Format of predictions:
Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura/Kakashi(narrow eyes at swirl): ?! (tense muscles)
[Obito falls down on the ground in front of Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi behind them.]
Kakashi: Obito ?!
[Naruto followed by Sakura rushes towards Obito as Sasuke stays in place with sceptical look towards Obito.]
Naruto: Obito ?! (reaches to Obito side)
Obito(looks schocked): Na...ru..to ?! *he looks differently and that power...*
Sakura: Obito, I will treat you right away. (kneels next to Obito)
Sasuke/Kakashi: ?! *his eyes... both are the sharingans ?!*
[Obito sits down keeping his face lowered with Naruto's help as Sakura begin healing him. Kakashi and Sasuke stay behind.]
Sakura: ?!*Obito's life force....it is diminishing at fast rate ?!*
Naruto: Let me help you Sakura (put his right hand at Obito's shoulder)
Sasuke: stop it Naruto !
Kakashi/Obito/Sakura/Naruto(turn to Sasuke): ?!
Naruto(confused): Why did you shout at me to stop ?!
Sakura(caring voice): Sasuke... he is no longer our enemy (acts in defence of Obito)
[Zoom in Sasuke's opened eye with other eye closed as he looks at Obito with piercing gaze]
Sasuke(sceptical voice): How did you escape and where is Madara, answer me Obito.
Obito: Well I got away with sheer luck I guess. Madara is still in other dimenssion... I trapped him. (weak smile) *Sasuke seems to not change... however look can be deciving as I can feel great power in his closed eye.*
[Naruto, Sakura shift their heads from Obito to Sasuke]
Sasuke(send piercing gaze): Good answer, but why don't you have the Rinnegan in your left eye ?
Obito: You have sharp eyesight, don't you, Sasuke ?
Sasuke(keep looking with intense gaze gives Obito's signal to continue): ...
Obito(sad and gulity): Madara stole The Rinnegan from me... but I used him lowering his guard to take my other sharingan and get away.
Sasuke: so that bastard is still in other dimenssion...
Naruto: ?! *Damn it.. I just noticed there is no trail of Black Zetsu... Obito's body is white.*
Naruto(cheering): You finally freed yourself from Black Zetsu influence, Obito. Yosh I will reinforce your life force Obito.
Kakashi(finally feeling like asking): Obito, I am glad you are back..., so Madara absorbed black Zetsu and took Rinnegan along.
[Obito's body looks like growing in strength as muscles tense and all wounds/scratches fade away]
Obito(looks at Kakashi): Sadly I failed but I have something more important to say...?!(get interrupted)
Sasuke: Take me and Naruto inside that dimenssion. I won't accept the fact that this bastard is still breathing.
Obito(widden his eyes): ?!
[Suddenly in thin air behind Obito cracks appear resembling shattered glass]
Kakashi: narrows his eyes (standp up) *I have bad feeling about it...*
?????: You won't need to do that
[Pillars of light shoot from the cracks which open up letting some light passing through the cracks.]
Obito(widden his eyes): ?!
[Everyone tense their muscles as Naruto and Sasuke take battle stances]
Kakashi(widden his eyes): Impossible ?!
[The cracks fully opens up revealing big square hole from which pillar of black light shoot off]
[Through the pillar of black light silhouette of figure similliar to Madara is shown.]
[The pillar of black light decreases as it fade away revealing full figure of Madara Uchiha with nine black orbs floating around him in halo like formation. ]
Madara: Did you miss me, Sasuke and Naruto (smirks in evil way)
Naruto/Sasuke(smiles): You will never learn, ehh Madara
[The pillar of black light completly disappear as well as hole..]
Madara: we will see who will laugh the last
[Zoom in Obito's mouth moving]
Obito: I am sorry Naruto...
Obito(suddenly raises his face as he widden both MS eyes): Kamui !
