My First Attempt at a Signature .

[Kushina Chan]

hello guys this is my first attempt at signature. i want comments on it. tell the ratings if you can
Here is it :

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please dont try to be harsh at me.

 

[Sasori]

Looks nice, Idk if its the right size though

 

[Fex]

It is better than me making signature.

 

[Trúth]

Looks good .

 

[Aoihime]

Looks good, the only advice I can give you is to find better renders:3

 

[Raphael sannin]

Lovely!!!well done!!!

 

[Phobos]

You want comments but don't want them to harsh? .-.

It's ok for first try.
It's way too chaotic, too many things with no depth (try bluring something behind the render).
Render is not blended at all (c4d also), you need to get rid of the white around it: select the render, contract selection 1px, invert selection and delete the white.
Left part is way too saturated, much more than the render which is not good.

Could help you a bit more but I don't know which program are you using.

 

[dark legion]

it's way too good for the first time ... but you need practice ... with cutting effect

 

[Cresee]

It's awesome =D Nice work

 

[Kyoto Samurai]

You want comments but don't want them to harsh? .-.

It's ok for first try.
It's way too chaotic, too many things with no depth (try bluring something behind the render).
Render is not blended at all (c4d also), you need to get rid of the white around it: select the render, contract selection 1px, invert selection and delete the white.
Left part is way too saturated, much more than the render which is not good.

Could help you a bit more but I don't know which program are you using.

agree with phobos