[Action] ★The Amazing Kaguya x Spider-Man Crossover Story★

Jack Skellington

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First of all.
Amazing idea,seriously creative.
Second of all.
Amazing writing.
Unlike some fanfictions,this one kept me interested and reading the whole thing! Twice!
Third of all.
Great story,it's awesome.
I am already waiting for the next part.
It is going to be awesome.
I already know.
 

The Amazing Spider Man

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First of all.
Amazing idea,seriously creative.
Second of all.
Amazing writing.
Unlike some fanfictions,this one kept me interested and reading the whole thing! Twice!
Third of all.
Great story,it's awesome.
I am already waiting for the next part.
It is going to be awesome.
I already know.

Thanks for reading and for giving your feedback. Your kind words encourage me to make more! Part 2 coming soon! =D
 

The Dreamer

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While I have to say this is creative and good job I'll also have to say you're making Kaguya a good person and why in the world would Kaguya sit down with them? xD She is mad she'd just ask where she is and if they didn't get her back in 3 sec she'd blow their heads off.
Also a slime Rasengan couldn't do a thing to Kaguya. o_O
 

The Amazing Spider Man

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While I have to say this is creative and good job I'll also have to say you're making Kaguya a good person and why in the world would Kaguya sit down with them? xD She is mad she'd just ask where she is and if they didn't get her back in 3 sec she'd blow their heads off.
Also a slime Rasengan couldn't do a thing to Kaguya. o_O

Slime rasengan can hit her it has senju chakra U_U She isn't sitting she is laying down thinking about her actions and reflecting on what she has done. You will see more development in the next chapter! =D
 
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