Kakashi: Naruto, get (get interrupted)
[The swirl pattern froms from Obito both eyes as Naruto stops next to Kakashi]
Naruto(smiles to Kakashi): away from him, well I fast enough to dodge even full speed of double Kamui !
Kakashi: *Impossible... Did he just escape double speed Kamui ?!*
Sasuke(smirks): *Not bad, Naruto*
[Madara comes out from the dust cloud as the wind is blowing the dust away ]
Madara(a bit annoyed): looks like I understimate you boys again.
Naruto(angry): Obito, what the hell are you doing ?!
Sasuke(narrows his opened eye at Madara): stop shouting Naruto, Madara had to do something to him.
Madara: Obito, You will take care about that Girl and Kakashi's brat.
Obito: As you wish
Madara: I will deal with Naruto and Sasuke myself (opens his both eyes revealing Rinnegan in both eyes)
[Powerfull shockwave comes from Madara as it spread around cause earthquake and some destruction.]
Naruto/Sasuke(opens his left eye revealing Nine tomoe Rinnegan): get ready, Madara
Naruto: Kakashi's sensei, you and Sakura take care about Obito... I and Sasuke will deal with Madara...
Kakashi: ?! don't be hasty... Naruto
Kakashi: *Damn...* Sakura, you heard Naruto, leave Madara to him and Sasuke we have to face Obito.
Sakura: *so this is our teamwork *sigh* Ok, I will support you Kakashi sensei !
[Naruto and Sasuke rush at Madara in flash blurred movements]
[Zoom in Sasuke's eye]
Sasuke: Yin release: Amaterasu !
Madara: ?! *This technique again...*
[Madara get hit by incredible dense black flames which sprout on his body from nowhere]
Madara: ARGH ! Shinra Tensei ! *It looks the same but it feel much stronger, cursed boy*
Naruto: Saiken !
Saiken: Right ! (image of Saiken is shown)
Naruto: Sage art: Melting Acid Rasengan !
Madara: ?! (notices approaching him Naruto from behind)
[Naruto slams his Rasengan into Madara's back who dodges flying at side]
Naruto: shit ! (reinforce one of truth seeking ball in black shield above him)
[Madara sprouts mechnical hand which slams into black shield as Naruto is shown falling down on ground.]
Madara: Bansho Tenin !
[Madara pulls Sasuke towards him ready to unleash chakra cannon from mechanical cannon he sprouted ]
Madara: Asura Path: Demon wave !
[Zoom in Sasuke's left eye is shown]
Sasuke: Space Time: Slow down of Time flow !
Madara: ?! (Madara movements are shown in slow motion giving Sasuke to time to intercept Madara with attack)
Sasuke(Sasuke's left eye with just six tomes is shown): Amaterasu !
[Naruto is shown jumping in Madara's direction as Sasuke jumps up from the truth seeking ball send by Naruto changed into platform]
[Madara snaps out as he takes big breath into his lungs as he weaves through handseals]
Madara(blows black fire): Sage art: Yin release Sphere of black flames !
[Big sphere of black flames get unleashed from Madara in Sasuke and Naruto's directions.]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (watch in disbelief as sphere of black flames expand in size)
Naruto: Matatabi !
Matatabi: ready !
[Naruto creates sphere made of blue flames as he moves towards giant sphere of black flames comming at him.]
[Sasuke raises his hand imbued with sparks of black lightining aiming with his fingers crossed into sky. thounder clouds are visible on the dark sky]
[Powerfull blast of lightining comes from Sasuke's hand straight into sky]
[Naruto thrust his right hand holding giant orb of blue flames into Huge sphere of black flames.]
Naruto: Sage art: Scorching hairball Rasengan of blue flames !
[Smaller sphere of Blue flames clash with much bigger sphere of black flames]
Madara: Futile... You can not stop me. My attack will burn everyone in radius of thousands kilometres, mwahahaha
Sasuke: Kirin !
[Powerfull lightining strikes blinding everyone around]
[Roar of thunder spread around after powerfull lightining strike]
Naruto/Sasuke: Shit ?!
