[Predictions] 691 PREDICTION :Not strong enough

[Rize]

*madara stands alone in a white empty space with a dazed look on his face*

Madara: what is this? this isnt the afterlife again?... is it."

*A hand is shown grabbing madaras and madara looks down*

Izuna: Big Brother! *Izuna is a child again*

Madara: I see... this is a dream...

*Madara sighs and silently lets tears sall from his eyes whilst hugging his yonger brother*

Madara: Izuna... forgive me... its because i was not strong enough that you were killed.

*Izuna now an adult*

Izuna: Idiot... of course i forgive you... it was never your fault. but now is not the time to dwell on past events

Youre not dreaming Madara youre in between this life and the next...

Madara: ...

Izuna: I was angry and bitter at my own demise... but now i see that i should have encouraged you to listen to hashirama rather than deny peace because of my selfish need for revenge

Madara: Perhaps we both should have encouraged me... *He smiles*


Izuna: anyways there is someone you must speak with.

*Madara turns around.*

Madara: Obito... is that you? and... you must be Rin...

Obito: madara... id be lying to myself if i said i dont hate you. and we have almost nothing in common but... You and i both know you saw what happened out there with Kaguya

Madara:...

Obito: You have to set things RIGHT!

*Obitos voice echoes through the area*

Madara: O-

*Madara is hit in the back of the head and moans in pain*

Obito: Kushina!

Kushina: So YOURE the reason i and my husband had to die?!

*Kushina whacks madara in the face with a frying pan*

Izuna: HAHAHAHAHA!!!

Madara: Shut up!

Rin: Obito why did you run off here?


Rin: Kushina

Kushina: Rin, OBito?


Obito: SHUT UP!


*Silence*


Obito: Kushina theres something you must know...

Kushina: Youre the one who attacked the village 15 years ago

Obito: Im- WHAT? how could you know that!?

Kushina: youre the only uchiha who has that dorky haircut...

obito: i see...



Madara: if i may interupt... Obito i know thst i have to make things right which i why i intend to use it... i owe naruto, sasuke and the others that much at least for showing me the truth and freeing me from that prison


Kushina:... Wow the hidden leaf had you pegged wrong

Madara:?

Kushina: nothing JUST GO AND CHEER MY SON UP!


Madara: yes....

Kushina: YES WHAT?

Madara: Im not saying it...

Kushina: it was worth a shot
*Madara opens his eyes*


Hashirama naruto and sasuke are above him with sasuke holding a sword at his throat and naruto grabbing his arma


Madara: this is rather nostalgic.

Naruto and sasuke look down

Madara: Naruto, sasuke. thanks you

Madara looks at naruto

Madara: Youre mother is insane

Naruto: i i guess?


Madara: anyways its sudden but im going to use the rinne rebirth jutsu to bring everyone bacl


EDITORS NOTE: MADARA TRYS TO REDEEM HIMSELF

 

[Dãrth1]

No, just no .

 

[Rize]

No, just no .

just a bit. that was pretty fast read

 

[Gokuy]

No, just no .

You read all that that the same time (11:58) the OP posted his thread. Seems legit.

 

[Dãrth1]

just a bit. that was pretty fast read

You read all that that the same time (11:58) the OP posted his thread. Seems legit.

I read a page per 30 seconds
But really no just no

 

[Joker]

Imma have to say no, you tried, but no.

 

[Rize]

I read a page per 30 seconds
But really no just no

30 per second?

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[Dãrth1]

30 per second?

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U mad bro?
I read fast
Any problem?

 

[Rize]

Imma have to say no, you tried, but no.

i didnt base this off my personal feeling i just made this based on how kishi is writng right now hes pulling out all the stops pretty much

 

[Rize]

U mad bro?
I read fast
Any problem?

U Fockin wat M8?

 

[Dãrth1]

U Fockin wat M8?

I got a sharingan
When I read the time pass slowler so I can read faster

 

[Rize]

I got a sharingan
When I read the time pass slowler so I can read faster

ill bash ye ****in ead en

 

[Ricardo]

God, no! I would just give up on myself if something like that would happen. :|

 

[Dãrth1]

ill bash ye ****in ead en

i em gon na amaterazu yur fase

 

[Rize]

God, no! I would just give up on myself if something like that would happen. :|

ive already explained why i wrote it this wat the only part i agree on is madara turning good

 

[Joker]

i didnt base this off my personal feeling i just made this based on how kishi is writng right now hes pulling out all the stops pretty much

The prediction itself is bad, whether you think it'll happen or not. It's a no for me.

 

[Sasori]

No I disagree with most of that, I understand you're trying to write like Kishi but you're doing it wrong.

 

[Rize]

The prediction itself is bad, whether you think it'll happen or not. It's a no for me.

thats your opinion not a fact but youre entitled to it

 

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[Dãrth1]

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The Madara one is better