My Life

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My Life

Each passing day, I become more and more consumed,
by the cold and lonely dark, caused by my painful wounds,
the day I return to the light, never to come, that I had always assumed,
in my fleeting moments of happiness, the pain of loneliness is resumed.

They all tell me they know my pain, they know how it feels,
but in the end, I know better than anyone, that my scars will never heal,
that they will never know the pain or feelings I experience in my ordeal,
but they do know that my façade of happiness is unreal.

When they try and comfort me, I always ask in a melancholic tone,
‘where were you, when my heart turned to stone?’,
‘where were you, when I turned away from the world?’,
the answer to these questions, are something I have searched for my entire life.

Is my entire life just one of broken promises and the cold dark of loneliness,
for all that has happened over the course of my life, I have become heartless,
my friends are always there for me, though I am happy less and less,
my life is one spent in the lonely darkness, and one I cannot escape.
 
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There goes a saying, "Those who are heartless today, once cared too much." Btw, I feel you pain brother... really! :(
 

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Too much feels :(
 

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Amazingly written mate! :cool:
> Them feels tho! I know the lonely dark all too well..
 

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It was goood. Now something romantic please...
 

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It was goood. Now something romantic please...

You can read my other poems I've written as well. Some of them are romance. And thanks.

Amazingly written mate! :cool:
> Them feels tho! I know the lonely dark all too well..

Thank you.

Too much feels :(

lol.

There goes a saying, "Those who are heartless today, once cared too much." Btw, I feel you pain brother... really! :(

Whoever said that is very wise, and that is a very accurate description for many.

I feel your pain brother, I feel your pain. *puts fist to heart*

If you felt what I do, you would want to die.
 

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That's very good and creative .
 

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Reminds me of the line from a song. "Where were you when everything was falling apart?"

I can completely relate. Thanks for this man.
 

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Reminds me of the line from a song. "Where were you when everything was falling apart?"

I can completely relate. Thanks for this man.

No problem, happy you liked it. Though I'm not sure many people can relate to the problem I have, since I only know one other person who has the same issue.
 

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Take heart man...endure
OT: well written
 

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So deep
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It's awesome.... but I can't relate... :yeah:
 

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What sort of issues are you having?
 

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it was great keep up the good work
 

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Wow man thats some real shit!! +rep.
 
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