What would be your 3 improvements to the Story Of 'Naruto'

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What 3 things would you've liked Kishi to change/include in the Story to make it more Expansive or Better for you

Here's mine:

1. Development (Explanation & History) of Other Clans in the series other than Uchiha, Senju and Uzumaki. For example; Sarutobi, Hyuuga, Hozuki, Inuzuka, Kaguya, Nara etc. This Would've developed the more of the side characters and given them more importance to the plot also possibly developed their abilities.

2. History of the other Shinobi Villages other than Konoha. Kishi did start to develop Sunagakure in Part 1 but didn't go in depth. Other Villages get almost no development. This would've helped build up the NV, introduce new locations and new mysteries and other issues happening in the shinobi world.

3. Development of Individual Character goals - In this series, the few characters that do have goals either want to become hokage, peace or want a lover. Kishi could've developed Konoha 11 better by giving them individual goals to achieve by the end of series (similar to the Strawhats in One Piece). e.g. Rock lee wanted to become one of the world's best taijutsu users but Kishi hasn't done anything to push Lee towards this goal in shippuden.


If you're one of those people who think that the story is Perfect how it is, then feel free to say so.
 
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yours are mine :|
 

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It would've just become unnecessarily long if they went into developing entire arcs about other clans/nations

the story is called Naruto because it essential revolves around his life.

For all of my ideas about making the story better I have like arguments to go against myself...for example I think Sasuke should've came back to the good side after finding out about Itachi, but it made it so much more epic to have team 7 reunite during the final epic showdown with the Juubi
 

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Kill Kaguya, Kill Naruto, and make Tobirama MC.
 

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Yup yours are nearly perfect. All I really cared about was side characters getting some development(mostly k11). I feel that he wasted way too much potential on them.
 

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It would've just become unnecessarily long if they went into developing entire arcs about other clans/nations

the story is called Naruto because it essential revolves around his life.

I really don't know what you're saying...
 

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Those points are OK but earlier Kishi was into just Naruto, Hokage and Konoha...
It's later in the Shippuden that he expanded his plot to the whole of NV...
 

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I understand the Manga is Naruto, but the Anime should have did better.
 

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Those points are OK but earlier Kishi was into just Naruto, Hokage and Konoha...
It's later in the Shippuden that he expanded his plot to the whole of NV...

That's a big **** up. Why would you leave the development of 3 other nations till the end of the story?
 

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Only 1: When making complex villains that have good reasons and an understandable purpose to do what they do and have been doing it for most their lives, it doesn't make sense that they would change sides because of the words of a 16 year old
 

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OP basically said everything I wanted to say lol, and I strongly agree with the development with the k11
 

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That's a big **** up. Why would you leave the development of 3 other nations till the end of the story?

Well, that's the fault... Either he had done it from the start or never did it...
 

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Along the lines of yours. Though the Uzumaki clan as 0 development, so fail there.
 

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Same of yours
Except for the two
Trade the 2 for More Itachi
 

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All the points you stated are the ones I would change too. Especially 3. The lack of the third is one of the biggest problems I have with Naruto.
 

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1. Introduction to Tailed Beast/Jinchuuriki in Part 1
No more of Kishi asking for approval for what he wants in his story
2. Obito's parental issue
3. Sakura's development aka having her be a more likable character
4. More of Team Kurenai
5. Naruto having a vast amount of techniques
6. More Hyuuga history


Plus, everything you mentioned lol

Edit: I'm just listing whatever

Edit again: More of Konohamaru and Asuma's baby, Sasori's death should of been different but still by Sakura and Chiyo
 
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More fights with TenTen, Shino, Rock Lee, Hinata, etc.
More eechi elements
 
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