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Ok then xD

(Fuuton: Torikago ) - Wind Release: Birdcage
Type: Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Mid range
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: By performing two handseals, Rat -> Snake, the user will create a ball of dense Wind in the air above the opponent which is barely visible to the naked eye, but can be felt due to the energy of the Wind chakra it is gathering. Then by using shape manipulation, the user is able to form the ball of Wind into thin wires that spread out from the central point of the ball outwards into a dome of sharp, thin Wind-based projections that look like a bird cage around the opponent. Then by a snap of the user's fingers, the dome of sharp Wind projections would close in on the opponent with great speed, cutting him up within it.

Just perform it and ask questions if you have any.
 

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Ok then xD

(Fuuton: Torikago ) - Wind Release: Birdcage
Type: Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Mid range
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: By performing two handseals, Rat -> Snake, the user will create a ball of dense Wind in the air above the opponent which is barely visible to the naked eye, but can be felt due to the energy of the Wind chakra it is gathering. Then by using shape manipulation, the user is able to form the ball of Wind into thin wires that spread out from the central point of the ball outwards into a dome of sharp, thin Wind-based projections that look like a bird cage around the opponent. Then by a snap of the user's fingers, the dome of sharp Wind projections would close in on the opponent with great speed, cutting him up within it.

Just perform it and ask questions if you have any.
I start by gathering my chakra throughout my entire body before molding the gathered raw chakra to wind release chakra, I then also perform 2 quick hand seals and proceed to focus the gathered wind chakra into a small sphere which would hover above my opponents head, I then further manipulate the sphere with shape manipulation and cause it to take on the form of multiple wires of wind, said wires of wind would form as a birdcage around my opponent shortly before I snap my fingers causing the cage to contract and possibly slicing the target into multiple pieces of flesh, or rather mutton pieces if you will.




(Fuuton: Seishin-tatchi) - Wind Release: Spirit Touch
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user performs two quick hand seals and focuses a large amount of wind chakra into the air surrounding the opponent. The user then causes wind to gather behind the target and take on
the form of a large dark/evil spirit. The wind spirit would then raise its arms and wrap it around the opponent's body to force him into a submission maneuver, however, the effects of the wind is on a
minimal scale and would only cause several small cuts across the body (nothing fatal). As a result, the
target would be unable to move for as long as the wind spirit is holding onto him. The wind spirit takes time to form and can be felt in the atmosphere around the opponent. To maintain the form of the wind spirit, the user would have to
consistently feed chakra to it and any performance of another technique utilizing chakra would cause the
wind to lose form and disperse.
Notes- Can be used 3 times per battle.
- Size of the wind spirit is entirely up to the user, however it may not exceed a length of five meters
- Can only be taught by Yashiro.

Same deal z.z
 

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Dean starts by forming two hand seals, and immediately starts manipulating his Wind based chakra around the opponent. He manipulates his chakra to take the form of an evil spirit, which easily grabs onto the opponent. This spirit holds onto the opponent, causing several cuts but basically constricts the opponent.

z,z Thanks
 

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(Genjutsu: Spasticity) - Illusion Technique: Spasticity

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs a set of 4 hand seals and casts the target within an illusion, In said illusion the target would see it starting to rain across the entire battlefield, as the droplets of rain touches the targets body it undergoes a drastic change. The target would experience an altered skeletal muscle performance in his/her muscle tone, like an unusual "tightness", stiffness and/or "pull" of the muscles, making it hard for the target to grasp things like kunai's, swords etc, along with failure to perform hand seals and/or move around correctly. This change in body structure within the illusion would trick the opponents brain into believing that grasping things and performing handseals in reality is just as difficult, resulting in failure to perform hand seals and/or proper movement.
Note - Can only be used twice per battle.
- Effects of the illusion lasts for an entire turn.
- No genjutsu may be used in the following turn.

You know what to do....
 

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I'll just analyse it.

So after forming 4 hand seals the user will cast an illusion on the opponent. In this illusion, the target would see it start to rain, and should this rain touch the opponent, they would feel changes occur. The opponent would feel their body become more stiff, with the origin being in their own muscles. This would hinder their performance of hand seals and holding of weapons etc. It can last a full turn too, so that's a plus.

I would combine this technique with my Rain Release, making it more believable or maybe with Nekura technique, Rain of Stinging Wasps. It's a great Genjutsu overall. I don't have any questions on the technique, it's pretty clear.

PS: My first Genjutsu CJ >.>
 

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(Genjutsu: Kuishinbō oni) | Illusionary Arts: Gluttonous Demon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 from abdominal pain)
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals, placing the opponent under an illusion. Within the illusion, the opponent will start to feel the effects of Polyphagia, an increase in appetite, but to a greater extent than usual. The opponent will become so hungry that he would turn to start feeding on himself as a result of a hunger that can not be satisfied. The effects of the illusion are quite subtle as the hunger starts off quite simple and subtle, only causing a slight discomfort once the illusion has been cast. After a single turn, the hunger would be so extreme that the opponent would eat any organic material in order to satisfy the hunger that plagues him. This organic material can range from himself, to any tangible material, like wood from trees, and even the very soil or earth the opponent stands upon. Due to the severe hunger, this illusion forces the opponent to focus on subduing this extreme hunger and the opponent would go to any length to subdue it. Based on the materials eaten during this feeding frenzy, the opponent will suffer severe abdominal pain, and cause internal damage.

Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Lasts for two turns.
-Takes one turn to be activated, the next turn the effects will be felt.
-Can only be taught by Detective L

*Performs Technique*

As you start eating on your own flesh, I walk away whilst laughing.
 

