Naruto Shippuden: How you would've written it/Events you would've changed.

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From the beginning of Shippuden and then up to this point in the manga, what would you have done differently.

For me it'd be:

1. When Naruto came back after the time skip, he'd have taken more after Jiraiya: cool ass headband with horns, shaggy but longer blond hair, similar Jiraiya vest but orange. He'd have taken more after Jiraiya like Sasuke took after Orochimaru.

2. During the bell training have Naruto and Sakura defeat Kakashi in a more serious way to show that he'd improved and wasn't screwing around this whole time.

3. After timeskip have Naruto be able to form Rasengan with one hand without use of clones as Jiraiya would've trained him better in chakra control.

4. Given Naruto other techniques like the Fujin Techniques of Danzo and Oro's Wind Release: Great breakthrough (a more powerful version of it)

* would've left kazekage arc alone

5. Have Naruto be more on par with Sasuke during the Sai and Sasuke arc (but have Sasuke still win due to plot)

6. Would've had Naruto maybe team up with Fu (Jinchuriki) and end up crushing on her and almost dating her. But she would still get extracted due to plot. (Crushing on her would also piss off Sakura, which would be funny due to how she always gave him the cold shoulder)

7. Have Naruto automatically promoted to Chunnin due to saving Gaarra.

8. Have Sasuke wear more samurai like armor after learning the truth, but not exactly like Madara's, more like what a combo of what Third Hokage, Tobiama's headband and perfect Susanoo wears.

* wouldn't have changed Hidan and Kakazu arc

9. Have Naruto obsess over Sasuke less.

I'd go on but I'm too lazy...
 

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I would of made major changes starting on the Pain Arc.
>I would of had Naruto captured by the Akatsuki and then had the Kyuubi extracted
>Naruto survives the extraction and gets sent to Konoha
>Naruto then Masters Sage Mode, Uzumaki Fuinjutsu, and even FTG

I probably would like Naruto's character a lot more if he didn't rely on Bijuu powers so much.[SUB]
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I would of made major changes starting on the Pain Arc.
>I would of had Naruto captured by the Akatsuki and then had the Kyuubi extracted
>Naruto survives the extraction and gets sent to Konoha
>Naruto then Masters Sage Mode, Uzumaki Fuinjutsu, and even FTG

I probably would like Naruto's character a lot more if he didn't rely on Bijuu powers so much.[SUB]
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How would Naruto survive all alone and why would they let him live?
 

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I would of made major changes starting on the Pain Arc.
>I would of had Naruto captured by the Akatsuki and then had the Kyuubi extracted
>Naruto survives the extraction and gets sent to Konoha
>Naruto then Masters Sage Mode, Uzumaki Fuinjutsu, and even FTG

I probably would like Naruto's character a lot more if he didn't rely on Bijuu powers so much.[SUB]
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That would violate the Jinchuiki die if the TB is extracted rule.

OT: I would have spaced things out a bit more, broken this into multiple arcs rather then just consecutive big battles.

Also I would have made the Kaguya fight longer and developed her a bit more.
 
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I would of made major changes starting on the Pain Arc.
>I would of had Naruto captured by the Akatsuki and then had the Kyuubi extracted
>Naruto survives the extraction and gets sent to Konoha
>Naruto then Masters Sage Mode, Uzumaki Fuinjutsu, and even FTG

I probably would like Naruto's character a lot more if he didn't rely on Bijuu powers so much.[SUB]
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Agreed. Like when Kyuubi told Naruto he'd be nothing without his powers, I would've liked Naruto to say "**** you!" and prove him wrong by taking after his dad and learning more techniques. And be more... like a ninja.
 

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I would've liked it if Naruto wasn't such fodder throughout the entire Naruto series up to the pain arc. Would've liked it if he didn't get beaten up so easily and tossed around like garbage and shouting believe it like a psychologically unstable mentally challenged child.
Would've liked it if he brought Sasuke back.
 
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