Which is worse writing?

Worst writing

  • Kakashi having Perfect Susanoo

    Votes: 9 75.0%
  • Black Zetsu able to pierce triple rinnegan Madara's body

    Votes: 3 25.0%

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Joseph Gomes

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This one?

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Or this one?

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Tough choice, huh?
 

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Both > your writing, regardless.
 

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None - Kakashi had Obito's/The Sages chakra and Black Zetsu unexpectedely attacked Madara.It's not like he was face to face fighting him.

Susano'o is developed through power and emotion,hence Sasuke's Susano'o having developed each time his hatred increased during the Kage summit arc.

Kakashi had The Sage's power and Obito's + his emotions were higher than ever since his close friend died and he was in the most important battle in history trying to save the world and protect his students - High emotions + Power = Susano'o development.

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Bling Kai

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I'm going with the Black Zetsu one only because Kishi at least tried to explain Kakashi's PS.
 

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Both > your writing, regardless.

If you have to compare a supposed professional whose job is sololy writing with a random guy in the internet, I don't really think your point is valid.
 

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True that, the entire Kaguya arc was one of the worst piece of writing ever seen in my life

If that was some of the worst piece of writing you ever seen then you REALLY need to read more manga or comic books or books in general :|
 

Joseph Gomes

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If that was some of the worst piece of writing you ever seen then you REALLY need to read more manga or comic books or books in general :|

I exaggerated, but it was really terrible nevertheless. Like the entire protege arc in marvel was BS
 

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I knew Kakashi was gonna get both Sharingans and BZ was a plot twist .
 

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None - Kakashi had Obito's/The Sages chakra and Black Zetsu unexpectedely attacked Madara.It's not like he was face to face fighting him.

Susano'o is developed through power and emotion,hence Sasuke's Susano'o having developed each time his hatred increased during the Kage summit arc.

Kakashi had The Sage's power and Obito's + his emotions were higher than ever since his close friend died and he was in the most important battle in history trying to save the world and protect his students - High emotions + Power = Susano'o development.

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Lol, Naruto X Hunter soloed your thread.
 

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I exaggerated, but it was really terrible nevertheless. Like the entire protege arc in marvel was BS

Alright, I understand. It's you're opinion of course :) and boy, I have seen some terrible writing in comic books. Spider-Man: One More Day anyone?
 

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Neither actually. Madara's one was a plot twist albeit I pretty silly plot twist. Meanwhile Kakashi's one can be explained, although it makes the sage seem even less special by projecting his chakra.
 

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Just because you don't like it doesn't make it bad writing
 

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Kakashi having perfect susano'o, of course.
 
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