DeDoll
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Hello guys i have idea for Manga. So i would like to know what you think about it.
SO what do you think about it
BTW: Probably i will writte in my language and ask for translate so it would be better written then this.
characters:
Place where everything happens:
Plot:
3 Main characters:
* First Twin lets call it now Senshi. Skilled at any type fighting. He living for his other twin brother.
* Second Twin lets call it Kutsuu. Low skilled fighter, but really ntelligent and know how to manipulate people.
* Aiko female, really beaudifull and strong personality.
* First Twin lets call it now Senshi. Skilled at any type fighting. He living for his other twin brother.
* Second Twin lets call it Kutsuu. Low skilled fighter, but really ntelligent and know how to manipulate people.
* Aiko female, really beaudifull and strong personality.
Place where everything happens:
Everything happening in near future after 3 world war, where human life don’t have big value for kingdom. And food resource is limited, always lack of food.
So here is system where poor people must fight in gladiator cage, for their lifes. Every person must win 3-5 fight to become free man.
So here is system where poor people must fight in gladiator cage, for their lifes. Every person must win 3-5 fight to become free man.
Plot:
When twins turn 16 they end up in life and death cage. Preparing for fights.
After some time Kutsuu time come up to test his destiny in cage.
And Senshi tells him that he don’t have a chance to survive it. So he offers to fight for him and after he will win games he will change place with Kutsuu.
So after hard fights Senshi wins, and then they change places and Kutsuu become free man.
After few days Senshi had to fight for his life and he win 2 games. And the his next opponent is Aiko. He look at her and he can’t raise a hand against her. So he look at Kutsuu, smiles and die. Aiko swing her sword and cut off Senshi head.
…
…
After some time, some thing happened. Kutsuu find out where is Aiko.
He enslave Aiko in his basement with chains. He blame her for his brother death. But he don’t want to kill her. He often come to talk with her. Kutsuu told her that her life belong to him [ because his brother show compassion and let her live wit his own life ]
And then their romance starts.
Second plot is how Kutsuu is trying to change system how he trying make revolution.
They often talks about it with Aiko.
And how i think now this manga have sad ending.
After some time Kutsuu time come up to test his destiny in cage.
And Senshi tells him that he don’t have a chance to survive it. So he offers to fight for him and after he will win games he will change place with Kutsuu.
So after hard fights Senshi wins, and then they change places and Kutsuu become free man.
After few days Senshi had to fight for his life and he win 2 games. And the his next opponent is Aiko. He look at her and he can’t raise a hand against her. So he look at Kutsuu, smiles and die. Aiko swing her sword and cut off Senshi head.
…
…
After some time, some thing happened. Kutsuu find out where is Aiko.
He enslave Aiko in his basement with chains. He blame her for his brother death. But he don’t want to kill her. He often come to talk with her. Kutsuu told her that her life belong to him [ because his brother show compassion and let her live wit his own life ]
And then their romance starts.
Second plot is how Kutsuu is trying to change system how he trying make revolution.
They often talks about it with Aiko.
And how i think now this manga have sad ending.
SO what do you think about it
BTW: Probably i will writte in my language and ask for translate so it would be better written then this.
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