Kishi ruined everything in the end?

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I think Kishimoto messed up a lil bit in the end..In my opinion Kaguya should have never appeared, I found it stupid..Madara would have been amazing as final villain...and the way he died has been pitiful. Think about it..he 's been overpowered by Kaguya's will and he's gone back just for dying..such a stupid death for a badass like him..
Moreover..lettin Minato have both his armed ripped off was quite an insult to him..the other 3 hokages were intact. Minato mentioned 2-3 times a special unseen jutsu..it'd been nice to see it, and it would have been nice if, for example, Hagoromo could restore his arms at least for givin a final hug to Naruto..It'd been a better farewell..
 

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Madara's downfall was Dues ex machina.
 

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Absolutely..but his downfall could have been much more epic...I dunno..defeated by Naruto nad Sasuke...or by the 4 Hokages all together..The way he died..i dunno..in the end noone defeated him..
 

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And even he made the ending obvious with revealing the Last movie sketches.
(The fact that Sasuke's Revoultion had failed,since Gaara is alive and his sketches are out.)
 

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Absolutely..but his downfall could have been much more epic...I dunno..defeated by Naruto nad Sasuke...or by the 4 Hokages all together..The way he died..i dunno..in the end noone defeated him..

Sasuke and Naruto being revived was also Dues ex machina. U_U
 

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I didn't expect much of it, I didn't like Kaguya, either, I'm pleased that she was quick defeated.

Current chapters of Naruto are above average, I will remember overall Naruto as above decent manga.
 

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Lol What's That :|

1) Dead Sasuke and Naruto revived with a power up.
2) BZ's betrayal.
Deus ex machina (Latin: [ˈdeus eks ˈmaː.kʰi.na]: /ˈdeɪ.əs ɛks ˈmɑːkiːnə/ or /ˈdiːəs ɛks ˈmækɨnə/;[1] plural: dei ex machina) is a plot device whereby a seemingly unsolvable problem is suddenly and abruptly resolved by the contrived and unexpected intervention of some new event, character, ability or object. Depending on how it is done, it can be intended to move the story forward when the writer has "painted himself into a corner" and sees no other way out, to surprise the audience, to bring the tale to a happy ending, or as a comedic device.

End Dues ex machina:
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I rest my case. :coffee:

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who is kaguya? That was Filler inside manga - Kishimoto.


Official scans of madara's defeat

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Kakashi losing the sharingan was also a big messed up. Also sasuke all of sudden acting like he's gonna kill the kages and naruto blah blah blah right after helping them was another messed up, the stupidest thing ever.
 

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Kishi have ruining this manga even before Madara downfall.
 

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Lol, why don't you guys just draw and write your own version of Naruto the way you want the story to happen....
 

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Kakashi losing the sharingan was also a big messed up. Also sasuke all of sudden acting like he's gonna kill the kages and naruto blah blah blah right after helping them was another messed up, the stupidest thing ever.

both things were quite invitable
if kakashi would have both ms even now, it would be a suicide
and sasuke's intention to kill the kages are plot for the NaruSaku fight
 

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Yeah I don't like the story anymore either.

It was ruined the moment Naruto and Sasuke came back to life with their new sage of six path freebie hand out power.
 

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Sasuke and Naruto being revived was also Dues ex machina. U_U

Deus ex Machina is a meaningless buzzword used by butthurt people who don't want to sound butthurt.

The whole concept of it fallacious.
 

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Lol What's That :|

By extension, the term means a plot device whereby a seemingly overwhelming problem is suddenly solved by means which are arbitrary, and do not follow from the logic of the story.
 

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Lol, why don't you guys just draw and write your own version of Naruto the way you want the story to happen....

Yeah I bet u would have been happy if Goku or Vegeta had their arm cut off before sayin goodbye to their son..or Frieza's body get overpowered by a ghost of the past...
 
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