[Adventure] Kaguya Otsutsuki the Rabbit goddess!

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[Size=+3]KAGUYA the rabbit goddess.[/size]



Okay I'll go straight to my Fanfic summary. I'm still new at this though so please pardon any mistakes.

This Fan-fic story is specifically about Kaguya Ōtsutsuki the Rabbit goddess.
She was a normal princess in an alternative universe before she came to Narutoverse.

Her Father (King Raijin Ōtsutsuki) was the King of the land.
She was the only child of her father. Her mother unfortunately had died after she was born.
But she wasn't born normal.
She was born with a special gift. (Byakugan)
It was a Doujutsu that was betowed unto her.


Legend as it, that it could be used for inter-dimensional travels. It could only be seen every one thousand years.
Her father treasured her like a rare diamond.

Due to this amazing ability of this doujutsu, Rival kingdoms unfortunately craved for this ability.
They tried to conquer her father's kingdom..
Here's the story;
Happy reading :whip:

Chapter One; Kaguya Ōtsutsuki
It was a sunny day Kaguya thought to herself.
She was a little bit cautious and worried due to the on going war that plague the land at that particular time.
She was alone in her room staring upon the celling pondering what was going on her father's meeting. (Her father King Raijin was called to a meeting)
She had an inevitable feeling something was about to happen.

A few moment latter her father swiftly came into her bedroom.
Kaguya could tell something was wrong by looking into her father lazy brown eyes.
King Raijin paused for a minute...
Then he told Kaguya it's time.
Kaguya was puzzled and couldn't comprehend what her father meant.

King Raijin then expenciate what he meant on "it's time."
He told her it's time for her to established her destiny.
He further said, Her eyes wasn't bestowed to her by mistake and she was meant for a greater cause.
Which could one day save the world.

Kaguya Ironically expected this to happen.
She simply said okay though she hesitated a little bit.
King Raijin was astonished considering she didn't contemplate but latter told her to get ready for an immense training the next day..


Kaguya woke up the next morning feeling a little bit flabbergasted. Considering she hadn't slept properly the night before.
She basically had one thing on her mind which was her training.
she got out of bed swiftly ate her food with cautious intent & got ready.
Her eyes was brightly pure white insomuch that her pupils were missing.

Her father King Raijin had intially told her, she'll undo her training in a land called TRUTH FALLS.

It was a day journey ride from her kingdom.
King Raijin warned her it was going to be a tetrous journey.
He also informed her she must go alone and she'll meet a man who'll be her tutor and master..
And she'll be tested intensively!


She got her supplies ready took a horse and begun for her journey at Mid-day.



Next week chapter title; JOURNEY TO TRUTH FALLS.
 
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Nice! Great for someone new.
Plot is great and creates enough anticipation for me to await your next Chapter!
You could make it somewhere in the fanfic Contest! Seriously keep going!

Corrections

"Her eyes wasn't bestowed unto by mistake"(Phrased slightly wrong)
"she was meant for a greater caused"(Cause not "Caused")
"Kaguya Ironically expected this to happened."(Happen not "Happened")
"King Raijin was astonish considering she didn't contemplated"(Astonished not "Astonish";Contemplate not "Contemplated"(May vary))
"Her eyes was brightly pure white"(Were not "Was")
"King Raijin warn her it was going to be a tetrous journey"(Warned not "Warn"... past tense not current/present command)
 

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Nice! Great for someone new.
Plot is great and creates enough anticipation for me to await your next Chapter!
You could make it somewhere in the fanfic Contest! Seriously keep going!

Corrections

"Her eyes wasn't bestowed unto by mistake"(Phrased slightly wrong)
"she was meant for a greater caused"(Cause not "Caused")
"Kaguya Ironically expected this to happened."(Happen not "Happened")
"King Raijin was astonish considering she didn't contemplated"(Astonished not "Astonish";Contemplate not "Contemplated"(May vary))
"Her eyes was brightly pure white"(Were not "Was")
"King Raijin warn her it was going to be a tetrous journey"(Warned not "Warn"... past tense not current/present command)
Thanks bro i'm gratefull.
Btw mistakes corrected.
 
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