[Raiton] Lightning training With Hard

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★ Raijin notice this technique might not be easy.
After getting some encouragement from his senpai Akimichi, He then takes a Ninja like stance and focus his chakra inside his mouth.

★ He increases his chakra frequency and vibration in this mouth to create lightning.


★ Finally after achieving this process, Raijin then moulds and manipulate his chakra nature into a small spear-like structure.

★ After Raijin maintains some calmness while doing this, Raijin eventually fires the projectile of lightning spear-like form from his mouth which pierces directly into tree.

★ Raijin felt relief why doing this and again turn back at this senpai for approvement.
Senpai what do you think??
 

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I smile upon seeing my student release his very first lightning technique.

Very good! You've learned... "(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique"


(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.



Now, judging from what you just experienced. What can you tell me about the technique itself? What are some advantages you can think of, as well as possible weaknesses? Think outside of the box if you can, I'd love to hear some creative things!
 

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Okay Senpai.

Advantages.
Advantages of lightning release are;
1. Lightning Release is basically good against earth users considering Earth, is a very good conductor of lightning.
2. Lightning release is also very good for short range battles against opponents.
3. When a target is suddenly struck with lightning, the target at that moments become paralyzes or numb. The muscles become stiff which'll unable the target move.
4. Lightning can also be fused with weapons against opponent for devastating effect.

Disadvantages;
Disadvantages are;
1. Lightning release seemingly becomes useless against Wind users due to the fact lightning can't conduct wind. Which means even S-rank lightning jutsu could be countered by an A-rank wind jutsu.
2. Also when trying to perform lightning release, an individual should not be in anyway distracted cause the technique might backfire.
3. Lightning is also very bad for long range battles.
 
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1. Lightning Release is basically good against earth users considering Earth, is a very good conductor of lightning.
In our RP, lightning does not necessarily work as a conductor to earth. There are some techniques out there that allow you to release lightning and conduct it into the ground. However normally, when Lightning and Earth face each other, if the technique is focused and condensed, the earth will crumble or simply turn to dust depending on the scale of the technique. If the lightning is unfocused, it will spread throughout the technique and effectively cancel out the opponent's earth chakra, allowing you to neutralize the earth technique. This would follow the elemental weaknesses and strengths; A ranked Lightning can both cancel or destroy up to S ranked Earth, within reason as I mentioned before. You cant use that D ranked bolt of lightning to take out a complete house worth of C ranked Earth, you will only be able to destroy a part of it.
2. Lightning release is also very good for short range battles against opponents.
What ways can you think of that would be very good for short range battles? Act as if I have no experience, I want to know every little detail that you can think of. And by that I mean, assume I don't know the logical answer.
3. When a target is suddenly struck with lightning, the target at that moments become paralyzes or numb. The muscles become stiff which'll unable the target move.
Very good here.
4. Lightning can also be fused with weapons against opponent for devastating effect.
Again, assume I don't know the answer. Which devastating effects could you create with the weapon? What might be other uses that I haven't already pointed out?

1. Lightning release seemingly becomes useless against Wind users due to the fact lightning can't conduct wind. Which means even S-rank lightning jutsu could be countered by an A-rank wind jutsu.
When I said disadvantages or weaknesses I meant to that of the technique you just performed. What weakness do you see in using this specific technique in battle?
2. Also when trying to perform lightning release, an individual should not be in anyway distracted cause the technique might backfire.
In which ways do you think the technique could backfire?
3. Lightning is also very bad for long range battles.
What are some points that would make you believe so?

As for some of the advantages of this technique; Taking into consideration it's rank and nature, it is a very positive note that this technique is able to release projectile-type attacks up to medium range distance. (9 meters) Most low ranking techniques will only go up to Short range, at least in D ranks. Another good note is that you can either release a single projectile or split it up and release several smaller ones. Although weakened in the process, it will allow you to attack multiple targets with a single technique.
 

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Lel I was just banned for one day.. And why do you keep on calling me Rollance?
Its impossible for me to know how long your ban was going to be. And Im sorry it was an honest mistake. While breifly looking at your name I missread it.

Please reply tonthe previous training post so that we may continue.
 

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What ways can you think of that would be very good for short range battles? Act as if I have no experience, I want to know every little detail that you can think of. And by that I mean, assume I don't know the logical answer.
• Example 1; Lightning release (Which you taught me) is very good in short range battles considering it's almost impossible to dodge or manuveur especially point blank range.