[Struggling a little Madara is floating catching giant black lightining with hand rised above while he stretched his other hand in Naruto's direction.]
Madara: Don't understimate me, kids !
Madara: You danced well, but time to end it ! *They are very powerfull no doubt.*
[Shot on Giant sphere of black flames blowing out hurting greatly Naruto while small part of black flames are falling down at the ground around.]
[Shot on Madara swinging his other arm in Sasuke Direction unleashing intercepted Kirin straight at Sasuke]
Naruto/Sasuke: ARGH !!!
[Naruto and Sasuke hit the ground at huge speed]
[Dust rise into air completly shrouding battlefield]
[Dust fall down revealing bleeding badly Naruto and Sasuke]
[Through The dust curtain evil laughing Madara emerges]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! *His forehead ?!*
[Zoom in Madara's forehead revealing Nine tomoe Rinnegan]
Madara(evil laughter): The end of the world is close
Side text: Madara grows Nine tomoe Rinnegan in center of his forehead, What madness wait the Shinobi world?! [/B]
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676 - "False hope"
From the other dimenssion!PAGE ONE
[First scene shows Obito emerging from the swirl]Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura/Kakashi(narrow eyes at swirl): ?! (tense muscles)
[Obito falls down on the ground in front of Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi behind them.]
Kakashi: Obito ?!
[Naruto followed by Sakura rushes towards Obito as Sasuke stays in place with sceptical look towards Obito.]
Naruto: Obito ?! (reaches to Obito side)
Obito(looks schocked): Na...ru..to ?! *he looks differently and that power...*
Sakura: Obito, I will treat you right away. (kneels next to Obito)
PAGE TWO
Obito(raises his head barerly): Thank you Sakura.Sasuke/Kakashi: ?! *his eyes... both are the sharingans ?!*
[Obito sits down keeping his face lowered with Naruto's help as Sakura begin healing him. Kakashi and Sasuke stay behind.]
Sakura: ?!*Obito's life force....it is diminishing at fast rate ?!*
Naruto: Let me help you Sakura (put his right hand at Obito's shoulder)
Sasuke: stop it Naruto !
Kakashi/Obito/Sakura/Naruto(turn to Sasuke): ?!
PAGE THREE
Kakashi(show look sharing Sasuke's concerns): *Sasuke...*Naruto(confused): Why did you shout at me to stop ?!
Sakura(caring voice): Sasuke... he is no longer our enemy (acts in defence of Obito)
[Zoom in Sasuke's opened eye with other eye closed as he looks at Obito with piercing gaze]
Sasuke(sceptical voice): How did you escape and where is Madara, answer me Obito.
Obito: Well I got away with sheer luck I guess. Madara is still in other dimenssion... I trapped him. (weak smile) *Sasuke seems to not change... however look can be deciving as I can feel great power in his closed eye.*
[Naruto, Sakura shift their heads from Obito to Sasuke]
Sasuke(send piercing gaze): Good answer, but why don't you have the Rinnegan in your left eye ?
PAGE FOUR
Naruto/Sakura: ?! (shift their faces to Obito) *his eye... it is sharignan... not Rinnegan, Sasuke is right*Obito: You have sharp eyesight, don't you, Sasuke ?
Sasuke(keep looking with intense gaze gives Obito's signal to continue): ...
Obito(sad and gulity): Madara stole The Rinnegan from me... but I used him lowering his guard to take my other sharingan and get away.
Sasuke: so that bastard is still in other dimenssion...
Naruto: ?! *Damn it.. I just noticed there is no trail of Black Zetsu... Obito's body is white.*
Naruto(cheering): You finally freed yourself from Black Zetsu influence, Obito. Yosh I will reinforce your life force Obito.
PAGE FIVE
Sasuke: ?!Kakashi(finally feeling like asking): Obito, I am glad you are back..., so Madara absorbed black Zetsu and took Rinnegan along.
