^This #10charI really like this.
^This #10char
I actually really like the idea behind this. Here's a bit of CnC.
Sasuke's right hand being cut off looks a little off to me. Since I don't know what render/stock you used, it's pretty much impossible for me to say whether or not it you should have kept it. Just a thought. The positioning of Itachi's eye looks off. Really messes with the flow of the sig for me.
I truly wish I could have avoided cutting of the render, however the fact to the case is that the render ended shortly after that, The part I cut of showed the end of his arm holding his blade. However his blade was cut off and part of his hand as well. (Looking even worse.) Also, thank you for the CnC, I may or I may not work more on this style in the future. |