If you could be the writer of Naruto for a day what would you add or change?

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Just like what the title says.I'd probaly make the War Arc shorter but more exciting by giving everyone screentime instead of having Naruto solo the war effort.Then I'll have Obito's defeat play out in a different way with him dying when IT is about to start,BZ takes over his body and revives Madara using Rinne Tensei while the dream world is forming.Also many characters that don't serve any purpose in the story would get killed off in the Obito battle.

I'll also have Kaguya be mentioned way earlier since many people have a problem with her just showing up out of the blue.But since Obito already implemented IT Madara won't have to be the Juubi Jin and the whole body snatch thing won't occur since Kaguya would manifest from the Shinju itself.

What about everyone else?
 

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Easier said than done , as of what you said .


I would change nothing , oh wait , kill off Madara in Gokage's fight and make Obito final villain .
 

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Kill sakura

make sasuke above Universem lvl.

made him thus above Whills and beyond lvl of Dbz.


Sasuke on touches earth everyone dies and naruto has ended

Kishomoto : thankyou for reading my manga! i enjoyed making this manga for all of you fans! i hope you can...


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Easier said than done , as of what you said .


I would change nothing , oh wait , kill off Madara in Gokage's fight and make Obito final villain .
True,but this is just a hypothetical thread of what someone would like to change/add in the manga.But yeah Obito would definitely be the final villain.
 

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Dont kill MinaKushi
Make Sasuke famale
Fodder Naruto catching up with Sasuka..for love..
An awesome romantic story :flowers
 

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Kill sakura

make sasuke above Universem lvl.

made him thus above Whills and beyond lvl of Dbz.


Sasuke on touches earth everyone dies and naruto has ended

Kishomoto : thankyou for reading my manga! i enjoyed making this manga for all of you fans! i hope you can...


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Cool, I'm sure 6 year olds will enjoy your story. Tell us more about it when you have more time.
 

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Dont kill MinaKushi
Make Sasuke famale
Fodder Naruto catching up with Sasuka..for love..
An awesome romantic story :flowers
You know I would find the story really interesting if Sasuke was female,it'd make the dynamic of him(or her in this case) and Naruto that much deeper.
 

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Have space ships from the Galactic Federation arrive to arrest Kaguya for crimes against a planet, and they're all SUUUUUPER OP, and it's pretty much just aliens vs Kaguya who is also an alien and everyone else is just on the sidelines then she gets arrested and the aliens leave and Mugen Tsukuyomi is over and everyone has happy ending roll credits
"YOU ARE MY FRIEND, AAAHHH"
 

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Have space ships from the Galactic Federation arrive to arrest Kaguya for crimes against a planet, and they're all SUUUUUPER OP, and it's pretty much just aliens vs Kaguya who is also an alien and everyone else is just on the sidelines then she gets arrested and the aliens leave and Mugen Tsukuyomi is over and everyone has happy ending roll credits
"YOU ARE MY FRIEND, AAAHHH"
I don't know about anyone else but to me that sounds awesome for some reason.
 

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I would simply make it so it isn't all happening in one night, I always took issue with that, and I would add a few side villains that would be helping the bad guys out and some of the side characters can fight against them for screen time.
 

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I would simply make it so it isn't all happening in one night, I always took issue with that, and I would add a few side villains that would be helping the bad guys out and some of the side characters can fight against them for screen time.

Agreed,I think the War arc should have spanned over months even years.That way everyone would get a chance to shine and the battles would'nt be one sided.Of course I'd still keep it short by only showing the major battles though.
 
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Shorten the War arc .... and make slight modifications so that the Juubi Revival arc actually happens slightly after the main war during a Vigilant Peacetime phase.
 

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Kill Sasugay and Sakura
 

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Kill off: Sakura, Hinata, Kiba, Gai, Ino, Kabuto, Obito, maybe kill off Sasuke, Kill off more fodder and others, Maybe kill Kakashi. Keep Neji alive Have Minato and Sandaime actually killed from Juubito. Piss of the Indra/Ashura reincarnations. Piss off Sasuke meeting the Sage. The Juubi is not the Shinju... Cull Kaguya's and Hagoromo's horns. Cull that 3rd eye bs. Kill of one or a few of the Gokage against Madara. Naruto not as stupid and naive as he is. Add an actual Uzumaki clan background!! More too...
 
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