Another drawing(Obito & Rin) :I

[Υαmí]

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I've posted this before, but this is a finished version.Any tips or suggestions would be kindly appreciated!!! I have another drawing that I will trying to get up tomorrow

 

[Akatsukii]

I dont mean to sound mean but,Rin kind of looks like 30-year old male :|

 

[Υαmí]

Meh, I just drew her the way she looked......so, no worries

 

[Biju Mode]

Whats up with rins jaw? Maybe its my phone but she looks like a puppet on fraggle rock

 

[Arian]

I dont mean to sound mean but,Rin kind of looks like 30-year old male :|

their faces are both a bit off.. i guess thats why^^

 

[Υαmí]

Whats up with rins jaw? Maybe its my phone but she looks like a puppet on fraggle rock

From my prospective, the lips look a little off :/

 

[YokoKurama]

Mouths are a pain in the butt to draw.
I like it. The shading is excellent!

 

[Υαmí]

Mouths are a pain in the butt to draw.
I like it. The shading is excellent!

Thanks I couldn't get to be completely black :|

 

[YokoKurama]

Thanks I couldn't get to be completely black :|

Remember if you're going to make a part dark black just press on your pencil and color the section in.
Not too hard or you'll tear the page.

 

[Υαmí]

Remember if you're going to make a part dark black just press on your pencil and color the section in.
Not too hard or you'll tear the page.

Should I use a certain pencil?

 

[YokoKurama]

Should I use a certain pencil?

I only use mechanical, that's why mine is so dark.
Try that.

 

[Υαmí]

I only use mechanical, that's why mine is so dark.
Try that.

Ok!!!thanks again!!!

 

[YokoKurama]

Ok!!!thanks again!!!

Anytime sweetie!

 

[wanderingcactus]

They both looked great!

Tips: improve more on retaining shapes. Rins mouth seems lop-sided and hanging a bit low and Obitos open eye has a different angle compared to the rest of his face. It looks like its facing slightly forward rather facing to the side.

Everythings great just needs improvement on the alignment. Theyre kind of hard. I still cant get em right