• Example 2; Lightning doesn't expand instead it moves in a Zig-Zag
way. Unlike Fire release or Wind release that actually expand. So in long range battle it wouldn't do much.

Again, assume I don't know the answer. Which devastating effects could you create with the weapon? What might be other uses that I haven't already pointed out?
• Concerning this, Lightning release could also be combine with a sword which could cut almost anything with devastating effect.

Sasuke Uchiha was shown to be able to do this.

When I said disadvantages or weaknesses I meant to that of the technique you just performed. What weakness do you see in using this specific technique in battle?
Firstly I think it takes a lot of chakra and concentration to achieve that jutsu.
Secondly since it still D-rank, against stronger foes it becomes useless..

In which ways do you think the technique could backfire?
• Like I said, to achieve that jutsu you taught me, it takes absolute concentration and moulding of chakra to achieve it. Any external disturbance could stop it from actually working.
 
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I'm sorry rollace but I will have to drop our training. I cant have someone that is continously disobaying the rules and getting banned in return. It was a pleasure teaching you, even if it was for only a little while.
 

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Alright, from what I can see you just did the very first technique of Lightning release.


Dean walks towards the training field, where a young man waits for his arrival. He had to help this student complete his Lightning training, a fierce element that is quite difficult to master. Dean however, had been through the process of training many students in the art of Lightning. With his Nekura cloak on, Dean quickly got to his destination.

"Hello there, I am Dean Winchester, and I will be finishing off your Lightning training. It seems you have juts learned the first Lightning technique, here you go. Oh and by the way, what is your name?"

Dean throws a scroll towards his student, who would be a bit bewildered at the sudden scroll. The scroll, however, contained the technique he had just learned with his previous teacher, Alexander. (Throughout the training session, I will be giving you scrolls, but it is just my way of explaining why I post the technique)


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.



"Now, since we are basically in the beginning of your training, I will tell you how my method goes. I will explain the technique to you and then I want you to perform the technique against my clone, give me at least two advantages and disadvantages, and also how you would use it in battle. Now, let us begin!

The first technique I will be teaching you is simple in nature. It starts off by manipulating your Lightning based chakra and concentrating it to your dominant hand. You will then slam said hand onto the ground before you, and release a surge of Lightning across the ground towards the opponent's feet. This would obviously shock the opponent, and allow for some combinations. Use it on my clone."


Dean creates a clone that runs towards his student.
 

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Amon instinctively watch every movement of his new sensei who was walking towards him. He felt quite cautious simply because he new nothing about him, but was excited to continuing his lightning training.
Suddenly, this Mysterious Sensei introduced himself as "Dean Winchester" and later requested for his name.
Amon hestitated for a moment, and subsequently replied,

"I'm Amon of Kirigakure. I have 99 goals, and killing a certain Shinobi is one of them."


After proclaming his name, Amon suddenly received a scroll from his sensei Dean which made him quite puzzled. Nevertheless, Dean explained what the Scroll contained completely, and requested Amon to perform a technique against his clone.


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.



Now Amon listen carefully and immediately Manipulate his lightning chakra just as he saw Dean's clone coming towards him. He swifly concentrate his Lightning chakra towards his Right hand, and slam unto the ground below him. He then released a surge of lightning on the earth crust towards Dean's clone precisely the feet, which prominently shocked his clone.

After performing this technique, Amon gracefully stood upright with smirk behind his mask and enumerate on the Advantages, Disadvantages and how it would be used on Battles.

Advantages.
This technique is simple and effective to perform, and could easily take the opponent my surprised especially against Taijutsu specialist which would momentarily stunned this opponent.

Disadvantages.
Unfortunately, this technique can't be used at Long range battles and could be easily countered by jumping projectly upwards. Also since this technique is D-Rank, it won't do much against tough foes who could easily resist it's after effect.

Finally, this technique can be used in battle offensively against charging opponents, especially against Taijutsu users. This can be done by simply manipulating Lightning Chakra and slamming it towards the ground. After performing this, a Taijutsu opponent seemingly gets stunned and loses their balance, which would open way for an attack.

"That's it Dean."
 

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Sorry for the late reply, was extremely busy these last few days.


Amon had no problem with the first technique and his analysis was well done too. Dean already saw that this student, although a bit weird with the mask and all, was going to be working hard. Without any qualms or problems, Dean flicked another scroll towards Amon.

"Well done, Amon. Also remember, if you lift your hands from the ground, the technique stops as it requires constant fueling of chakra. Other than that, here you go."


