Okay. I said you were improving and you are, so feel good about that, but this is what you need to do.
Don't just shove random battle clips (with no editing no less. The Sasuke/Bee fight was basically just that fight) with no meaning to the lyrics into a video. Look at the following videos. Notice the time too. You don't have to make a full length 3-4 minute video. Don't fill in clips to get time, but most importantly, make the clips you do place important. This videos showcase that.
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And then there are AU/Story-esque videos where the song is important, but sort of in the background as a story is being told. Usually an original story. Now, your type don't seem to be these, but just showing a different approach.
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No matter, the scenes must be important and not thrown together. You got some really good stuff, but the Hidan/Asuma and Kakashi/Obito and Sasuke/Bee fighting didn't fit at all. I don't know how to explain it any more clear. It's right there. Look at the Naruto (Right Here) video and look at yours. Night and day. One is in sync with the lyrics and one is a general amv that gives amvs the bad rep they have, but yours has tons of little hints of potential especially with the opening and ending. Your are evolving and that's awesome. Feel extremely proud no matter my advice.