[Obito's body looks like growing in strength as muscles tense and all wounds/scratches fade away]
Obito(looks at Kakashi): Sadly I failed but I have something more important to say...?!(get interrupted)
Sasuke: Take me and Naruto inside that dimenssion. I won't accept the fact that this bastard is still breathing.
Obito(widden his eyes): ?!
[Suddenly in thin air behind Obito cracks appear resembling shattered glass]
Kakashi: narrows his eyes (standp up) *I have bad feeling about it...*
PAGE SIX
[The cracks begin to glow in black color as they spread.]?????: You won't need to do that
[Pillars of light shoot from the cracks which open up letting some light passing through the cracks.]
Obito(widden his eyes): ?!
[Everyone tense their muscles as Naruto and Sasuke take battle stances]
Kakashi(widden his eyes): Impossible ?!
[The cracks fully opens up revealing big square hole from which pillar of black light shoot off]
[Through the pillar of black light silhouette of figure similliar to Madara is shown.]
PAGE SEVEN
Naruto/Sasuke(cover their eyes glaring at dark figure emerging from pilliar of black light): ?![The pillar of black light decreases as it fade away revealing full figure of Madara Uchiha with nine black orbs floating around him in halo like formation. ]
Madara: Did you miss me, Sasuke and Naruto (smirks in evil way)
Naruto/Sasuke(smiles): You will never learn, ehh Madara
[The pillar of black light completly disappear as well as hole..]
Madara: we will see who will laugh the last
[Zoom in Obito's mouth moving]
Obito: I am sorry Naruto...
PAGE EIGHT
Naruto: ?!Obito(suddenly raises his face as he widden both MS eyes): Kamui !
Kakashi: Naruto, get (get interrupted)
[The swirl pattern froms from Obito both eyes as Naruto stops next to Kakashi]
Naruto(smiles to Kakashi): away from him, well I fast enough to dodge even full speed of double Kamui !
Kakashi: *Impossible... Did he just escape double speed Kamui ?!*
Sasuke(smirks): *Not bad, Naruto*
[Madara comes out from the dust cloud as the wind is blowing the dust away ]
Madara(a bit annoyed): looks like I understimate you boys again.
PAGE NINE
[Obito lands next to Madara as he cancel the Kamui make the swirl disappear. Madara has left horn as long as right horn while he keep his eyes closed]Naruto(angry): Obito, what the hell are you doing ?!
Sasuke(narrows his opened eye at Madara): stop shouting Naruto, Madara had to do something to him.
Madara: Obito, You will take care about that Girl and Kakashi's brat.
Obito: As you wish
Madara: I will deal with Naruto and Sasuke myself (opens his both eyes revealing Rinnegan in both eyes)
[Powerfull shockwave comes from Madara as it spread around cause earthquake and some destruction.]
Naruto/Sasuke(opens his left eye revealing Nine tomoe Rinnegan): get ready, Madara
PAGE TEN
Obito: Kamui ! (vanishes from the battlefield)Naruto: Kakashi's sensei, you and Sakura take care about Obito... I and Sasuke will deal with Madara...
Kakashi: ?! don't be hasty... Naruto
Kakashi: *Damn...* Sakura, you heard Naruto, leave Madara to him and Sasuke we have to face Obito.
Sakura: *so this is our teamwork *sigh* Ok, I will support you Kakashi sensei !
[Naruto and Sasuke rush at Madara in flash blurred movements]
[Zoom in Sasuke's eye]
Sasuke: Yin release: Amaterasu !
Madara: ?! *This technique again...*
[Madara get hit by incredible dense black flames which sprout on his body from nowhere]
Madara: ARGH ! Shinra Tensei ! *It looks the same but it feel much stronger, cursed boy*
PAGE ELEVEN
[Madara blows black flames off his body as the black flames get thrown away in air. Naruto emerges from behind Madara's back ]Naruto: Saiken !
Saiken: Right ! (image of Saiken is shown)
Naruto: Sage art: Melting Acid Rasengan !
