The "Family" 3

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Luna kept quiet and Yuki nodded her head. Following the doctor outside she looked at him.

"what is wrong?"
The Doctor closes the door behind them*

Doctor : Well... your son took a critical hit in the back of his head from which it seems was a metal pipe, we checked his brain and everything and it seems he is fine but however there might be some after effects when he wake up... he was suffering a sever blood loss from the head when he reached us and his upper body was severely damaged but nothing to worry about but your son need to take some good rest for a week or two.
 

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"No I didnt mean for that to sound like I care less of my children. I care for my children alot. The only thing is, is the person who is holding the ceremony made be mad. I thank you for telling me of my child's condition."
 

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"Luna I am not going to ask about why you were out so late nor near but I will say I don't want to lose any of you."

Yuki sat there and sighed. She decided to call later.
 

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"Yes she is, minor injuries."

Luna kept quiet and felt bad that near got seriously hurt.
Near : good to hear then.... *near lays his head on the bed and fell a sleep again*

Doctor : even when he is unconscious it seems he is still worried about you to the point that he forced himself to wake up and now that he knows that you are alright he can now rest easily.... *the doctor smiles as he checks on near again*, well he is sleeping I think he should stay the night here.
 

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Daybreak wakes back up, hearing the familiar voices in the room Near him. (see what I did there?) Daybreak stands back up. The bullet in his leg was finnally taken out , and he could finnally walk properly. He was going to check himself out, but preferred not to when he heard Ms. Yuki and Luna's voices.

He walked towards the room, and saw the mother and daughter close the door. "What are the both of you doing back in the hospital ? Did something happen? Where is Near ?



(Something I believe I have to say, about both of you, is you need to stop using other characters to vouch for your primary ones.

Ex: The doctor defended near, in a full body paragraph. Not only would a doctor not know 100% of what happened, they would never speak of their patients in such a manner.

Ex2: Mizuki asked about the ceremony before anything else, therefore it is safe for me to assume that you were using her to get information for everyone else.

Ex3: Mizuki also, waay back in the past, convinced Shiina to hear Yuki/Raven out.

Ex4: Watari happened to be able to give Near the information he wanted just by being a child, even though Kagari put him through pain and fear powerful enough to make any human being squeal.

This is considered Meta-gaming, and it makes an uncomfortable Rp.)
 

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Luna sighed and got up off the bed.

Luna: can we go home then?

"sure, we will be back tomorrow."
(The second day)

*after near spending the entire night sleeping in the hospital he slowly wakes at 9:30AM in the morning*

Near : I feel a lot better now.... *near says to himself*

( and shadow don't tell me how to RP I been doing this for a long time now -.- the doctor knows what happens because Yarai told him what happens. )
 

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(The second day)

*after near spending the entire night sleeping in the hospital he slowly wakes at 9:30AM in the morning*

Near : I feel a lot better now.... *near says to himself*

( and shadow don't tell me how to RP I been doing this for a long time now -.- the doctor knows what happens because Yarai told him what happens. )
Daybreak moved pass Luna and Yuki, and opened the door they left from.

Near? What happened to you!?


(Please do not be arrogant when I'm only giving advice. A doctor would not be sure simply over one mans word, as they would need confirmation from the victim, as well as get the police involved before making an assumption. On top of that, a doctor could lose their job if they spoke to their patients like they did Luna. But that's beside the point. The point was, using a different character to get information from another, or to change the perspective of a different character, souly because you control them both, is metagameing, and it's uncomfortable to work with. )
 

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Daybreak moved pass Luna and Yuki, and opened the door they left from.

Near? What happened to you!?


(Please do not be arrogant when I'm only giving advice. A doctor would not be sure simply over one mans word, as they would need confirmation from the victim, as well as get the police involved before making an assumption. On top of that, a doctor could lose their job if they spoke to their patients like they did Luna. But that's beside the point. The point was, using a different character to get information from another, or to change the perspective of a different character, souly because you control them both, is metagameing, and it's uncomfortable to work with. )
Near : hmm..... *near looks at daybreak*, im fine thank you...

(naa i appreciate the advise but i know what im doing -.- its not like effecting you in any way or shape now is it? )
 
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