You and I

Goetia

Legendary Shinobi 🐸
Supreme
Joined
Mar 12, 2014
Messages
34,484
Reaction score
1,419
You and I

Some days I feel worlds away from you,
others I feel too close for comfort,
but one thing I know for sure, is that my love for you is true,
and I’ll give you my all when you need company, love, or when you’re hurt.

On the days where all the cards in my hand are fold,
you give me your love and heart, always and without fail,
all this makes me love you more and more, until it is something the world can no longer hold,
you’re so full of energy and life, that in your presence, in comparison I begin to pale.

Without you in my life, I have no idea who I’d be, where I’d be,
the one that keeps me going, you’re the light that keeps my world alive,
you’re what unlocks the doorway to my heart, the key,
and until the day where death do us part, down the road called life, will I continue to drive.
 

Jin

Legendary Shinobi 🐸
Supreme
Joined
Dec 22, 2012
Messages
21,037
Reaction score
1,304
Such a good poem ^_^ .
 

Aomine Daiki

Sannin of the Scrolls 📜
Elite
Joined
Feb 14, 2011
Messages
7,307
Reaction score
177
that was great! keep it up.

man i wish i had the talent to write poems
 

Legend Slayer

Jōnin Strategist 🧠
Regular
Joined
Aug 8, 2014
Messages
1,448
Reaction score
118
That was good ^_^ were you thinking about someone when you wrote it?
 

Goetia

Legendary Shinobi 🐸
Supreme
Joined
Mar 12, 2014
Messages
34,484
Reaction score
1,419
ive got nothing ´, thats the problem. I have no idea were to start o_O

I started writing poetry when someone else started writing to me. We always exchanged poetry, and I improved with each new one I wrote. The trick is knowing what you're going to be writing about.
 
Top