Madara: ?! (notices approaching him Naruto from behind)
[Naruto slams his Rasengan into Madara's back who dodges flying at side]
Naruto: shit ! (reinforce one of truth seeking ball in black shield above him)
[Madara sprouts mechnical hand which slams into black shield as Naruto is shown falling down on ground.]
PAGE TWELVE
[Sasuke attack Madara from behind with black lance in his right hand but Madara dodge once again]Madara: Bansho Tenin !
[Madara pulls Sasuke towards him ready to unleash chakra cannon from mechanical cannon he sprouted ]
Madara: Asura Path: Demon wave !
[Zoom in Sasuke's left eye is shown]
Sasuke: Space Time: Slow down of Time flow !
Madara: ?! (Madara movements are shown in slow motion giving Sasuke to time to intercept Madara with attack)
Sasuke(Sasuke's left eye with just six tomes is shown): Amaterasu !
PAGE THIRTEEN
[Madara get ignited by black flames appearing on him as nine truth seeking balls moves towards him to shield him while chakra cannon passes next to Sasuke creating big crater on the ground][Naruto is shown jumping in Madara's direction as Sasuke jumps up from the truth seeking ball send by Naruto changed into platform]
[Madara snaps out as he takes big breath into his lungs as he weaves through handseals]
Madara(blows black fire): Sage art: Yin release Sphere of black flames !
[Big sphere of black flames get unleashed from Madara in Sasuke and Naruto's directions.]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (watch in disbelief as sphere of black flames expand in size)
Naruto: Matatabi !
Matatabi: ready !
[Naruto creates sphere made of blue flames as he moves towards giant sphere of black flames comming at him.]
PAGE FOURTEEN
B]Sasuke[/B]: *The oppening !* Yin release: bursts of lightining !(activate black lightining around his hand)[Sasuke raises his hand imbued with sparks of black lightining aiming with his fingers crossed into sky. thounder clouds are visible on the dark sky]
[Powerfull blast of lightining comes from Sasuke's hand straight into sky]
[Naruto thrust his right hand holding giant orb of blue flames into Huge sphere of black flames.]
Naruto: Sage art: Scorching hairball Rasengan of blue flames !
[Smaller sphere of Blue flames clash with much bigger sphere of black flames]
Madara: Futile... You can not stop me. My attack will burn everyone in radius of thousands kilometres, mwahahaha
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Flash of Black giant lightining forming at sky]Sasuke: Kirin !
[Powerfull lightining strikes blinding everyone around]
[Roar of thunder spread around after powerfull lightining strike]
Naruto/Sasuke: Shit ?!
[Struggling a little Madara is floating catching giant black lightining with hand rised above while he stretched his other hand in Naruto's direction.]
Madara: Don't understimate me, kids !
PAGE SIXTEEN
[Both Naruto and Sasuke put all of their powers into their attacks. Naruto try to increase size of Rasengan while pushing it, while Sasuke conduct more lightining into sky then shot it at Madara.]Madara: You danced well, but time to end it ! *They are very powerfull no doubt.*
[Shot on Giant sphere of black flames blowing out hurting greatly Naruto while small part of black flames are falling down at the ground around.]
[Shot on Madara swinging his other arm in Sasuke Direction unleashing intercepted Kirin straight at Sasuke]
Naruto/Sasuke: ARGH !!!
[Naruto and Sasuke hit the ground at huge speed]
PAGE SEVENTEEN
[Huge explosion occurs and incredible powerfull destructive wave spread around][Dust rise into air completly shrouding battlefield]
[Dust fall down revealing bleeding badly Naruto and Sasuke]
[Through The dust curtain evil laughing Madara emerges]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! *His forehead ?!*
[Zoom in Madara's forehead revealing Nine tomoe Rinnegan]
Madara(evil laughter): The end of the world is close
Side text: Madara grows Nine tomoe Rinnegan in center of his forehead, What madness wait the Shinobi world?! [/B]
END
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