way. Under shockwave affected area of lava is shown]
[Heavy wind blows instantly.Walls and ceiling of cave shake violently and crumble ]
[Schockwave fade leaving wind blows and lava splashing which slowly wear off]
Naruto(corcerned): *Did he get her ?!* (floating)
[Schocked Sasuke within Sussano struggles to move his Sussano's blade any further].
Sasuke: *Tell me this is bad joke* Impossible...
[Naruto and Naruto clones in company of Kakashi and Sakura are shown with widden eyes watching the scene]
Naruto/Kakashi/Sakura: How ?!
PAGE TWO
[Zoom in Kaguya pretty face with evil smirk draws on her face]Kaguya(eyes Sasuke in front of her): You couldn't think it could work, Could you ?
[Shot on Kaguya's hand grabbing and stopping Sussano's blade which Sasuke use to keep overpower her]
Naruto(serious face): damn you witch ! (clenches his fists in anger)
Kaguya(eyes Naruto with serious face): Watch your toungue or our fan will end faster then I planed.
Sasuke: ?! *Oppening, now I wil try to push my Sussano's blade to slash her !*
[Shot on Sussabo's blade barerly moves further cutting external layer of skin on her palm]
Kaguya(without even taking look at Sasuke): ?! I thought you could be more wise Indra
[Kaguya's eyes meet with Sasuke's own with great determination]
PAGE THREE
[Kaguya is shown being moved to right side by Sussano's blade but it can not cut through her]Kaguya: *This look... that face*
[Flashback of Hamura with deadly expression pointing his left palm with crescent moon mark at her]
Kaguya(getting angry): *You never know when to give up Hamura, my son, hmpf* Time to end it !
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Kaguya extend her free right arm with opened palm aiming at Sussano
[Kaguya pushes away Sussano's blade with her busy left hand ]
[Kaguya takes Gentle fist battle stance as veins bulge around her eyes being sign of Byakugan]
Naruto: Sasuke, get away from her !(moves a bit forward)
Sasuke: *She couldn't break Sussa.?!*
PAGE FOUR
[Kaguya strikes Sussano many times over and over as in some loop with only her stances changing][Kaguya stops striking Sussano with her hand barerly extended as 256 white dots on Sussano glow]
[Cracks spread around entire Sussano form as Sasuke watches with horrified face while Kaguya keep smilling]
[Sussano breaks apart in dissolving chakra pieces as Sasuke try to jump away from her]
Naruto: Sasuke ! (charges at full speed at Kaguya behind her at her back)
Sasuke: ?! *SO fast !*
[Kaguya's hair are shown streeched a lot while being enveloped around him keeping him in air]
Kaguya(calm down): Where did you think you were going ? (tighten her grip of her hairs)
[Kaguya is shown calm as Naruto is shown enclosing towards her from behind her]
Kaguya: Do you want really so badly to die too, Ashura ?
PAGE FIVE
[Naruto stops suddenly as he freezes in air]Naruto(schocked): ?! (shaking a bit)
[Sasuke keep looking on as Kaguya closes her eyes just for moment]
Sasuke: ?! *Now is my chance* Chidori Nagashi !
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's left hand glow as black lightining strucks Kaguya going through her hair]
Kaguya(open her eyes instantly): ?!
Sasuke: Naruto, now !
Naruto: Yosh ! *That is Sasuke I known, just one moment of guard down and he can use it, great work !*
[Naruto shoot off one giant chakra arm hitting Kaguya]
PAGE SIX
[Before Kaguya get smashed by Chakra arm and pushed in lava Kaguya widden her third eye freezing Naruto][In two seconds before she get dipped into lava pool she points at Sasuke with her three fingers of right hand]
Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly Sasuke feel immense pain going up around his left eye as he keep falling down in slow motion]
Sasuke: ARGH ! *Clutches his closed left eye in pain*
[Lava's surface get disrupted then splash a bit as it wears off signaling Kaguya just get dipped into it.]
[Sasuke land suddenly at Naruto's turth seeking ball flattened to platform shape.]
[Naruto is shown breathing with relief as Naruto's clone is shown flying away in tower's direction in background.]
[Naruto flies next to Sasuke who still keep his eye in pain]
PAGE SEVEN
Naruto: ?![Surface of lava under them begin to boil violently]
Sasuke: ?!
Naruto: Just Hurry up and do it !
[Sasuke stick his opened palm of left arm with Naruto's right palm as their marks connect to each other]
Nauto/Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly They feel burst of each other power going through their bodies. It feels as being struck by lightining]
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's hand and Sun on Naruto's hand keep glowing as they pull their hands back]
[Suddenly pillars of the lava shoot off around them enclosing them in shape of prison]
Kaguya: My turn, prepare yourseleves Ashura, Indra!