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.



"Okay, now the next one is another simple technique but very useful in the long run. The technique starts off by manipulating your Lightning based chakra as you move your dominant palm forwards. This allows you to release a wave of Lightning bolts towards the opponent, which would cause minor shocks and damage. Its true potential lies in the fact that it is so fast to perform, with a simple forward palm. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Amon.
 

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Yea, No problem!

Having completed the first technique effortlessly, Amon felt confidence and immediately tried the next technique.

"On to the next one"



Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra
and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge
of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet
to shock them.



Now again, Amon manipulates his lightning chakra cautiously, and channelled it towards his dominant palm (Which was his right palm). He swiftly moved it foward towards Dean's clone and release a series of lightning bolt which in accordance, causes Minor shock on his clone.

"So Sensei, How was that? And oh, here are the Advantages and disadvantages."


Advantages.
Well, this technique is less sophisticated considering it's easy to perform and when upon contact, it could easy disrupt an opponent movement.

Disadvantages.
Due to the fact this technique is at D-rank, an experience opponents could easily counter it and also could immediately resist the after effect even upon contact.
Finally this technique seemingly can be used in battle effortlessly which would take the target by surprise.
 

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The technique was done quite quickly, and with some ease too. Amon was becoming alright at manipulating his Lightning based chakra, and so Dean merely smiled at his progress. He still had a long way to go, but Lightning was overall a nice element to learn. Dean quickly the next scroll towards his student. They were moving on to C ranks of Lightning now.

"That's alright, here you go."


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.



"Alright, now the next technique starts off by forming the Tiger → Snake → Dog hand seals. After doing so, you will manipulate your Lightning based chakra, and create an electric current from your hand. This electric current can be controlled to avoid multiple obstacles, and hit multiple enemies, this means that one has to keep your control on said current. This means you won't be able to use other techniques when this one is in play, so use it wisely. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Amon.
 

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The technique was done quite quickly, and with some ease too. Amon was becoming alright at manipulating his Lightning based chakra, and so Dean merely smiled at his progress. He still had a long way to go, but Lightning was overall a nice element to learn. Dean quickly the next scroll towards his student. They were moving on to C ranks of Lightning now.

"That's alright, here you go."


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.



"Alright, now the next technique starts off by forming the Tiger → Snake → Dog hand seals. After doing so, you will manipulate your Lightning based chakra, and create an electric current from your hand. This electric current can be controlled to avoid multiple obstacles, and hit multiple enemies, this means that one has to keep your control on said current. This means you won't be able to use other techniques when this one is in play, so use it wisely. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Amon.

Amon felt relief after hearing he was about to achieve C-rank Although, he knew he still had a very long way to go. He grip on to the Next scroll Dean had thrown towards him and tried performing the jutsu.

"Come on"

Immediately Amon took a Ninja like stance and performs a group of hand seals. He swiftly manipulates his lightning chakra, creating a Lightning current in the process and unleash a wave of lightning bolts towards Dean's clone.


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a
wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.



Advantages:
Now, this technique can seemingly stunned opponents due to it's lightning bolts, especially against Taijustu opponents. Secondly, it can controlled to evade multiple obstacles and hit multiple opponents in the process.

Disadvantages:
Unfortunately, this jutsu requires absolute concentration, and also a user won't be able to use other techniques when using this one.
 

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Okay, my method is a bit different. I don't ask for advantages, disadvantages, or anything of the sorts as I don't believe an average technique has a clear cut advantage or disadvantage. Everything has its place. So instead of a template or anything like that we're going to discuss techniques. I simply ask you perform them in depth and then give me your thoughts on them without holding back any detail. Every technique has a place and use in the RP and I want you to approach it as such. Also, I want you to know that you can stop at any time to ask questions. The more you know the better prepared you will be to create custom techniques and use these techniques on your own reliably in a fight. Right, before we begin do you have any questions?
 

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Okay, my method is a bit different. I don't ask for advantages, disadvantages, or anything of the sorts as I don't believe an average technique has a clear cut advantage or disadvantage. Everything has its place. So instead of a template or anything like that we're going to discuss techniques. I simply ask you perform them in depth and then give me your thoughts on them without holding back any detail. Every technique has a place and use in the RP and I want you to approach it as such. Also, I want you to know that you can stop at any time to ask questions. The more you know the better prepared you will be to create custom techniques and use these techniques on your own reliably in a fight. Right, before we begin do you have any questions?
No questions Senpai.
 
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