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(Genjutsu: Sen'i No Akumu) - Illusionary Arts: Fiber Nightmare

Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a sequence of three (3) hand seals whilst focusing their chakra into the mind of their target. By making mention of the word "Retract", the genjutsu is activated, causing the target to start seeing and believing that suddenly all their clothing starts retracting/pulling inward and sucking their entire body sort of into a dark vortex, but more like the fiber within the clothing starts to retract and reshape into a tiny ball of cotton or wool, consuming the target's entire body. At first it feels as though the clothing is only getting tighter, however, not long thereafter or almost immediately thereafter, the clothing starts to completely squeeze the body, sucking violently inward and compressing the target's body into a small, hand sized ball of fiber. It consumes the flesh then moves to the bones, crushing the bones and compressing the entirety of the targets body into one small ball of fiber. The whole experience delivers excruciating pain to the opponent due to him believing what is actually happening to him. Should the fiber be allowed to completely retract, the target would completely lose his senses of sight and hearing, as the world around him darkens entirely with the target appearing to have been absorbed into a dark vortex from his point of view. With the fiber retracting, the target is subdued by the excruciating pain of having his entire body crushed and consumed with extreme force. At first, movement does not prove impossible whilst the clothes only starts pulling tight, hand seal performances and body arts are all possible. However, at the moment of the body being completely engulfed, movement is completely hindered to the point where hand seals cannot be performed and bodily movements completely restricted.

Note - Can only be used twice per battle.
Note - No genjutsu during the same turn nor the one thereafter.
Note - Can only be taught by Yashiro.

Any questions?
 

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Nah, its quite simple. With three hand seals, you induce the illusion and through the trigger word "retract", it all starts. At a certain point, the opponent's clothing gets retracted into a vortex like void, which pulls everything towards it. After a while, the opponent then becomes a ball basically, as it is all pulled that spot, which crushes everything as it does so. There are then a few effects, which are simply outlined in the technique.

(Genjutsu: Namekuji o taberu! ) | Illusionary Technique: Eat slugs!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A Genjutsu used mainly to mock or distract the opponent. With two hand seals, the user will induce the opponent in a Genjutsu, where the opponent would start to feel as though a large amount of slugs are situated in his throat, and they are moving towards his mouth, with gooey slime. Due to the human gag reflex, the opponent would feel the need to get rid of these slimy slugs by throwing up, and this allows the user to attack within this time window. The slugs keep on generating as one is released, making it extremely disgusting for the opponent. In reality, the opponent is standing still, as he tries to release himself from the Genjutsu.

Notes:

-Can only be used three times per battle.
-No S rank and above Genjutsu in the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Detective L.

Just analyse it.
 

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Nah, its quite simple. With three hand seals, you induce the illusion and through the trigger word "retract", it all starts. At a certain point, the opponent's clothing gets retracted into a vortex like void, which pulls everything towards it. After a while, the opponent then becomes a ball basically, as it is all pulled that spot, which crushes everything as it does so. There are then a few effects, which are simply outlined in the technique.

(Genjutsu: Namekuji o taberu! ) | Illusionary Technique: Eat slugs!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A Genjutsu used mainly to mock or distract the opponent. With two hand seals, the user will induce the opponent in a Genjutsu, where the opponent would start to feel as though a large amount of slugs are situated in his throat, and they are moving towards his mouth, with gooey slime. Due to the human gag reflex, the opponent would feel the need to get rid of these slimy slugs by throwing up, and this allows the user to attack within this time window. The slugs keep on generating as one is released, making it extremely disgusting for the opponent. In reality, the opponent is standing still, as he tries to release himself from the Genjutsu.

Notes:

-Can only be used three times per battle.
-No S rank and above Genjutsu in the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Detective L.

Just analyse it.
I think this technique is pretty useful for myself. Not only would the slugs be discomforting for the opponent but the user could make the opponent feel as though he is choking on it as well? Perhaps. Furthermore, it does not deal any damage making it basically a distraction based illusion for a more fatal attack. The affects of it could also be made much worst when layered with another illusion.
 

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Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User performs a sequence of three hand seals and focuses their chakra into the opponent's chakra network. Once the illusion has been cast, It begins the affects on a subtle scale at first before escalating into one gruesome illusion yet beautiful at the same time. During the turn the illusion has been cast, the target would experience a tingling sensation within their bodies, almost as if a seed had begun sprouting it's roots through the body. The target would also have his sense of smell disrupted by the smell of flowers and pollen, compelling the target to sneeze constantly, which in fact would also disrupt the targets sense of sight as with each sneeze the eyes automatically close. Following in the next turn, the roots begin sprouting into flower buds which escalates the affects of the illusion, now the sneezing becomes uncontrollable as the smell becomes even stronger. The target would even begin tasting the flowers overwhelming even the targets sense of taste. The taste of the flowers or roses depends on the user, for example, a tropicana rose for instance tastes like a blade of grass, the pale lavender colored roses have a distinct taste of Black Pepper where as the dark red ones have a faint soapy taste etc. the tastes depends on flower or rose being used for the illusion. During the following and final turn, the roots and flowers would have spread throughout the target's body, leaving no space for further development, the flowers/roses would then burst forth from the target's body, forcing it's way out and inevitably destroying the target's body from the inside out. Ripping apart every fiber of their being and delivering overwhelming and excruciating pain as the target nears death. In reality, during the final turn whilst the target feels as though he is dying, he only drops to the ground unconscious and completely at the mercy of the user.

Note - Can only be used once per battle.
Note - No genjutsu in the following turn.
Note - The illusion remains in affect for three turns, following the loss of consciousness in the third turn and the end of the illusion.
Note - Can only be taught by Yashiro



No questions on the technique, its pretty cool.
 
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