PAGE EIGHT
[Suddenly Intensive stream of lava erupts from lava pool filling all space around earlier formed pillars of lava][Heat of air increases terrible in just mere seconds as lava blows into air melting ground around]
[Lava fall down melting a part of ceiling as it comes in contact with it due to heat of lava.]
[Lava fully sink back into lava pool reforming it as surface of lava slowly calm down after some splashing]
[Sasuke within Perfect Sussano even bigger with Naruto within Ashura's avatar floating next to him.]
Naruto: Great timming, Sasuke !
Sasuke: nicely done, Naruto
[Kaguya emerges from lava pool flying up as she notices them within their chakra avatars about same size]
Kaguya: ?! How ? *Indra shouldn't be able to use Sussano after my attack... and Ashura should be limited a bit too... Could it be work of my son...*
PAGE NINE
[Armor of Perfect Sussano and Armor of Ashura's avatar melt a bit as steam still come from some parts]Naruto(smiles): The Old Man Hagoromo, he made us even resistant to your power
Sasuke: hmpf, Naruto is right. It seems you are indeed the stronger one but Hagoromo was much more skilled then you, he was true genious and considering your expression he had to be close to you at some point in power
Kaguya(enraged): ?! *so they realized it already...*
Kaguya(calm down but still serious): I will tell you before I end your lives, you deserve it. It is true that Once Hagoromo was threat even to me.. it was when he became Ten tails host.
[Flashback of Kaguya recalling past in her mind]
Prime Hagoromo(sad): Mother, Hamura died in fight against Ten tails is there any way to bring him back
Kaguya(with obsessed look): There is no point even if there is way
PAGE TEN
Prime Hagoromo(schocked): Why do you think like that ? If you helped us then Hamura would be along with us !Kaguya: Let me explain to you, my dear son(smirks). Your fight against Ten tails was mere test to check if you are worthy to help me in my goal.
Prime Hagoromo: You can not be serious, Mother is that so joke... Hamura was very strong and has crystal heart ?!(get interrupted)
Kaguya: this is why.(slowing down) This is why he had to be killed anyway at some point. Hamura put too much faith in filthy humans who destroy this beautifull planet which is my nursery.
Prime Hagoromo(enraged and sad): Mother..., Did you mean you wanted to kill Hamura yourself if he didn't die ?!
PAGE ELEVEN
Kaguya: I wouldn't have any other choice anyway. Besides do not worry, Hagi. His chakra would be absorbed by me as everyone of this planet so there would be no waste ?!(get hit)[Kaguya is shown landing on her ass as Hagoromo with anger in his eyes is shown with staff extended in her direction]
Hagoromo: I will stop you at any cost !
Kaguya: You the only my son, in who I trusted that you would follow me... If you insist on stopping me then I have to kill you (open her all eyes along with Third eye glowing violently)
Hagoromo: I have never believed that I will be the one to kill you mother, but I will save this world from your madness !
[Flashback breaks as kaguya stop recalling her flashback]
PAGE TWELVE
Kaguya(getting mad): You won't stop me this time, Hagoromo !Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (take battle stance within their chakra avatars)
[Kaguya burst huge chakra which glow violently. Air condense and heat in air rise instantly]
Naruto: *Shit, It becomes to hard to breath... and my chakra avatar...*?!
Sasuke: *Shit, This heat so incredible that even my Sussano...* ?!
[Both Ashura's avatar and Sussano keep melting. Naruto and Sasuke pressure to maintain]
[Slowly huge amount expelled by Kaguya recedes back in her body as she eyes them]
PAGE THIRTEEN
Kaguya(widden her third eye): Ashura, Indra prepare for your end.[Suddenly Black flames violently waving appear on Sussano and Ashura's avatar]
Sasuke(smirks): This time you chose wrong (focus his left eye at flame on Sussano)
[Black Flame emitting incredible heat keep burning through Sussano.
[Sasuke struggle to control it as flames do not respond to his control/power]
[Naruto brings Truth seeking balls in black flames as they burn through his avatar]
Kaguya(eyes both of them): It is futile, Indra and Ashura.
[Sasuke creates his own black flames to overpower or push Kaguya's black flames]
PAGE FOURTEEN
Kaguya(shake her head): It won't work. My black flames are original flames summoned from hell itself while your is just mere replica of original.[Truth seeking balls keep diminishing black flames upon contact]
[Getting weaker black flames burn almost completly inside Sussano and chakra avatar]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (cancel their chakra avatar and Sussano instantly)
Kaguya: Now (send incredible gravity push at them)
[Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke are hit by push force as they send flying into lava]
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Naruto freeze himself upon contact with lava same with Sasuke landing on Goudama][They fly up to get away from lava as Kaguya appear between them. Hands ignited by incredible heat and steaming a lot]
Kaguya(smirks): You are done
[Kaguya punches and kicks them as their skin get burnt each time due to heat filled strikes]
Naruto/Sasuke: ARGH ?! (cover themselves with hands)
[Kaguya finishes deadly assault striking Naruto at chest with her nails piercing in flesh]
[Kaguya's POV Nails hitting chakra release point inside Naruto near heart]
PAGE SIXTEEN
Naruto: ARGH (coughs blood)
Sasuke: Naruto ! (widden his Nine tomoe Rinnegan eye) (extends hand in Kaguya direction)
[Kaguya almost strikes Naruto's right arm but suddenly she get hit by powerfull push force]
Sasuke: Shinra Tensei !
[Kaguya get send flying fast as she stops upon contact with lava]
[Naruto begin to fall down limbly as he closes his eyes slowly]
Kaguya: I thought I taught you to wait for your turn , Indra... Now you will pay dearly
Sasuke: *I have to shift both of us fast to somewhere else !* hold on Naruto !
[Sasuke catches Naruto with Sussano hand then spot Kaguya almost in front of him]
Sasuke: *I won't do it in time ?!*
[Kaguya thrust her hand with sharp nails into Sasuke chest as he widden his eyes]
[Sasuke get pierced a on his left arm while Naruto get pierced on his right arm protecting Sasuke]
[Just before Kaguya would finish them Naruto and Sasuke suddenly disappear]
[Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke appear on ground lying struggling to move. Their hands with marks connected as glow from Sasuke's let eye goes away]
Kakashi: Naruto/Sasuke ?!
Sakura: Sasuke-kun, Naruto. Hold on I will heal you
Kaguya: I don't think so (emerges in front of them)
[ Kakashi and Sakura sweat badly as they take few steps back]
Kaguya: Ashura/ Indra, I will let you live if you join me. Your friends too
Naruto/Sasuke: (in pain but slowly loosing hope) ... *Could it work ?*
Kaguya: It is the end
??????: I never let it happen, Mother
[Mysterious man land in front of Sasuke and Naruto. The man who wears a light, full-length haori with a high collar and dark pants. He has his sword in its sheath strapped to his left hip and strange looking staff in other hand]
Side text: Finally mysterious man make appearance ? Having connection with Kaguya and yet vow to stop her... who is he and could he succed ?![/B]
END
682 - Hamura Ootsutsuki
Naruto: ARGH (coughs blood)
Sasuke: Naruto ! (widden his Nine tomoe Rinnegan eye) (extends hand in Kaguya direction)
[Kaguya almost strikes Naruto's right arm but suddenly she get hit by powerfull push force]
Sasuke: Shinra Tensei !
[Kaguya get send flying fast as she stops upon contact with lava]
[Naruto begin to fall down limbly as he closes his eyes slowly]
Kaguya: I thought I taught you to wait for your turn , Indra... Now you will pay dearly
PAGE SEVENTEEN
[Kaguya flies fast at falling down Naruto and Sasuke]Sasuke: *I have to shift both of us fast to somewhere else !* hold on Naruto !
[Sasuke catches Naruto with Sussano hand then spot Kaguya almost in front of him]
Sasuke: *I won't do it in time ?!*
[Kaguya thrust her hand with sharp nails into Sasuke chest as he widden his eyes]
[Sasuke get pierced a on his left arm while Naruto get pierced on his right arm protecting Sasuke]
[Just before Kaguya would finish them Naruto and Sasuke suddenly disappear]
PAGE EIGHTTEEN
[Scene shifts to Kakashi and Sakura shocked as Naruto's clone burst into smoke][Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke appear on ground lying struggling to move. Their hands with marks connected as glow from Sasuke's let eye goes away]
Kakashi: Naruto/Sasuke ?!
Sakura: Sasuke-kun, Naruto. Hold on I will heal you
Kaguya: I don't think so (emerges in front of them)
[ Kakashi and Sakura sweat badly as they take few steps back]
Kaguya: Ashura/ Indra, I will let you live if you join me. Your friends too
Naruto/Sasuke: (in pain but slowly loosing hope) ... *Could it work ?*
Kaguya: It is the end
??????: I never let it happen, Mother
[Mysterious man land in front of Sasuke and Naruto. The man who wears a light, full-length haori with a high collar and dark pants. He has his sword in its sheath strapped to his left hip and strange looking staff in other hand]
Side text: Finally mysterious man make appearance ? Having connection with Kaguya and yet vow to stop her... who is he and could he succed ?![/B]
END
682 - Hamura Ootsutsuki
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